** Mannwa Mora Hai Udaas* RH

by Rajesh Harish on April 23, 2010, 07:25:59 PM
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Mora mannwa aaj hai bahut hi udaas
Jiyara mein jo kuchh thi mori ek aas
Kar gayee hai woh chhoriya sab naas
Ab to jivanwa mein nahi hai koi raas
Padi hui hai duwariya par mor lahaas
Koi uthaike pahucha deo unke pass
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«Reply #1 on: April 25, 2010, 06:40:39 AM »
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ik batiya batava tumka khass
abheen tum le lo sanyaas

good one Rajeshji!kshetriya bhasha me aap ka prayog mann lubhawan hai...
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«Reply #2 on: April 25, 2010, 07:00:00 AM »
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Wah kya baat hai         Rajesh Harish ji.....

Mannwa mora hai udaas
mora jigar nahi more paas
aaj kal ham nahi lage unhe khaas
hamri aajkal nahi lage unhe pyaas
chod mohe dekhat hai koi aas-paas
jeeya kar gayi hai mora naas
mannwa mora hai udaas......


galti maaf kardena mere bhai......
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«Reply #3 on: April 25, 2010, 08:00:00 AM »
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 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard tongue3 ha ha ha bahut khoob Rajesh ji,Mamta ji,Cara ji.kamaal ke likha aap sabne maza aa gayi padke. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: April 25, 2010, 11:06:48 AM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on April 25, 2010, 06:40:39 AM
ik batiya batava tumka khass
abheen tum le lo sanyaas

good one Rajeshji!kshetriya bhasha me aap ka prayog mann lubhawan hai...

Nice lines Mamta Ji
Shukriya sarahane ke liye
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«Reply #5 on: April 25, 2010, 11:11:17 AM »
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Quote from: cara on April 25, 2010, 07:00:00 AM
Wah kya baat hai         Rajesh Harish ji.....

Mannwa mora hai udaas
mora jigar nahi more paas
aaj kal ham nahi lage unhe khaas
hamri aajkal nahi lage unhe pyaas
chod mohe dekhat hai koi aas-paas
jeeya kar gayi hai mora naas
mannwa mora hai udaas......


galti maaf kardena mere bhai......



Shukriya Cara Ji

Nice lines

Galti na kiyo hai tu khaas
Kyon ho gaye mannwa tor udaas
Jab nahi lage tohe koi pyaas
To samjho ho gaye mohabbat ke dass
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«Reply #6 on: April 25, 2010, 11:14:19 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on April 25, 2010, 08:00:00 AM
Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard tongue3 ha ha ha bahut khoob Rajesh ji,Mamta ji,Cara ji.kamaal ke likha aap sabne maza aa gayi padke. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause

Shukriya Madhu Ji

Such mein aayaa pa.dh ke koi raas
Ki kar rahi ho hamra tu yu ulaas
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«Reply #7 on: May 09, 2010, 03:45:41 PM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on April 25, 2010, 06:40:39 AM
ik batiya batava tumka khass
abheen tum le lo sanyaas

good one Rajeshji!kshetriya bhasha me aap ka prayog mann lubhawan hai...

Batiya maanab hum tumra khaas
Le laibe ab hum jaldiwa sanyaas
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«Reply #8 on: May 09, 2010, 04:31:27 PM »
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TUMHU HO BACHWA BAHUTAI KHASS
BURI NAJARIYA KA HOUBE NAAS
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BAHT KHOOB...MAZA AA GAYA...KEEP WRITING SAHEB.
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«Reply #9 on: May 09, 2010, 04:42:56 PM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on May 09, 2010, 04:31:27 PM
TUMHU HO BACHWA BAHUTAI KHASS
BURI NAJARIYA KA HOUBE NAAS
 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

BAHT KHOOB...MAZA AA GAYA...KEEP WRITING SAHEB.

Good one Mamta

Teri najariya hai hum par khaas
Ab toh na hoibe hum se sanyaas

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«Reply #10 on: May 09, 2010, 11:12:45 PM »
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DEN EK MANTARWA TUMKA KHASS
KABHUN NA KARIYO KISI PE BISBAS
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«Reply #11 on: May 11, 2010, 06:08:21 AM »
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Bahut tag.da tag.da mantarwa hai hamraa paas
Aur kabhiwa nahi karat huwa kisi pe vishbaas
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«Reply #12 on: June 16, 2010, 08:10:25 AM »
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Aaj phir howa mora manwaa udaas
Khojat rahwa humau koi ullhaas
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«Reply #13 on: June 16, 2010, 02:10:17 PM »
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TUMHRA MANNWA NAHI TUMHRE PAAS
BATIYA HUI GAI KONO KHAAS ?
SANGI SATHI KE BAITHO PAAS
RAAG RANG ME KARIBO BAAS
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«Reply #14 on: August 28, 2010, 10:35:58 PM »
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Kho gaiwa hai hamra koi bahute khaas
Yahi karanwa rahwat hai mannwa udaas
Kitna bhi koi dewat hai humka dilaas
Mannwa nahi karat hai kono ka bisbaas
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