Main terri kya hu...R...

by brokenbyluv on June 29, 2010, 07:03:12 PM
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Naa main tanha hu naa hi tujhse juda hu,
o merre ajnabi mujhe bus itna bata de ki main terri kya hu,

kabhi sisakti hui raat hu tou kabhi jalti hui subeh hu,
o merre ajnabi mujhe bus itna bata de ki main terri kya hu,

chaaro disha mein bhatakti khud se bekhabar si hawa hu,
o merre ajnabi mujhe bus itna bata de ki main terri kya hu,

terri hasrat hai dil mein merre per tujhi se sabse zyada khafa hu,
o merre ajnabi mujhe bus itna bata de ki main terri kya hu,

kehne wale kehte hai tujhe rahat dene wali ek haseen si ada hu,
o merre ajnabi mujhe bus itna bata de ki main terri kya hu,

har sawal ka jawab ek hi manzar dikhata hai jo bhi hu main terre hi ishq ki wajah hu,
ek baar sirrf ek baar mujhe bus itna bata de merre ajnabi ki main terri kya hu.........
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«Reply #1 on: June 29, 2010, 08:02:11 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji... mohabbat se bharpoor ye kavita aapki mujhe bahut pasand aayi... bahut hi pyaara likha hai...!!!

Koshish ki hai maine bhi kuch lines likhne ki... Ummeed hai aapko pasand aayegi...!!!

jisse meri har subha roshan hoti hai,
suraj ki wo pehli kiran hai tu,

jisse mere pyaase dil ko raahat milti hai,
baarish ki wo pehli boond hai tu,

jisse mere zindagi ki thakaan dur hoti hai,
peepal ki wo thandi chaon hai tu,

jise dekh main zindagi ke safar pe chal raha hoon,
meri wo pehli aur aakhri manzil hai tu,

tere hi hone se to meri saanse chalti hain,
tu meri zindagi hai, meri mohabbat hai tu...

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«Reply #2 on: June 29, 2010, 08:04:43 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya kapil ji aur bahut hi pyara reply kiya hai apne..abhii  tou ijazat chahungi per laut kar zarur reply karungi..take cre...
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«Reply #3 on: June 29, 2010, 08:08:13 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Geet ji... mujhe intzaar rahega aapke reply ka...!!!

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bahut bahut shukriya kapil ji aur bahut hi pyara reply kiya hai apne..abhii  tou ijazat chahungi per laut kar zarur reply karungi..take cre...
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«Reply #4 on: June 29, 2010, 08:41:37 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Shihab ji...!!!

Quote from: Shihab on June 29, 2010, 08:33:55 PM
Bahut Khub Brokenbyluv Ji
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Peshkash Bahut Achchi Hai...

Aur Klaskar Ji Aapne Bhi
Bahut Achcha Rep Diya Hai.


Khush Rahiye...


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«Reply #5 on: June 30, 2010, 07:24:34 AM »
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"Har Sawal ka jawab ek hi Manzar dikhata hai jo bhi hoon main tere hi ishq ki wajeh hoon"

Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoob Khoob Geetji..Har Sawaal Ka Jawaab Vakai Sirf yeh Ek Line Hi hai..Bahut Hi khoobsurat Ehsaas..

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«Reply #7 on: June 30, 2010, 10:21:02 AM »
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Bahut achhi poem hai BBL ji. Daad hazir hai, qubool farmyen.
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«Reply #8 on: June 30, 2010, 12:15:07 PM »
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aap sab dosto ka tahe dil se shukriya..aap sab k itne pyar bhare aur hausla afzayi karte comments padhke bahut acha lagta hai..bahut bahut shurkiya ek baar phir...
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«Reply #9 on: June 30, 2010, 05:23:51 PM »
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manna padega
aapki shayari behat nayaab...
Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: June 30, 2010, 05:40:24 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya reaper ji...
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«Reply #11 on: July 01, 2010, 07:07:22 PM »
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jisse meri har subha roshan hoti hai,
suraj ki wo pehli kiran hai tu,

jisse mere pyaase dil ko raahat milti hai,
baarish ki wo pehli boond hai tu,

jisse mere zindagi ki thakaan dur hoti hai,
peepal ki wo thandi chaon hai tu,

jise dekh main zindagi ke safar pe chal raha hoon,
meri wo pehli aur aakhri manzil hai tu,

tere hi hone se to meri saanse chalti hain,
tu meri zindagi hai, meri mohabbat hai tu...

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Kaash terre har alfaz pe main aetbaar kar pati,
kaash ki terri is masumiyat se main phir pyar kar pati,

koi gila tou nhi hai tujhse mujhe,
bus main apne jazbaato ka kaash tujhse izhar kar pati,

main nhi janti kyun khamosh ho gaya hai tu,
terre bin kitni adhuri hu main kaash main tujhse ye iqrar kar pati,

terre aane ki koi aas nhi hai mujhe,
terre kiye kisi waade pe kaash main ikhtiyar kar pati,

hamari manzil shayad kabhi ek na ho,
apne is darr se do ghadi ko hi sahi kaash main inkar kar pati,

merre liye takra jayee jo iss zaamane se..
tujhko iss kadar kaash main apna talabgar kar pati,

Kaash terre har alfaz pe main aetbaar kar pati,
kaash ki terri is masumiyat se main phir pyar kar pati.........
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«Reply #12 on: July 02, 2010, 05:19:14 AM »
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bahut khoob geet ji,as usual u share gr8 words Applause Applause Applause Applause thanx a lot


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«Reply #13 on: July 02, 2010, 06:11:22 PM »
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thnx alot shihab ji n baadal ji..
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«Reply #14 on: July 05, 2010, 01:35:28 AM »
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thanx a lot Baadal ji...!!!

Quote from: baadal102 on July 02, 2010, 05:19:14 AM
bahut khoob geet ji,as usual u share gr8 words Applause Applause Applause Applause thanx a lot


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