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«Reply #15 on: July 05, 2010, 01:36:06 AM »

bahut khoobsurat kavita likhi hai aapne Geet ji... lajawaab... bahut hi sundar likha hai...!!!

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yeh kaisa pyaar hai tumhaara jo tumhe pyaar pe aetbaar nahi,
kehti ho masoom mujhe par meri masoomiyat pe aetbaar nahi,

agar karte ho pyaar mujhse sachche dil se to darti kyun ho,
barso se saath hoke bhi kyun tumhe mujhpe aetbaar nahi,

chhipati ho sach mujhse aur kehti ho mujhse koi gila nahi,
toda nahi koi vaada par ab tumhe mere vaado pe aetbaar nahi,

kabhi tum subah se lekar shaam tak bas mera raah takti thi,
ab jaane kyun aisa ho gaya hai ki tumhe mera intezaar nahi,

kyun tum ab mere khamoshi me chhipa dard nahi samajh paati,
kya badal gaya hoon main hi ya tumhe ab mujhse pyaar nahi...

*****HRIDAY*****

Quote from: brokenbyluv on July 01, 2010, 07:07:22 PM

Kaash terre har alfaz pe main aetbaar kar pati,
kaash ki terri is masumiyat se main phir pyar kar pati,

koi gila tou nhi hai tujhse mujhe,
bus main apne jazbaato ka kaash tujhse izhar kar pati,

main nhi janti kyun khamosh ho gaya hai tu,
terre bin kitni adhuri hu main kaash main tujhse ye iqrar kar pati,

terre aane ki koi aas nhi hai mujhe,
terre kiye kisi waade pe kaash main ikhtiyar kar pati,

hamari manzil shayad kabhi ek na ho,
apne is darr se do ghadi ko hi sahi kaash main inkar kar pati,

merre liye takra jayee jo iss zaamane se..
tujhko iss kadar kaash main apna talabgar kar pati,

Kaash terre har alfaz pe main aetbaar kar pati,
kaash ki terri is masumiyat se main phir pyar kar pati.........


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Re: Main terri kya hu...R...

«Reply #16 on: July 05, 2010, 06:49:53 AM »

Lajawaab daur sawaal aur jawaab ka chal raha hai..... Applause

Jajbaaton ka sahi aur umda chitran ho raha hai... Clapping Smiley

Jaante dono hain kaun kiska kya hai
Phir bhee puchhte hain aetbaar nahi

Majbooriyen hain samaaj aur quom ki
Unse takraane kaa housla jutate nahi

Gile-shikve kar Ke dil behlaate hain
Dil k ghaav bas yu he sehlaate hain


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Re: Main terri kya hu...R...

«Reply #17 on: July 05, 2010, 07:30:14 AM »

Kapil Ji...Bahut Bahut khoob likha hai aapne..

Yoindia mein Aajkal bahut kam hi dekhne ko milta hai ke koi kisi ke saath likhe..Aapne bahut acha saath diya hai geetji ka,padhkar bahut acha laga hai..

Yuhi likhte rahiyega..Bahut Khoob


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Re: Main terri kya hu...R...

«Reply #18 on: July 05, 2010, 07:41:04 AM »

Quote from: brokenbyluv on July 01, 2010, 07:07:22 PM

jisse meri har subha roshan hoti hai,
suraj ki wo pehli kiran hai tu,

jisse mere pyaase dil ko raahat milti hai,
baarish ki wo pehli boond hai tu,

jisse mere zindagi ki thakaan dur hoti hai,
peepal ki wo thandi chaon hai tu,

jise dekh main zindagi ke safar pe chal raha hoon,
meri wo pehli aur aakhri manzil hai tu,

tere hi hone se to meri saanse chalti hain,
tu meri zindagi hai, meri mohabbat hai tu...

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Kaash terre har alfaz pe main aetbaar kar pati,
kaash ki terri is masumiyat se main phir pyar kar pati,

koi gila tou nhi hai tujhse mujhe,
bus main apne jazbaato ka kaash tujhse izhar kar pati,

main nhi janti kyun khamosh ho gaya hai tu,
terre bin kitni adhuri hu main kaash main tujhse ye iqrar kar pati,

terre aane ki koi aas nhi hai mujhe,
terre kiye kisi waade pe kaash main ikhtiyar kar pati,

hamari manzil shayad kabhi ek na ho,
apne is darr se do ghadi ko hi sahi kaash main inkar kar pati,

merre liye takra jayee jo iss zaamane se..
tujhko iss kadar kaash main apna talabgar kar pati,

Kaash terre har alfaz pe main aetbaar kar pati,
kaash ki terri is masumiyat se main phir pyar kar pati.........

Naa Jaane Kin Lafzon mein Main Iss Lekhni ki tareef karoon..Iss Kavita mein Majbooriyan,Kuch shikayatein,Kuch Masuumiyat se Bhare Jazbaat Hai..Mujhe Khaas Taur Pe Har Ek Line Dil Ko Chuti Gayi..
Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoob Geetji...

Aapki Ek line Ke Adhaar par Kuch Likhne Ki Gustaaki Kar raha Hoon Geetji..Agar Acha na Lage to Muaaf Kijiyega..

Aapki Likhi Yeh Line Sabse Khoobsurat Hai..

"Hamari Manzil Shayad Kabhi Ek Na Ho,
Apne Iss darr Se Do Ghadi Ko hi Sahi Kaash main inkaar kar paati"

Naa Jaane Kis Rang mein
Main Zindagi Ki Yeh Tasveer Banau...

Tere Aur kareeb Aau,
Yaa Tujhse Aur Door Ho Jaau..

Main Jaanta Hoon haal-e-dil Apna
Par Aakhir Kin Lafzon mein Apna Haal-e-dil Tujhe Sunau...

Duniya ke iss bheed mein tujhko Hi dhoondhte Rehta Hoon,
Aarzoo Bas itni si Hai ke Teri Rooh Mein Main Kho Jaau...

Inn Haathon Ki Lakeeron mein Tujhe Qaid kar loon,
Apne mutaabik Kaash main Khuda Se Apna Naseeb Likhau...

Kisi Din Hum Juda Ho bhi jaaye To Ashq Na Bahaana!!!!!!
Mujhe Sirf Yaad karna Aur main tere Laboon Par Hurdam Muskuraoo...


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Re: Main terri kya hu...R...

«Reply #19 on: July 06, 2010, 03:24:22 PM »

Quote from: KOYAL46 on July 05, 2010, 06:49:53 AM

Lajawaab daur sawaal aur jawaab ka chal raha hai..... Applause

Jajbaaton ka sahi aur umda chitran ho raha hai... Clapping Smiley

thnx alot koyal...sach kaha tune majburiya tou hai per samaaj aur kom k sath sath aur b kayi chizo ki,waise ye pyar kab in jaat ya kisi dharam ko manta hai...uper wala jinki kismat ek sath baandh deta hai unhe milne se koi nhi rok pata...


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«Reply #20 on: July 06, 2010, 03:30:57 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on July 05, 2010, 07:30:14 AM

Main bhi bahut bahut shukar guzar hu aap teeno ki khwaish ji,kapil ji aur koyal ki aap teeno ne merre kaam ko pasand kiya aur merre is thread pe merra sath diya...


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Re: Main terri kya hu...R...

«Reply #21 on: July 06, 2010, 03:40:11 PM »

Quote from: klaskar on July 05, 2010, 01:36:06 AM

bahut khoobsurat kavita likhi hai aapne Geet ji... lajawaab... bahut hi sundar likha hai...!!!

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shukriya kapil ji aur bahut khoob reply kiya hai apne...

Pyar tou tujhse kal bhi tha aur aaj bhi hai,
aetbaar tujhpe kal bhi tha aaj bhi hai,

na kabhi terri wafa pe maine shak kiya,
aur na hi terre pyar pe kisi aur ko haq diya,

terri kuch waqt ki khamoshi ne mujhe tadpa diya tha,
kuch palo ko tujhse hi ajnabi bana diya tha,

per ab merre dilbar mujhe tujhpe aetbaar hai,
aaj sache dil se kehti hu ki haan mujhe tujhse pyar hai.........


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«Reply #22 on: July 06, 2010, 05:06:40 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on July 05, 2010, 07:41:04 AM

Tahe dil se apka shukriya khwaish ji..apne bhi bahut hi khubsurat alfazo se apna haal-e-dil bayan kiya hai...

Ye mhbt ki hai takdir kuch pechida merre dost,
har safar ek naya mod hai aata,

kahiin haasil nhi ho pati manzil pyar mein,
tou kabhi bin mange hai sab kuch mil jata,

khuda se har sajde mein sath ishq ka mangte hai diwane,
aur kisiki arzu mein hai har aashiq khuda k aage apna sir jhukata,

per himmat se har mushkil ko asan banaya jaa sakta hai,
waqt tou har kasauti pe hai diwano ko azmaata,

tum bhi ishq ki iss uljhan se jald hi nikal jaoge dost..
kyunki imtihaan hi hai jo insaan ko har kadam hai mazbut banata.........


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Re: Main terri kya hu...R...

«Reply #23 on: July 10, 2010, 09:31:44 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya Khwaish ji... bahut achcha laga jaanke ki aapne apne kimti waqt me se thoda sa waqt nikaal ke hamare is thread ko diya , ise padha aur pasand kiya... main tahe dil se aapka shukriya adaa karta hoon... sahi kaha aapne ki aajkal bahut kam dekhne ko milta hai ki koi kisi ke saath likhe YO me... agar koi saath deta hai to likhne ka alag hi aanand aata hai... ek baar fir se shukriya Khwaish ji...!!!

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Re: Main terri kya hu...R...

«Reply #24 on: July 10, 2010, 09:34:54 AM »

bahut bahut khoobsurat kavita likhi hai aapne Khwaish ji... ek ek line mohabbat se bharpoor hai... bahut hi khoob...!!!

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Quote from: khwaish on July 05, 2010, 07:41:04 AM

Naa Jaane Kis Rang mein
Main Zindagi Ki Yeh Tasveer Banau...

Tere Aur kareeb Aau,
Yaa Tujhse Aur Door Ho Jaau..

Main Jaanta Hoon haal-e-dil Apna
Par Aakhir Kin Lafzon mein Apna Haal-e-dil Tujhe Sunau...

Duniya ke iss bheed mein tujhko Hi dhoondhte Rehta Hoon,
Aarzoo Bas itni si Hai ke Teri Rooh Mein Main Kho Jaau...

Inn Haathon Ki Lakeeron mein Tujhe Qaid kar loon,
Apne mutaabik Kaash main Khuda Se Apna Naseeb Likhau...

Kisi Din Hum Juda Ho bhi jaaye To Ashq Na Bahaana!!!!!!
Mujhe Sirf Yaad karna Aur main tere Laboon Par Hurdam Muskuraoo...


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Re: Main terri kya hu...R...

«Reply #25 on: July 10, 2010, 09:38:21 AM »

bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji... bahut hi khoob...!!!

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Re: Main terri kya hu...R...

«Reply #26 on: July 10, 2010, 09:39:20 AM »

U r welcome Geet ji... aur shukriya hamari kavita pasand karne ke liye...!!!

Aur har baar ki tarha is bar bhi bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne...!!!!!!

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mann karta hai mera tujhe main baahon me bhar loon,
sochta hoon tere pyaar se main bhi pyaar kar loon,

kabse ye baahen meri sooni hain tujhe kaise bataun,
tujhse ek baar milke apni hasratein poori kar loon,

har subah, har shaam bas ek khwaab dekha karta hoon,
meri jaan tujhe har janam me apni zindagi bana loon,

tere nasheeley hothon pe jo paani ki ek boond si hai,
ji karta hai usi boond se main apni pyaas bujha loon,

tere samundar jaisi aankhon me itna gehra paani hai,
mera ji karta hai usi paani me aaj doobki laga loon,

mann karta hai mera tujhe main baahon me bhar loon,
sochta hoon tere pyaar se main bhi pyaar kar loon...

*****HRIDAY*****

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Re: Main terri kya hu...R...

«Reply #27 on: July 10, 2010, 09:53:11 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya Koyal ji...aur bahut khoob likha hai aapne...!!!

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sach kaha hai tumne Koyal ki hum dil behlaate hain,
kuch gile shikwe baantke bas ghaaw sehlaate hain,

koshish to har baar karte hain ki thodi himmat juta le,
par har baar kuch na kuch wajah se hum haar jaate hain,

kabhi halaat ko doshi kehte hain to kabhi hum waqt ko,
aur inhi ka bahana leke hum pyaar ko bhool jaate hain,

hota aksar yahi hai ki pyaar koi karta to bas rota hai,
unki haalat dekh ke bhi hum bekhauff pyaar karte hain,

kuch mahino saal k saath rehne ke baad ehsaas hota hai,
pyaar wo humse nahi karte hum to bas ek tarfa karte hain,

agar koi karta hai pyaar sachche dil se to dar kaisa fir,
wo agar chaahe to har jang mohabbat se hi jeet jaate hain...

Quote from: KOYAL46 on July 05, 2010, 06:49:53 AM

Lajawaab daur sawaal aur jawaab ka chal raha hai..... Applause

Jajbaaton ka sahi aur umda chitran ho raha hai... Clapping Smiley


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«Reply #28 on: July 10, 2010, 10:37:49 AM »

aAPKA BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA gEET-DI FOR UNDERSTANDING AND SUPPORTING MY POINT OF VIEW.... icon_flower

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«Reply #29 on: July 10, 2010, 10:51:54 AM »

Bahut khoob jawaab diya hai aapne Klaskar-ji..... Applause

Sach ko maan lena achhi baat hai.... Winking

Sangharsh he zindagi ka dusaraa naam hai..... hello

Quote from: klaskar on July 10, 2010, 09:53:11 AM

bahut bahut shukriya Koyal ji...aur bahut khoob likha hai aapne...!!!

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sach kaha hai tumne Koyal ki hum dil behleete hain,
kuch gile shikwe baantke bas ghaaw sehlaate hain,

koshish to har baar karte hain ki thodi himmat juta le,
par har baar kuch na kuch wajah se hum haar jaate hain,

kabhi halaat ko doshi kehte hain to kabhi hum waqt ko,
aur inhi ka bahana leke hum pyaar ko bhool jaate hain,

hota aksar yahi hai ki pyaar koi karta to bas rota hai,
unki haalat dekh ke bhi hum bekhauff pyaar karte hain,

kuch mahino saal k saath rehne ke baad ehsaas hota hai,
pyaar wo humse nahi karte hum to bas ek tarfa karte hain,

agar koi karta hai pyaar sachche dil se to dar kaisa fir,
wo agar chaahe to har jang mohabbat se hi jeet jaate hain...


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