MAJNOOmb

by marhoom bahayaat on July 11, 2009, 09:12:48 PM
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   AAJ PHIR MOHABBAT NEY TEER CHALAAYAA HAI,
   AAJ PHIR AASHIQUI NEY CHOT KHAAI HAI,
   APNEY ZAKHMO KO KIS KIS KO DIKHAAYE MARHOOM..!
   SHAYAD MUJH PEY BHI AB 'MAJNOO'KAA SAYAA HAI
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«Reply #1 on: July 11, 2009, 09:21:05 PM »
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hai niii ... kya baat keh di aap ney Bahayat Ji ... bada sundar likha hai aap ney


Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #2 on: July 11, 2009, 09:23:08 PM »
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Bohot Khoob MB Ji

Majnu Hue, Farhaad Hue,
Ishq Main Barbaad Hue,
Chahaton Main Jo Lute,
Na Dil Phir Wo Aabaad Hue
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«Reply #3 on: July 11, 2009, 09:24:47 PM »
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wah wah Celmira Ji, bahut hi khoob, wah

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #4 on: July 11, 2009, 10:13:46 PM »
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Nice one MB N equally good response Celmira Ji
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«Reply #5 on: July 11, 2009, 11:45:39 PM »
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Bohot shukriya Jasbir Ji, Rajesh Ji
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«Reply #6 on: July 12, 2009, 02:31:40 AM »
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Wonderful creation Marhoom ji and beautiful lines by Celmira ji.excellent. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: July 12, 2009, 04:01:43 AM »
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bahut badiya   marhoom bahayaat ji......

aaj phir majnoo ko, laila ne roolaya  hai,
bin khawab dikayeh,majnoo ko sulaaya hai.
dastaan -e-ishq,ab sunaye kisko,
paa na sakha hai usko,dil se chahata hai jisko.
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«Reply #8 on: July 12, 2009, 04:04:52 AM »
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on July 11, 2009, 09:12:48 PM


   AAJ PHIR MOHABBAT NEY TEER CHALAAYAA HAI,
   AAJ PHIR AASHIQUI NEY CHOT KHAAYAA HAI,
   APNEY ZAKHMO KO KIS KIS KO DIKHAAYE MARHOOM..!
   SHAYAD MUJH PEY BHI AB 'MAJNOO'KAA SAYAA HAI

Wah ... Nice 1 Marhoom ji
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«Reply #9 on: July 12, 2009, 04:05:45 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on July 11, 2009, 09:23:08 PM
Bohot Khoob MB Ji

Majnu Hue, Farhaad Hue,
Ishq Main Barbaad Hue,
Chahaton Main Jo Lute,
Na Dil Phir Wo Aabaad Hue

Aisa kya.... haha nice lines Talat  Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: July 12, 2009, 07:54:03 PM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on July 11, 2009, 09:21:05 PM
hai niii ... kya baat keh di aap ney Bahayat Ji ... bada sundar likha hai aap ney


Jasbir Singh

THANX JASBIR JI
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«Reply #11 on: July 12, 2009, 07:55:11 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on July 11, 2009, 09:23:08 PM
Bohot Khoob MB Ji

Majnu Hue, Farhaad Hue,
Ishq Main Barbaad Hue,
Chahaton Main Jo Lute,
Na Dil Phir Wo Aabaad Hue


HA HA HA HA ...BAHUT KHOOB
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«Reply #12 on: July 12, 2009, 07:55:49 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on July 12, 2009, 04:04:52 AM
Wah ... Nice 1 Marhoom ji

THANX ROJA JI
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«Reply #13 on: July 12, 2009, 07:56:53 PM »
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Quote from: cara on July 12, 2009, 04:01:43 AM
bahut badiya   marhoom bahayaat ji......

aaj phir majnoo ko, laila ne roolaya  hai,
bin khawab dikayeh,majnoo ko sulaaya hai.
dastaan -e-ishq,ab sunaye kisko,
paa na sakha hai usko,dil se chahata hai jisko.



NICE CARA JI
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«Reply #14 on: July 12, 2009, 07:58:06 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on July 12, 2009, 02:31:40 AM
Wonderful creation Marhoom ji and beautiful lines by Celmira ji.excellent. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

WONDERFUL APPRECIATION MADHUWESH THANX
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