MAJBOOR RAHOGE KAB TAK-by ghansham das ahuja

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                        मजबूर  रहोगे  कब  तक
              जिनकी खातिर कमाते हो उनसे दूर रहोगे कब  तक
              उम्र बीती जाती  यूंही  मजबूर  रहोगे  कब  तक
             
              माना घर से दूर आना एक मजबूरी थी
              अच्छा जीवनयापन करने को सही यह दूरी थी
              जब ईश्वर ने दिया है सबकुछ
              क्यों खींच रहे समय को  गुपचुप
              खुलकर जरा सामने आओ
              खुद को और न ललचाओ
              राह देख रहे बच्चे तेरे
              लालसा को अलविदा कह दे 
              खाने के नहीं पड़े हैं लाले
              थोडा बहुत तू वहीँ कमाले
              औरों की गुलामी के नशे में चूर रहोगे कबतक…जिनकी खातिर …
      पहिले थी इनकी भी मजबूरी
      पर आ रही रिश्तों में अब दूरी
      अपना आखिर अपना होता  है
      देश पराया एक सपना होता  है
      ना जाने ये निद्रा कब टूटेगी
      मोहमाया से प्रीती कब छूटेगी
      दिल और दिमाग दोनों से काम लो
      अपना नहीं यह आसमां जान  लो
      रहो न भ्रम में करो न संशय
      वक़्त के रहते तुम कर लो निर्णय
      जुदाई का यह फतवा मंजूर  करोगे कब तक   
      जिनकी खातिर कमाते हो उनसे दूर रहोगे कब तक   
      उम्र बीती जाती यूंही मजबूर रहोगे कब तक

             
          MAJBOOR RAHOGE KAB TAK
Jinki khatir kamaate ho unse door rahoge kab tak
Umra beeti jaati yoonhi majboor rahoge kab tak
Maana ghar se door aana ek majboori thi
achha jeevanyapan karne ko sahi yeh doori thi
jab ishwar ne diya hai sabkuchh
kyon khech rahe samay ko gupchup
khulkar jara saamne aao
khud ko aur na lalchaao
raah dekh rahe bacche tere
lalasa ko alvida kah de
khan eke nahi pade hain laale
thoda bahut tu vahi kamale
auron ki gulami ke nashe mein choor rahoge kab tak…jinki khatir…

pahile thi inki bhi majboori
par aa rahi rishton mein ab doori
apna aakhir apna hota hai
desh paraya ek sapna hota hai
na jane ye nidra kab tutegi
mohmaya se preeti kab chhotegi
dil aur dimag donon se kaam lo
apna nahin yeh aasman jaan lo
raho na bhram mein karo na sanshay
vaqt ke rahte tum  karlo nirnay
judaai ka yeh fatwa manjoor karoge kab tak
Jinki khatir kamaate ho unse door rahoge kab tak
Umra beeti jaati yoonhi majboor rahoge kab tak

ghansham das ahuja
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«Reply #1 on: June 29, 2012, 06:23:35 PM »
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Sundar rachna ke liye bahut badhai.
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«Reply #2 on: June 29, 2012, 06:24:30 PM »
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bohot achhi aur sacchi lines likhi hai ahuja ji.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
aaj kl yahi ho rha hai sab apna ghr desh chhod kar paise k pichhe kisi ki bhi gulami karne ko tyaar ho jate hai aur apne desh aur family ko bhul jate hai....
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«Reply #3 on: June 29, 2012, 07:06:33 PM »
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hasan sahab, hausala afzai ke liye bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #4 on: June 29, 2012, 07:13:51 PM »
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bohot achhi aur sacchi lines likhi hai ahuja ji.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
aaj kl yahi ho rha hai sab apna ghr desh chhod kar paise k pichhe kisi ki bhi gulami karne ko tyaar ho jate hai aur apne desh aur family ko bhul jate hai....
bilkul sahi akash, yeh rachna maine un dino mein likhee hai jab yeh decide nahi kar pa raha tha ki pardes ko alvida kab kahen. is rachna ne kaafi bal diya aur sahi nirnay kar paaya. rachna aapko achhi lagee jaan kar prasannta hui, tareef ke liye shukriya.
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«Reply #5 on: June 30, 2012, 12:49:45 AM »
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bahut khubsurat bahut hi umda likha ha iaapne ahuja ji.......... jinki khatir kammate hai unse dur kab tak rahein... pardes mein jane walon ka dard  wahisamjh sakte hai........... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: June 30, 2012, 02:06:09 AM »
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bohut achchi rachna hai kamaal kar diya aapne ahuja jee ,,, wah wah wah
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«Reply #7 on: June 30, 2012, 02:15:19 AM »
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waahhh bahut khoob  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: June 30, 2012, 03:39:21 AM »
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badaa sunder geet likhaa hai ghanshyam ji hardik saadhuwaad aur badhaai
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«Reply #9 on: June 30, 2012, 04:02:22 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #10 on: June 30, 2012, 07:01:51 AM »
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waah wah waah sir bohoot khoobsorat bohot khoobsoorat  Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: June 30, 2012, 11:02:17 AM »
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saudagar ji,
   bahut bahut shukriya.yeh rachna nahi aap biti hai jo dil se nikal kar kalam ban gaye thi us vaqt jab iski jaroorat thi,aapko rachna achhi lagee mujhe jan kar bahut prasannta hui.
shubh kaamnaon sahit.
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«Reply #12 on: June 30, 2012, 11:06:50 AM »
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aarish ji, rachna aapko pasand aa gayee jaan kar bahut achha laga.gulf ki naukari ke antim charan mein yeh rachna likhee jab dil ne kaha bas ab bahut ho gaya.aapka bahut bahut shukriya -
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suman ji, bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #14 on: July 01, 2012, 05:16:34 AM »
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badaa sunder geet likhaa hai ghanshyam ji hardik saadhuwaad aur badhaai
saini ji, aapki tareef milee
mere dil ki har kali khilee
dhanya ho gayee meri yeh rachna
paker sadhuvaad aur badhai dili.
bahut bahut dhanyavaad
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