-----/// Main tujhe dhundtaa rahaa ///----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on December 12, 2012, 05:59:20 PM
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tere  geeton  ko apne hothon pe sajaataa rahaa
tu hai kareeb  khud  ko  main  samjhaataa rahaa

banke khwaab mere aankhon me jo aataa rahaa
wo  meraa  apna   hai , ye mujhe bataataa rahaa

banke  dhup ,  har   din  ki   meri  tu roshni bani
banke  chandaa  raaton  ko  tu  hi  aataa  rahaa

koi  dekh  naa  le  kahin  teri   tasveer ko jaanaa
teri tasveer  ko  is  jahaan  se  chhipaataa  rahaa

muskuraaun, meri zindagi me koi wajah to  nahi
tu hai meri ye soch ke main  muskuraataa  rahaa

ek   kasak   jo   uth_ti   thi  is  'Hriday' me kabhi
wo banke aag, mere dil  ko  bas   jalaataa  rahaa

main dhundta rahaa tujhe jaane kahaan kahaan
naa  mili  tu  kahin ,  main  bas  tadaptaa  rahaa

*****HRIDAY*****
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«Reply #1 on: December 12, 2012, 06:21:05 PM »
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bahut khoobsurat peshkash....chup reh kar bhi sab khuch keh jaaye...aise alfaaz likhe hai aapne...bahut khoob....
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«Reply #2 on: December 12, 2012, 06:44:20 PM »
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Kapil jee Aadaab!


Kia baat hai janab.. bada hi tez jawaab diya hai.. haal e
dil bayaaN kiya hai behad khoob lafzoN meiN... Usual Smile

Bahut khoob janab bahut khoob... Humari dheroN dili daad
O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rhaiye... aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rhaiye..

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   
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«Reply #3 on: December 12, 2012, 07:46:13 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on December 12, 2012, 05:59:20 PM
tere  geeton  ko apne hothon pe sajaataa rahaa
tu hai kareeb  khud  ko  main  samjhaataa rahaa
jaagti aankhon se khawaab dekhne lage. ishq mein zayadaa doobne se aisa hi hota hai Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
banke khwaab mere aankhon me jo aataa rahaa
wo  meraa  apna   hai , ye mujhe bataataa rahaa
mujhe kisi ko kuch bataane ki zaroorat nain samjahne wale dekh kar samajh lete hain . koi aur aati hai khawaab mein kya?Huh?? icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch
banke  dhup ,  har   din  ki   meri  tu roshni bani
banke  chandaa  raaton  ko  tu  hi  aataa  rahaa
aur koi kaam nahin hai kya mere paas. taraa baoon. aasmaan bano.n sattelite banoo.n fancy dress khol rakha hai kya Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased
koi  dekh  naa  le  kahin  teri   tasveer ko jaanaa
teri tasveer  ko  is  jahaan  se  chhipaataa  rahaa
FB mein nahin hoon main khud tumne hi nahin dekha to chupaao ge kya Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
muskuraaun, meri zindagi me koi wajah to  nahi
tu hai meri ye soch ke main  muskuraataa  rahaa
khair kisi ke muskuraane ki wajah to hoon main Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
ek   kasak   jo   uth_ti   thi  is  'Hriday' me kabhi
wo banke aag, mere dil  ko  bas   jalaataa  rahaa
kaisi kasak aur ye kasak hai kya balaa aaj tak mujhe samajh nahin aayi.zara tafseel se is ka taarruf to kara do mujhe BangHead BangHead
main dhundta rahaa tujhe jaane kahaan kahaan
naa  mili  tu  kahin ,  main  bas  tadaptaa  rahaa
mujhe khud pata nahin raat kahaan, din kahaan, shaam kahaan. drunken_smilie drunken_smilie drunken_smilie drunken_smilie
*****HRIDAY*****

kyon itna tadapte ho. ....!
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«Reply #4 on: December 13, 2012, 01:27:35 AM »
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bahut  khoob  likha  hai , Hridayj i
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«Reply #5 on: December 13, 2012, 02:58:22 AM »
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ek   kasak   jo   uth_ti   thi  is  'Hriday' me kabhi
wo banke aag, mere dil  ko  bas   jalaataa  rahaa main

dhundta rahaa tujhe jaane kahaan kahaan
naa  mili  tu  kahin ,  main  bas  tadaptaa  rahaa Applause

wah wah wah hriday jee
laajavaab, bade hi dilfareb ehsaasoN ko chun chun ke pesh kiya hai.
mast.
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«Reply #6 on: December 13, 2012, 03:45:15 AM »
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bahut bahut khub Kapil Ji
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: December 13, 2012, 03:52:15 AM »
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uffffffffffffffffff Kp..... main ab kuch nahin kahungi yahan... c my next post..... soon .......  majbur karte ho tum likhne ko... kasam se.. bade............... ho
 love4 love4 love4 love4 love4 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: December 13, 2012, 05:00:35 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: December 13, 2012, 06:35:22 AM »
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«Reply #10 on: December 13, 2012, 08:27:49 AM »
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Bahut Khub sir ji.........

vaddi soni likhidi hai tumne to


maja aaya si padhne nu
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«Reply #11 on: December 13, 2012, 11:37:39 AM »
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wah wah
kya khoob likha hai aap ne...khoobsurat, behad khoobsurat...
wah
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«Reply #12 on: December 13, 2012, 02:00:36 PM »
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«Reply #13 on: December 13, 2012, 02:41:17 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut hi khoobsurat kalam likha hai aapne hriday jee
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«Reply #14 on: December 13, 2012, 02:43:18 PM »
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wah wah bahut khoob hriday jee
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