Malik se won na mango jo wo de nahin sakta ....bansi

by BANSI DHAMEJA on September 08, 2012, 05:50:19 PM
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Malik se won na mango jo wo de nahin sakta
Zidagi bhoj ham mbante hain wo to nahin banata

Galtiyaan ham karte hain wo to nahin karaata
Galat jagah ham dil lagte hain wo to nahin kahita

Jise bhool jana chahiye ham to bhulate nahin
Khuda to is ke liye kuchh kar nahin sakta

Jo hamen karna hai wo hame hi karna hai
Hamari jagah koi aur to  kar nahin sakta

Malik se won na mango jo wo de nahin sakta
------------bansi(madhur)
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«Reply #1 on: September 08, 2012, 05:57:47 PM »
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Bahut sach likha hai..
kathni aur karnee me bahut farq hai..accha hua to maine kiya aur bura to usne..aisi soch ke saath jeete hai log.
aham dil me basa ke jeete hai..saamne vaale ko insaan nahee samajhte. kisi ki madad nahi karna chaahte par doosro se  ummeed karte hain.
jo karna hai karne vaale chupchaap karte hai..dhindhora peetne vaale kuch karte nahee.
kaafi likh diya...
bas yun hi likhte rahiye..hamaari duaayen aapke saath hain.
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«Reply #2 on: September 08, 2012, 06:01:12 PM »
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MUKSH JI KIN ALFAZ SE APKA SHUKRI YA ADAA KAROON.
SACH MANIYE AAP SAB DOSTON KI WAJAH SE HI SHAYA MAIN LIKH PAATA HOON . THANKS
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«Reply #3 on: September 08, 2012, 06:06:14 PM »
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Mukesh ji bilkul sahi kaha hai aapne


Galtiyaan ham karte hain dosh doosron ko dete hain
Jaise ham to kabhi galatiyaan  kar hi nahin sakte

Agar milta nahin koi aur to kasoorwar Khuda ko bana dete hain
Jab ki asiliyat men kasoorwar koi aur nahin ham hote hain
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«Reply #4 on: September 08, 2012, 06:10:25 PM »
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Quote from: BANSI DHAMEJA on September 08, 2012, 06:01:12 PM
MUKSH JI KIN ALFAZ SE APKA SHUKRI YA ADAA KAROON.
SACH MANIYE AAP SAB DOSTON KI WAJAH SE HI SHAYA MAIN LIKH PAATA HOON . THANKS

jee haan..sach maayne me aap shaayar hai..aap dil se likhte hain.
jo sab samajh saken us bhaasha me jo likhe vahee shayar. technicalities are there and should be adopted but the person who doesn't know it, should not be discouraged..
shukriya karne ki zaroorat nahee. bas vahee se kah deejiyega..mujh tak baat pahuch jaayegi.
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«Reply #5 on: September 09, 2012, 01:01:34 AM »
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Bansi ji maiN aap ki is lise sehmat nahi hun.

Malik se won na mango jo wo de nahin sakta.

bansi ji Aisa kuch Nahi Hai Jo Malik dE nahi sakta, shayad hamari duaoN men wo asar hi nahi hai, Ki hum apni man maNgi Duayen pa sakeN..Kami Hamare Mangne MeN Hai. uske Dene MeN nahi,

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«Reply #6 on: September 09, 2012, 01:02:48 AM »
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Sach kaha Bansi ji, very very nice
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«Reply #7 on: September 09, 2012, 04:19:03 AM »
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Quote from: Aarish on September 09, 2012, 01:01:34 AM
Bansi ji maiN aap ki is lise sehmat nahi hun.

Malik se won na mango jo wo de nahin sakta.

bansi ji Aisa kuch Nahi Hai Jo Malik dE nahi sakta, shayad hamari duaoN men wo asar hi nahi hai, Ki hum apni man maNgi Duayen pa sakeN..Kami Hamare Mangne MeN Hai. uske Dene MeN nahi,



Sahi kah hai Malik apne pe aaye to kiya nahin kar sakta
Wo sab kuchh kar sakta hai Hamaara vajood talk mitta kasta hai
 
Mera kahne ka arz yeh tha ki
Malik hame wo kiyon dega jis ke ham haqdaar nahin
Mangne ke liye maangte rahen par wo dega nahin

Agar jo mujhe  karna chahiye par karunga nahin  to
Main yeh sochta hoon ki Malik kabhi mujhe  dega nahin

Jo sochte hain apna farz poora kiye bagir  
Malik phir bhi unhen dega
Unko Malik se  maangne se main rokata nahin

Yeh to soch hai apni apni aur khayal apna apna

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«Reply #8 on: September 09, 2012, 08:23:39 AM »
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Quote from: BANSI DHAMEJA on September 09, 2012, 04:19:03 AM
Sahi kah hai Malik apne pe aaye to kiya nahin kar sakta
Wo sab kuchh kar sakta hai Hamaara vajood talk mitta kasta hai
 
Mera kahne ka arz yeh tha ki
Malik hame wo kiyon dega jis ke ham haqdaar nahin
Mangne ke liye maangte rahen par wo dega nahin

Agar jo mujhe  karna chahiye par karunga nahin  to
Main yeh sochta hoon ki Malik kabhi mujhe  dega nahin

Jo sochte hain apna farz poora kiye bagir 
Malik phir bhi unhen dega
Unko Malik se  maangne se main rokata nahin

Yeh to soch hai apni apni aur khayal apna apna


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«Reply #9 on: September 09, 2012, 11:31:31 AM »
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Quote from: Aarish on September 09, 2012, 08:23:39 AM
bilkul thik kaha aapne bansi ji. lekin soch ko sahi shabdoN meN bhi Dhalna zaroori hota hai. apni soch ke bare meN sirf Hum Jante HaiN.. Log NaHiN Log to to is site par shabd hi padte hain...
aarish ji theek kah rahe hain. dhiyaan doonga is cheez par.
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«Reply #10 on: September 09, 2012, 11:57:34 AM »
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bahut khoob bansi ji mubarak ho
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«Reply #11 on: September 09, 2012, 12:01:37 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on September 09, 2012, 11:57:34 AM
bahut khoob bansi ji mubarak ho
saini ji shukriya
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