Manzil door hai abhi...Premdeep

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Manzil door hai abhi
Hausale yun choor mat kar

Rasta mushkil hai to kya
Kadam majboor mat kar

Zameen si saadgi le
Asmaan sa guroor mat kar

Dusaron ki khatir kabhi
Apnon ko door mat kar

Baant le dunya ke gam
Khud ko magroor mat kar

Dil ko bana le aaina apna
chehra mashoor mat kar
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«Reply #1 on: March 06, 2014, 04:58:36 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: March 06, 2014, 05:02:35 PM »
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Baant le dunya ke gam
Khud ko magroor mat kar

Dil ko bana le aaina apna
chehra mashoor mat kar

Bahut umdah
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«Reply #5 on: March 06, 2014, 08:52:06 PM »
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Prem deep ji kya baaten aap keh gaye ..maza aa gaya ..Simple deep and amazing as always ..hats off 2 u
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Bahut khooooooooooooooooooooob...ek dam zabardast likhe ho... bahut bahut pasand aayi mujhe aapki yeh peshkash... hazaron hazaron dili daad qubool kijiyega...khaas yeh ashaar behad pyaare lage..

Zameen si saadgi le
Asmaan sa guroor mat kar

Dusaron ki khatir kabhi
Apnon ko door mat kar

Baant le dunya ke gam
Khud ko magroor mat kar

Dil ko bana le aaina apna
chehra mashoor mat kar
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«Reply #7 on: March 06, 2014, 11:09:09 PM »
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Manzil door hai abhi
Hausale yun choor mat kar

Rasta mushkil hai to kya
Kadam majboor mat kar

Zameen si saadgi le
Asmaan sa guroor mat kar

Dusaron ki khatir kabhi
Apnon ko door mat kar

Baant le dunya ke gam
Khud ko magroor mat kar

Dil ko bana le aaina apna
chehra mashoor mat kar


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bahut khooob premdeep ji
Ek rau
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«Reply #8 on: March 06, 2014, 11:21:40 PM »
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Manzil door hai abhi
Hausale yun choor mat kar
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Rasta mushkil hai to kya
Kadam majboor mat kar
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Zameen si saadgi le
Asmaan sa guroor mat kar
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Dusaron ki khatir kabhi
Apnon ko door mat kar
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Baant le dunya ke gam
Khud ko magroor mat kar
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Dil ko bana le aaina apna
chehra mashoor mat kar
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«Reply #9 on: March 07, 2014, 02:40:02 AM »
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Quote from: premdeep on March 06, 2014, 04:55:36 PM
Manzil door hai abhi
Hausale yun choor mat kar

Rasta mushkil hai to kya
Kadam majboor mat kar

Zameen si saadgi le
Asmaan sa guroor mat kar

Dusaron ki khatir kabhi
Apnon ko door mat kar

Baant le dunya ke gam
Khud ko magroor mat kar

Dil ko bana le aaina apna
chehra mashoor mat kar

wah wah wah icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #10 on: March 07, 2014, 01:45:51 PM »
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thanks to all  for appreciation
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«Reply #11 on: March 07, 2014, 02:29:08 PM »
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«Reply #12 on: March 07, 2014, 07:53:28 PM »
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