Main toota hoon to phir se mujhe bana ke dikha

by jeet jainam on February 16, 2014, 12:32:10 PM
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mout bhi to kam khubsurat nhi hoti hogi,kiyon ki,
jo koi bhi us se milta hai zindagi chore deta hai,,,,






Tu apne fun se meri chahat ko aazma ke dikha.
Main toota hoon to phir se mujhe bana ke dikha.

Tere badan me lahu banke daudta hoon main.
Tujhe khuda ki kasam hai mujhe bhula ke dikha.

Main itne dard me bhi sahi Kaha lagta hoon.
Tu ek dukh me mujhe sirf muskura kar dikha.

Tujhe to maine hamesha manaya hai lekin.
Main aaj rooth chala hoon mujhe mana ke dikha.

mari yaade reh jayengi mare baad,
apni zindagi ko khushi se jee kar ke dikha.

jeete jee to mahsoos na kar paye hame,
apne dil main mare pyaar ka ehsaas jaga kar to dikha....


            jj saini
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«Reply #1 on: February 16, 2014, 12:53:27 PM »
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Waah waah Jeet ji ....jajbaton ko aapne bahut hi khoobsurati se pesh kiya hai is rachna mei ..very well written Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: February 16, 2014, 01:04:21 PM »
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mout bhi to kam khubsurat nhi hoti hogi,kiyon ki,
jo koi bhi us se milta hai zindagi chore deta hai,,,,


boss!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ek saahab ne isee tarah ka jumla likha tha pahle .

    zindagee se sab ko pyaar hota hai aur marna koee nahin chaahata. aur dono hee apne haath me.N nahin hai isliye ye kahna ghalat hai kee maut khubsurat hotee hai ke uss se milne ke baad insaan zindagee chhod de.

                    na hum iss duniya me.N apnee khushee se aaye hain
                    na hum iss duniya se apnee khushee se jaaye ge.

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Tu apne fun se meri chahat ko aazma ke dikha.
Main toota hoon to phir se mujhe bana ke dikha.

Tere badan me lahu banke daudta hoon main.
Tujhe khuda ki kasam hai mujhe bhula ke dikha.

Main itne dard me bhi sahi Kaha lagta hoon.
Tu ek dukh me mujhe sirf muskura kar dikha.

Tujhe to maine hamesha manaya hai lekin.
Main aaj rooth chala hoon mujhe mana ke dikha.

mari yaade reh jayengi mare baad,
apni zindagi ko khushi se jee kar ke dikha.

jeete jee to mahsoos na kar paye hame,
apne dil main mare pyaar ka ehsaas jaga kar to dikha....


            jj saini

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«Reply #3 on: February 16, 2014, 01:19:22 PM »
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thanku akash sir ji
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«Reply #4 on: February 16, 2014, 01:24:55 PM »
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shukriya qalb ji,


ye kahna ghalat hai kee maut khubsurat hotee hai ke uss se milne ke baad insaan zindagee chhod de.

mane ye nhi kaha ki mout khubsurat hai, mane ye kaha ki mout khubsurat hoti hogi,zindagi or mout ka woqt sab pahle se taye hai,ye ap bhi jante ho,ismay ap koi bhi jhomle likho ye shayari woh alfaaz to apke hi honge na,ya woh bhi,kisi ki den hai
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«Reply #5 on: February 16, 2014, 01:36:32 PM »
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wha aur wha v. Nice jeet bro
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«Reply #6 on: February 16, 2014, 01:47:39 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #7 on: February 16, 2014, 01:57:14 PM »
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shukriya qalb ji,


ye kahna ghalat hai kee maut khubsurat hotee hai ke uss se milne ke baad insaan zindagee chhod de.

mane ye nhi kaha ki mout khubsurat hai, mane ye kaha ki mout khubsurat hoti hogi,zindagi or mout ka woqt sab pahle se taye hai,ye ap bhi jante ho,ismay ap koi bhi jhomle likho ye shayari woh alfaaz to apke hi honge na,ya woh bhi,kisi ki den hai



boss!!!!!!!!!!!!

sher-o-shayree me.N khayalaat ke parwaaz ke saath logic bhee zaruree hai


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«Reply #8 on: February 16, 2014, 01:59:20 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob...... Applause Applause
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thanku rajan bro
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«Reply #10 on: February 16, 2014, 02:16:18 PM »
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shukriya saini sir ji
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«Reply #11 on: February 16, 2014, 02:18:47 PM »
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ya ya ya qalb big bro
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«Reply #12 on: February 16, 2014, 02:25:57 PM »
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mout bhi to kam khubsurat nhi hoti hogi,kiyon ki,
jo koi bhi us se milta hai zindagi chore deta hai,,,,






Tu apne fun se meri chahat ko aazma ke dikha.
Main toota hoon to phir se mujhe bana ke dikha.

Tere badan me lahu banke daudta hoon main.
Tujhe khuda ki kasam hai mujhe bhula ke dikha.

Main itne dard me bhi sahi Kaha lagta hoon.
Tu ek dukh me mujhe sirf muskura kar dikha.

Tujhe to maine hamesha manaya hai lekin.
Main aaj rooth chala hoon mujhe mana ke dikha.

mari yaade reh jayengi mare baad,
apni zindagi ko khushi se jee kar ke dikha.

jeete jee to mahsoos na kar paye hame,
apne dil main mare pyaar ka ehsaas jaga kar to dikha....


            jj saini


Waah kya bat hai.!!
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shukriya ravi sir ji
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