-----/// Maine pehli baar pi hai /// ----- Hriday

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sharaabi naa samajhna maine pehli baar pi hai,
aaj peene ki himaakat maine pehli baar ki hai,

ye to yaaron ne zid kiya to mu laga liya humne,
yaaron ki baaton me aane ki khata humne ki hai,

nashe me hoon par sambhal jaaunga kuch pal me,
khud ko sambhalne ki koshish pehli baar ki hai,
 
kahaa yaaron ne ki peene se dard kam hota hai,
to usi dard ko bhulane ki maine chaahat ki hai,

tumko bhulaane ki koshish aaj pehli baar ki hai,
bas isi koshish ma maine aaj pehli baar pi hai...

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«Reply #1 on: March 23, 2012, 04:46:46 PM »
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sharaabi naa samajhna maine pehli baar pi hai,
aaj peene ki himaakat maine pehli baar ki hai,

ye to yaaron ne zid kiya to mu laga liya humne,
yaaron ki baaton me aane ki khata humne ki hai,

nashe me hoon par sambhal jaaunga kuch pal me,
khud ko sambhalne ki koshish pehli baar ki hai,
 
kahaa yaaron ne ki peene se dard kam hota hai,
to usi dard ko bhulane ki maine chaahat ki hai,

tumko bhulaane ki koshish aaj pehli baar ki hai,
bas isi koshish ma maine aaj pehli baar pi hai...

*****HRIDAY*****

bahut khub Hriday ji Pahli baar pi hai magar bhulana paoge. bhut khub bahut khub
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«Reply #2 on: March 23, 2012, 04:50:40 PM »
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BAHUT BADIYA CLAP CLAP CLAP
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«Reply #3 on: March 23, 2012, 05:14:18 PM »
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Bahut khoob hriday jee
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«Reply #4 on: March 24, 2012, 02:23:10 AM »
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Hriday ji jab pee hee lee to ab bahaanaa kaisaa.   waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: March 24, 2012, 05:26:34 AM »
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baht baht ache Hriday ji
daad daad
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«Reply #6 on: March 25, 2012, 02:30:42 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Pankaj ji....!!!

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bahut khub Hriday ji Pahli baar pi hai magar bhulana paoge. bhut khub bahut khub
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«Reply #7 on: March 26, 2012, 01:14:45 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya....!!!

BAHUT BADIYA CLAP CLAP CLAP
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«Reply #8 on: March 27, 2012, 06:19:27 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya MKV ji...!!!

Bahut khoob hriday jee
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«Reply #9 on: March 27, 2012, 07:31:08 PM »
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bahot achcha likha hai Hriday ji
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«Reply #10 on: March 29, 2012, 02:51:32 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Saini ji...!!!

Hriday ji jab pee hee lee to ab bahaanaa kaisaa.   waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #11 on: March 29, 2012, 03:21:19 PM »
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bhut   khoob hriday ji,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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«Reply #12 on: March 30, 2012, 05:09:42 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Sarfira ji.....!!!

baht baht ache Hriday ji
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bahut bahut shukriya @Heer@ ji....!!!

bahot achcha likha hai Hriday ji
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«Reply #14 on: April 02, 2012, 06:25:16 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Tanowar ji....!!!

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bhut   khoob hriday ji,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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