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«Reply #30 on: July 10, 2010, 09:00:38 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Koyal ji...!!!

Quote from: KOYAL46 on July 10, 2010, 10:51:54 AM
Bahut khoob jawaab diya hai aapne Klaskar-ji..... Applause Applause Applause
Sach ko maan lena achhi baat hai.... Winking Winking Winking
Sangharsh he zindagi ka dusaraa naam hai..... hello hello hello
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«Reply #31 on: July 10, 2010, 10:02:43 PM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai aap ne Geet Ji

N Everybody else has contributed well

Especially Kapil
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«Reply #32 on: July 11, 2010, 11:52:36 AM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on July 10, 2010, 10:37:49 AM
aAPKA BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA gEET-DI FOR UNDERSTANDING AND SUPPORTING MY POINT OF VIEW.... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower wave wave wave hello hello hello hello

Ur alwayz welcome sweety..
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«Reply #33 on: July 11, 2010, 11:53:16 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on July 10, 2010, 10:02:43 PM
Bahut khoob likha hai aap ne Geet Ji

N Everybody else has contributed well

Especially Kapil

bahut bahut shukriya rajesh ji..
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«Reply #34 on: July 12, 2010, 07:01:16 AM »
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thank you so much Rajesh ji...!!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on July 10, 2010, 10:02:43 PM
Bahut khoob likha hai aap ne Geet Ji

N Everybody else has contributed well

Especially Kapil
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«Reply #35 on: July 12, 2010, 07:32:46 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on July 10, 2010, 09:39:20 AM
U r welcome Geet ji... aur shukriya hamari kavita pasand karne ke liye...!!!

Aur har baar ki tarha is bar bhi bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne...!!!!!!

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

mann karta hai mera tujhe main baahon me bhar loon,
sochta hoon tere pyaar se main bhi pyaar kar loon,

kabse ye baahen meri sooni hain tujhe kaise bataun,
tujhse ek baar milke apni hasratein poori kar loon,

har subah, har shaam bas ek khwaab dekha karta hoon,
meri jaan tujhe har janam me apni zindagi bana loon,

tere nasheeley hothon pe jo paani ki ek boond si hai,
ji karta hai usi boond se main apni pyaas bujha loon,

tere samundar jaisi aankhon me itna gehra paani hai,
mera ji karta hai usi paani me aaj doobki laga loon,

mann karta hai mera tujhe main baahon me bhar loon,
sochta hoon tere pyaar se main bhi pyaar kar loon...


*****HRIDAY*****


bahut bahut shukriya kapil ji aur apne bhi umda reply diya hai...


Terre dil ki iss tadap aur bekrari se main bhi wakif hu,
tujhme bas jane ki ek khwaish merri bhi hai,

jo lamha hum dono ko aur kareeb le aaye,
us lamhe k jald hi aane ki sifarish merri bhi hai,

har peher terre khwab ankho hone k baad bhi,
tujhse door rehene ki ranjidah ranjish merri bhi hai,

jahan koi bandhan hamari mhbt ko ruswa na kar sake,
ae khuda aese ek jahan ki guzarish merri bhi hai,

ab tou tujhe pane ki arzu bebaak hai iss dil mein,
per tujhe pane k sath sath ishq k nagar mein mhbt ki aazmaish merri bhi hai.........

Bebaak-fearless,bina kisi darr k...
ranjish-sorrow,dard,
ranjidah-sadness,udasi......
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«Reply #36 on: July 14, 2010, 01:36:29 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Geet ji aur aapke bhi jawaab ka jawaab nahi...!!!!!!

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

aadat hai us bhagwaan ki humein sataane ki,
khushiyon dene se pehle humein rulaane ki,

ghadi ab ye hamaari bhi aazmaish ki hi hai,
ye hasrat hamaari hai tumhe jald apnaane ki,

bas intzaar hai ki ye ghadiya khatm ho jaayen,
wo lamha kareeb aajaye tumhe gale lagaane ki,

ab aur saha nahi jaata ye doori mohabbat me,
mar na jaayen hum intzaar me tumhaare aane ki,

wo to bhagwaan hai usse hum bhala kya kahein,
aadat to tumhaari bhi hai humein tadpaane ki....


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«Reply #37 on: July 14, 2010, 04:06:25 PM »
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good going keep it up........
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«Reply #38 on: July 15, 2010, 07:45:20 AM »
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Thanx a lot Smardia ji...!!!

Quote from: smardia on July 14, 2010, 04:06:25 PM
good going keep it up........
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«Reply #39 on: July 15, 2010, 08:31:29 PM »
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Shukriya smardia ji aur kapil ji abhi maafi chahungi jald hi laut kar apko reply karungi..
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«Reply #40 on: August 23, 2010, 08:35:39 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on July 14, 2010, 01:36:29 PM
bahut bahut shukriya Geet ji aur aapke bhi jawaab ka jawaab nahi...!!!!!!

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

aadat hai us bhagwaan ki humein sataane ki,
khushiyon dene se pehle humein rulaane ki,

ghadi ab ye hamaari bhi aazmaish ki hi hai,
ye hasrat hamaari hai tumhe jald apnaane ki,

bas intzaar hai ki ye ghadiya khatm ho jaayen,
wo lamha kareeb aajaye tumhe gale lagaane ki,

ab aur saha nahi jaata ye doori mohabbat me,
mar na jaayen hum intzaar me tumhaare aane ki,

wo to bhagwaan hai usse hum bhala kya kahein,
aadat to tumhaari bhi hai humein tadpaane ki....


*****HRIDAY*****

bahut khoob ji..


Majbur ye halaat hai aur merri zaat hai,
terre bin tanha aur mayus merri har baat hai,

sulgate hue sama hai bechain se merre jazbaat hai,
hum mhbt mein tou ek hai per haqiqat mein kahan sath hai,

mujhe milna hai tujhse tu hi merra aab-e-hayaat hai,
merra karaar hai tu aur tu hi merra maahiyaat hai,

terre merre darmiya adhure hai kuch ehsas aur adhuri si ik mulaqat hai,
tu hi merre pyar ka jahan aur tu hi merri khushiyo ki qaynaat hai.........





maahiyaat-nature,adat
aab-e-hayaat-nector,amrit
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«Reply #41 on: August 26, 2010, 06:12:32 AM »
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shukriya Geet ji... aapne bhi bahut hi pyaara likha hai...!!!!!!

 

mohabbat ki nazar me doori doori nahi hoti,
uske liye koi mulaaquat adhuri nahi hoti,

mohabbat wo rishta hai jo dil samajhta hai,
isme hamesha milne ki jarurat nahi hoti,

har kisi ko yahaan haasil nahi mil paata,
sabki kahaaniyaan yahaan poori nahi hoti...
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«Reply #42 on: August 30, 2010, 05:10:00 PM »
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shukriya ji..


Mohabbat mein kahaniya aksar adhuri rehti hai,
phir bhi kyun mhbt mein wafa zaruri rehti hai,
jis cheez ka koi ant hi na ho usme kaisa sauda..
dil tou wahan lagana chahiye jisme har hasrat poori rehti hai.........
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«Reply #43 on: September 02, 2010, 02:13:49 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji...
 Applause Applause Applause

haasil ka agar khwaab ho to mohabbat na karo,
mohabbat karke usko yun tum badnaam na karo,
anjaam kisi bhi cheez ka khuda batata nahi,
fikar ho agar anjaam ka to mohabbat na karo...
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«Reply #44 on: September 03, 2010, 11:30:17 AM »
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shukriya ji..


Ankho se dekho aur dil se sajao,
khuab hai dost tumhare inhe yu na satao,
jab kabhi koi khuab toot jaye ankho mein..
tou dekar uska sath use manzil tak pahuchao.........
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