main to ek khilona hoon...soudagar

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main to ek khilona hoon tut-ta jud-ta rehta hoon
pani ke lehr jaisa hoon uthta mud-ta rehta hoon

roshan karunga tujhe mujhse umeed na lagaa
main kam lou ka diya hun jalta bujhta rehta hoon

meri narajgi pe tu dil chhota na kiya kar sanam
main bache jaisa hon manta ruth-ta rehta hoon

mere dil ko aashiyan bna tu chahti h rehna par
kache ghar jaisa hoon banta tut-ta rehta hoon

khuda na bna mujhko apni paak mohabbat mein
main pathar jaisa hoon rulta fut-ta rehta hoon
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«Reply #1 on: September 11, 2013, 01:42:07 AM »
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Soudagar ji.Kya bat hai bahut khoob.bhai dil ko choo gaye.
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«Reply #2 on: September 11, 2013, 01:46:22 AM »
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Khoob .... Achchha likha .... Daad !
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«Reply #3 on: September 11, 2013, 02:07:26 AM »
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roshan karunga tujhe mujhse umeed na lagaa
main kam lou ka diya hun jalta bujhta rehta hoon

bahut mast likha hai karan bhai..dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #4 on: September 11, 2013, 08:50:27 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: September 11, 2013, 09:36:13 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: September 11, 2013, 10:42:27 AM »
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bahut khoob , soudagAR JI.
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«Reply #7 on: September 11, 2013, 01:15:03 PM »
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roshan karunga tujhe mujhse umeed na lagaa
main kam lou ka diya hun jalta bujhta rehta hoon

WAAH WAAH SOUDAGAR JI BOHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI,
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«Reply #8 on: September 11, 2013, 01:33:52 PM »
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waah waah waah kyaa kehne Soudagar ji....!!!
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«Reply #9 on: September 11, 2013, 02:57:47 PM »
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shukriya ravi ji
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«Reply #10 on: September 11, 2013, 03:07:27 PM »
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bahot achey, dheron daaad  Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
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«Reply #11 on: September 11, 2013, 03:36:41 PM »
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wah wah wah saudagar jee
bahut khoobsurat khayaal hai.
umda peshkash
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«Reply #12 on: September 11, 2013, 04:19:13 PM »
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«Reply #13 on: September 11, 2013, 08:53:56 PM »
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Wowwwwwwww zabardast peshkash soudagar ji.. kya khooooooooob likhe ho aap.. dil ko choo gayi aapki yeh rachna.. hazaron hazaron dili daaaaaad..

roshan karunga tujhe mujhse umeed na lagaa
main kam lou ka diya hun jalta bujhta rehta hoon

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«Reply #14 on: September 12, 2013, 01:57:54 AM »
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shukriya zaara sir
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