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by klaskar on August 21, 2010, 02:11:26 PM
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aaj bhi aisa lagta hai, aake seene se lag jaayegi tu,
naam tera pukaarun main, aur daudi chali aayegi tu,
tujhse chaahe dur hoon par dhadkan ab bhi tere paas hai,
tut gaye hain sapne saare par ab bhi tujhe paane ki aas hai,


mujhe rote huye na dekhle tu isliye main chehra chhupaata hoon,
har lamha main tujhe bas apna muskuraata hua chehra dikhaata hoon,
main nahi chaahta ki tu mujhe mere aansoo dekh ke chaahne lage,
main tujhse daya ki bheek nahi, mai to teri mohabbat chaahta hoon,


aaj bhi teri raahon pe main nazre bichaayen baitha hoon,
maine mohabbat ki thi tujhse main aaj bhi tujhe chaahta hoon,
wo gulaab jo tu ne mujhe mohabbat ke saath diya tha kabhi,
kitaab me rakhe us sukhe gulaab ki khushboo mehsoos karta hoon,


band kamre ki khaali deewaaron pe main teri tasveer sajaata hoon,
tere likhe geeton ko main aaj tanhaayi me gungunaata hoon,
aisi bhi kya naraazgi humse ki chhod gayi tu mujhko yun tanha,
main uparwaale se bas teri mohabbat ki ek nazar chaahta hoon,

tere aane ka aetbaar tha mujhe, main aaj bhi aetbaar karta hoon,
maine kahaa tha main intezaar karunga, main aaj bhi karta hoon...


edited by one of my friends... thanx dear...!!!


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«Reply #1 on: August 21, 2010, 02:21:23 PM »
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bht achcha likha hai aapne kapil ji...dard bayaan ho raha hai lafzon me
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«Reply #2 on: August 21, 2010, 03:56:52 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: August 21, 2010, 05:59:02 PM »
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Klaskar jee aadaab

Behad achchi kalaam laye hai aap shuruwat bahut achchi kii aapne waise hi last tak rakhte to maza aa jata....

Wel achchi koshish per daad janab....           
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«Reply #4 on: August 21, 2010, 06:21:08 PM »
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shukriya Parwaaz ji... koshish karenge aage behtar likhne ki...!!!

Klaskar jee aadaab

Behad achchi kalaam laye hai aap shuruwat bahut achchi kii aapne waise hi last tak rakhte to maza aa jata....

Wel achchi koshish per daad janab....           

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«Reply #5 on: August 21, 2010, 06:21:34 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji....!!!

bht achcha likha hai aapne kapil ji...dard bayaan ho raha hai lafzon me
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«Reply #6 on: August 21, 2010, 06:22:22 PM »
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shukriya Arif ji...!!!

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«Reply #7 on: August 22, 2010, 06:29:27 PM »
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intezar karte karte na jane
kitni sadiyaan beet gai hain

ab to aake dekh ja meri haalat
ab to nigaahein bhi pathra si gai hain

lafzon ki rawaani bhi ab dhundhli ho gai
mere khwabon ki tasveer bhi berang ho gai hai

aake dekh to sahi mere sanam ab to
mere hathon pe kisi aur k naam ki mehandi bhi lag chuki hai..
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«Reply #8 on: August 22, 2010, 08:01:30 PM »
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bahut pyara jawaab likha hai aapne.... meri kalam mera saath nahi de rahi.... tab bhi maine koshish ki hai kuch likhne ki.... pata nahi kaisi lagegi aapko....

intezaar tu karna mera,
main waada apna nibhaunga,
maut se bhi main ladke,
jaana tujhse milne aaunga,

baandh sake koi zor se tujhko,
aisi bani koi dor nahi,
pyaar se apne jeet lu tujhko,
tujh bin maangu kuch or nahi,

kesri rang se ranga hua hai,
haath tera to kya hai,
pyaar ke rishton ke aage,
saat feron ka bandhan kya hai,

rishta kisi se jod chuki hai,
us rishte ki koi buniyaad nahi,
kuch waaden kiye the mujhse,
kya tujhe wo waade yaad nahi,

mere liye to tu hi hai sab kuch,
tere siwa na koi dooja hai,
mere liye to tu hi ibaadat,
aur tu hi meri pooja hai.....
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«Reply #9 on: August 22, 2010, 08:07:53 PM »
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bina kalam k sath diye aapne itna achcha likh diya klaskar ji......

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«Reply #10 on: August 22, 2010, 08:17:01 PM »
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aapko sach me pasaand aayi kya... mujhe khud ko bharosa nahi ho raha hai... thanx hai ji... dher saara...!!!

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«Reply #12 on: August 26, 2010, 12:56:31 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Devangi ji... main tahe dil se aapka shukriya adaa karta hoon....!!!

wah kya likha he klaskar ji, kasak ne utna hi achcha reply diya he, or uske badle me aapne or bhi achcha likha he....

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«Reply #13 on: August 31, 2010, 10:31:29 PM »
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aaj bhi aisa lagta hai, aake seene se lag jaayegi tu,
naam tera pukaarun main, aur daudi chali aayegi tu,
tujhse chaahe dur hoon par dhadkan ab bhi tere paas hai,
tut gaye hain sapne saare par ab bhi tujhe paane ki aas hai,


mujhe rote huye na dekhle tu isliye main chehra chhupaata hoon,
har lamha main tujhe bas apna muskuraata hua chehra dikhaata hoon,
main nahi chaahta ki tu mujhe mere aansoo dekh ke chaahne lage,
main tujhse daya ki bheek nahi, mai to teri mohabbat chaahta hoon,


aaj bhi teri raahon pe main nazre bichaayen baitha hoon,
maine mohabbat ki thi tujhse main aaj bhi tujhe chaahta hoon,
wo gulaab jo tu ne mujhe mohabbat ke saath diya tha kabhi,
kitaab me rakhe us sukhe gulaab ki khushboo mehsoos karta hoon,


band kamre ki khaali deewaaron pe main teri tasveer sajaata hoon,
tere likhe geeton ko main aaj tanhaayi me gungunaata hoon,
aisi bhi kya naraazgi humse ki chhod gayi tu mujhko yun tanha,
main uparwaale se bas teri mohabbat ki ek nazar chaahta hoon,

tere aane ka aetbaar tha mujhe, main aaj bhi aetbaar karta hoon,
maine kahaa tha main intezaar karunga, main aaj bhi karta hoon...


edited by one of my friends... thanx dear...!!!


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«Reply #14 on: September 01, 2010, 02:46:16 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji.....!!!

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