-----/// Main saath kaise nibhaaun /// ----- Hriday

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Mere kisi khaas dost ne kahaa kuch alag likhne ki koshish karo... ye ek koshish hai... . ye kisi aise ladki ke baare me soch ke likha hai jo pyaar to karti hai par apna ghar nahi chhod sakti pyaar ke liye... padhe aur bataayen ki meri ye koshish aap sab ko kaisi lagi...!!!


haan main tumhe chaahti hoon, par tumhe yaki kaise dilaaun,
jinhone janm diya hai mujhe, unhe main chhod ke kaise aaun,

jhoot nahi mere is baat me ki main chaahungi tumhe ta_umra,
mere is chaahat me jo sachchaai hai, tumhe kaise samjhaaun,

thamaa thaa haath is ummeed se ki main saath nibhaa paaungi,
chhod ke saath maa paapaa ka tumhaaraa saath kaise nibhaaun,

jo lamhe tumhaare saath guzaare the unhe bhulaa naa paaungi,
wo rishte jo bachpan se saath hain unhe main kaise bhulaaun,

tumhaaraa saath paanaa hai, par unka saath na chhod paaungi,
tod dun dilon ko berehmi se main aise andaaz kahaan se laaun,

naa hi main tum bin jee sakti hoon, na main tum bin mar paaun,
kaho naa, laachaar aise haalat me main aansoo kyun na bahaaun,

maa paapaa ke saath rahun main yaa saath tumhaare main aajaaun,
main jee to lu par koi khushi na hogi, kyun na main mar jaaaun...

*****HRIDAY*****
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«Reply #1 on: June 13, 2012, 12:08:12 PM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai aapne hriday jee
aapki koshish kaamyaab rahee hai.
behad umda..dil ko chooti lines..
par end..use marna nahee. jeena hai..duaayen uske liye..
pyar ke liye jeena hai..hai na.
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«Reply #2 on: June 13, 2012, 12:12:05 PM »
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kuch wo feelings jo wakai ek ladki ke dil me hulchal macha deti hai ja ye mauka aata hai..... bakhubi bayaan kiya hai aapne inn ehsaason ko.... kp ... hum khush hue ye padhkar ..... tongue3
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«Reply #3 on: June 13, 2012, 12:46:13 PM »
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Hriday ji bahut zabardast aur bahut khubsurat rachna......dhero salam aur dhero daad ...... Bht bht mubarak ho
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«Reply #4 on: June 13, 2012, 02:24:06 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on June 13, 2012, 11:48:36 AM
Mere kisi khaas dost ne kahaa kuch alag likhne ki koshish karo... ye ek koshish hai... . ye kisi aise ladki ke baare me soch ke likha hai jo pyaar to karti hai par apna ghar nahi chhod sakti pyaar ke liye... padhe aur bataayen ki meri ye koshish aap sab ko kaisi lagi...!!!


haan main tumhe chaahti hoon, par tumhe yaki kaise dilaaun,
jinhone janm diya hai mujhe, unhe main chhod ke kaise aaun,

jhoot nahi mere is baat me ki main chaahungi tumhe ta_umra,
mere is chaahat me jo sachchaai hai, tumhe kaise samjhaaun,

thamaa thaa haath is ummeed se ki main saath nibhaa paaungi,
chhod ke saath maa paapaa ka tumhaaraa saath kaise nibhaaun,

jo lamhe tumhaare saath guzaare the unhe bhulaa naa paaungi,
wo rishte jo bachpan se saath hain unhe main kaise bhulaaun,

tumhaaraa saath paanaa hai, par unka saath na chhod paaungi,
tod dun dilon ko berehmi se main aise andaaz kahaan se laaun,

naa hi main tum bin jee sakti hoon, na main tum bin mar paaun,
kaho naa, laachaar aise haalat me main aansoo kyun na bahaaun,

maa paapaa ke saath rahun main yaa saath tumhaare main aajaaun,
main jee to lu par koi khushi na hogi, kyun na main mar jaaaun...

*****HRIDAY*****
Bahut bahut hi sunder tarikey se aapne us pyar karne wali ladki ke ehsaas ko bayaan kiya hai  jo ki kabiley tareef hi nahi Gaour farmaney layak bhi hai.. Kisi ke ehsaashoN ko apne khyaaloN se bandhna aur aur use ek creation ki tarah pesh karna bahut hi umda hunar ki nisaani hai Hriday ji .. Is qalaam ke liye main aapko dil se mubaarakbaad aur dheroN daad ke saath ek RAU bhi dena chata hun qabool kariye ga .............. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: June 13, 2012, 02:50:09 PM »
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bahut khoob Hriday ji
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«Reply #6 on: June 13, 2012, 06:13:26 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on June 13, 2012, 11:48:36 AM
Mere kisi khaas dost ne kahaa kuch alag likhne ki koshish karo... ye ek koshish hai... . ye kisi aise ladki ke baare me soch ke likha hai jo pyaar to karti hai par apna ghar nahi chhod sakti pyaar ke liye... padhe aur bataayen ki meri ye koshish aap sab ko kaisi lagi...!!!


haan main tumhe chaahti hoon, par tumhe yaki kaise dilaaun,
jinhone janm diya hai mujhe, unhe main chhod ke kaise aaun,

jhoot nahi mere is baat me ki main chaahungi tumhe ta_umra,
mere is chaahat me jo sachchaai hai, tumhe kaise samjhaaun,

thamaa thaa haath is ummeed se ki main saath nibhaa paaungi,
chhod ke saath maa paapaa ka tumhaaraa saath kaise nibhaaun,

jo lamhe tumhaare saath guzaare the unhe bhulaa naa paaungi,
wo rishte jo bachpan se saath hain unhe main kaise bhulaaun,

tumhaaraa saath paanaa hai, par unka saath na chhod paaungi,
tod dun dilon ko berehmi se main aise andaaz kahaan se laaun,

naa hi main tum bin jee sakti hoon, na main tum bin mar paaun,
kaho naa, laachaar aise haalat me main aansoo kyun na bahaaun,

maa paapaa ke saath rahun main yaa saath tumhaare main aajaaun,
main jee to lu par koi khushi na hogi, kyun na main mar jaaaun...

*****HRIDAY*****

hriday ji main uss ladki ke iss khyaal ko salute karta hoon aur aap ne jiss tarah likha hai iss kalaam ko yaqeen maane 10 rau de doon per 1 hi de sakta hoon. veriiiiiiiiiiiiiiii naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaice
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«Reply #7 on: June 13, 2012, 06:21:35 PM »
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kapil Jee Aadaab!


Janab kia kahne aapke ... gazab ke ahsaas O khayaal bune hai..
bahut hi khoob Sahaab... pichle janam meiN kia ladki the.. tongue3
Jo itna gehrai tak soch liya .... Usual Smile
Bahut khoob... behad umdaa khayaalat aur khoob bayaani rahi ...

Is khoobsurat kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile                  
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«Reply #8 on: June 13, 2012, 06:29:57 PM »
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sir bikul sach hai ye ....
meri gf ki majboori aaj mujhe itne ache se pta lagi

meri aadhi zindagani bta di aapne... Crying

salute sir or ek rau  tearyeyed
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«Reply #9 on: June 13, 2012, 07:00:32 PM »
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Bohat Khub! Ladki ke jazbaaton ko bohat aache se samjha hai aapne..!! Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: June 14, 2012, 03:40:33 AM »
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«Reply #11 on: June 14, 2012, 05:44:43 AM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on June 13, 2012, 11:48:36 AM
Mere kisi khaas dost ne kahaa kuch alag likhne ki koshish karo... ye ek koshish hai... . ye kisi aise ladki ke baare me soch ke likha hai jo pyaar to karti hai par apna ghar nahi chhod sakti pyaar ke liye... padhe aur bataayen ki meri ye koshish aap sab ko kaisi lagi...!!!


haan main tumhe chaahti hoon, par tumhe yaki kaise dilaaun,
jinhone janm diya hai mujhe, unhe main chhod ke kaise aaun,

jhoot nahi mere is baat me ki main chaahungi tumhe ta_umra,
mere is chaahat me jo sachchaai hai, tumhe kaise samjhaaun,

thamaa thaa haath is ummeed se ki main saath nibhaa paaungi,
chhod ke saath maa paapaa ka tumhaaraa saath kaise nibhaaun,

jo lamhe tumhaare saath guzaare the unhe bhulaa naa paaungi,
wo rishte jo bachpan se saath hain unhe main kaise bhulaaun,

tumhaaraa saath paanaa hai, par unka saath na chhod paaungi,
tod dun dilon ko berehmi se main aise andaaz kahaan se laaun,

naa hi main tum bin jee sakti hoon, na main tum bin mar paaun,
kaho naa, laachaar aise haalat me main aansoo kyun na bahaaun,

maa paapaa ke saath rahun main yaa saath tumhaare main aajaaun,
main jee to lu par koi khushi na hogi, kyun na main mar jaaaun...

*****HRIDAY*****

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Applause Applause Applause

rau haazir hai janaab
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«Reply #12 on: June 15, 2012, 07:45:39 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Mukesh ji... main aapka tahe dil se shukriyaa adaa karta hoon jo aapne mere is koshish ko waqt diya, padha aur pasand kiya... aur ye poem aapke dil ko chhoo gayi , isse zyaadaa khushi ki baat mere liye kya ho sakti hai... Thanks a lot...!!!

Ji bilkul main bhi yahi chaahta hoon ki wo jiye.. par bahut mushkil hota hai aise haalaat ko handle karna .. bahut waqt lag jaataa hai...!!!

Thanks a lot for the sweet comments...!!!

Quote from: mkv on June 13, 2012, 12:08:12 PM
Bahut khoob likha hai aapne hriday jee
aapki koshish kaamyaab rahee hai.
behad umda..dil ko chooti lines..
par end..use marna nahee. jeena hai..duaayen uske liye..
pyar ke liye jeena hai..hai na.
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«Reply #13 on: June 18, 2012, 03:09:04 PM »
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Main us dard ko poori tarha samajh to nahi sakta ..par ek koshish ki hai kuch hadd tak use samajhne ki... aapko pasand aayaa.. bahut achcha lagaa... thank you so much Kasak ji....!!!

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on June 13, 2012, 12:12:05 PM
kuch wo feelings jo wakai ek ladki ke dil me hulchal macha deti hai ja ye mauka aata hai..... bakhubi bayaan kiya hai aapne inn ehsaason ko.... kp ... hum khush hue ye padhkar ..... tongue3
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«Reply #14 on: June 19, 2012, 03:36:13 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Soudagar ji.... main aapka dil se shukriyaa adaa karta hoon.... aapne har baar mera saath diya hai... yunhi saath dete rahiye jisse hamaaraa hausla badhta rahega ....!!!

Quote from: soudagar on June 13, 2012, 12:46:13 PM
Hriday ji bahut zabardast aur bahut khubsurat rachna......dhero salam aur dhero daad ...... Bht bht mubarak ho
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