-----/// Main tanhaa hoon ///----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on February 26, 2013, 04:57:10 AM
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«Reply #15 on: February 28, 2013, 12:00:37 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Nandbahu ji.....!!!

bahut khoob
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«Reply #16 on: February 28, 2013, 12:07:48 AM »
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Very niceeeee par love guru ji aap tanha kaise hain aap to tanha kabhi nahi ho sakte aapkr lafz kisi ko bhi apna bna lein
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«Reply #17 on: February 28, 2013, 09:12:46 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Aarish ji.....!!!

kya baat hai bohut khoob daad qubool kareN
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«Reply #18 on: March 05, 2013, 12:47:26 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Sf ji... aapne bhi bahut bahut khoob likha hai....!!!

achi nazm hai janaab
daad daad

magar aap tanha kyun hain bhla?
!
dekh utha nzren ghumaa
bebas hai kitni
ye duniyaa
hain sbhee bheed me
yahan akele
paas khushiyon ki barsaat hai
magar
har nigaah me ik pyaas hai
na gila na koi hai shikva
magar
har ek yahan udaas hai

dost, ab kya kahen
chahta hai ik apna
mujh sa bhi shiddat se
kehne ko ye
ki dekh aakar
MAI TANHAA HOON !!!
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Be happy
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«Reply #19 on: March 05, 2013, 03:39:16 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Saini ji.....!!!

bahut sunder peshkash
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«Reply #20 on: March 08, 2013, 05:09:21 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Suman ji....!!!

Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
bahut khoob. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #21 on: March 09, 2013, 04:18:47 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Kya khoob likha hai aapne. But aisa kabhi kabhi hota hai ji.

Tanha tanha se the hum aur tanha thi yeh raat
Bheega bheega sa mausam dil mein thi koi baat
Woh paas hokar bhi meri dhadkano ko sun na paaye
Mat poocho kis tarah sambhale maine apne jazbaat


bahut bahut shukriyaaa Aqsh ji... haan us din jab likhaa thaa tab mood kuch down down saa thaa....Usual Smile aapkaa jawaab bhi khoob rahaaa....!!!

gum huye kuch yun samundar mein ki kinaare nahi milte
kisi ki aankhon se ab mohabbat ke ishaare nahi milte
bhatak gaye hain hum safar mein zindagi ke kuch yun
ladkhadaate rehte hain magar kahin sahaare nahi milte
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«Reply #22 on: March 10, 2013, 03:13:15 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Premdeep ji.....!!!

bahoot bahoot khoob hridayji
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«Reply #23 on: March 11, 2013, 07:24:53 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Mukesh ji.....!!!

Badhiya ..
khoobsurat nazm Applause
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«Reply #24 on: March 13, 2013, 12:33:49 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Anmol ji.....!!!

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #25 on: March 13, 2013, 08:36:46 PM »
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thank you soooo much Ritesh ji.....!!!

superb very very nice ji..Usual Smile
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«Reply #26 on: March 14, 2013, 10:19:43 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Rajan ji.....!!!

bhut khub ji
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«Reply #27 on: March 14, 2013, 10:59:53 PM »
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अति सुंदर
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«Reply #28 on: March 24, 2013, 04:25:47 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Hasan ji.....!!!

Applause Applause
 beautiful poem . Hriday ji , bahut badhaaai.
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«Reply #29 on: March 25, 2013, 10:23:15 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Ravi ji.....!!!

bahut khoob......
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