~*~ Marham laga na sake ~*~ by Rahim

by dead heart on January 16, 2011, 02:47:05 PM
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Kal raat ek function main aisa chehra dekha kay sawal utha mann main:
"Kya aise bhi chehre hota hai? Bata nahin sakta kitna haseen tha..
Bas issi khayal par kuch likh raha hoon..

Woh ek ada apni jo tumhe hum dikha na sake,
Woh ek nazar jo hum tumse mila na sake..

Dabe armaan jag gaye dil main tumhe dekh kar,
Mager woh ek shuruwati kadam hum utha na sake..

Jabse tujhe dekha hai bas behaal sa hogaya hai dil,
Khayali khubsoorat sapne bhi kal raat mujhe sula na sake..

Ab kya batayen yaaron kay kitna ghayel karne wala chehra tha uska,
Uski khubsoorati ko hum lavzon main uttar na sake..

‘Khamosh’ aise chehre dekh kar kuch der kay liye ghum bula leta hai,
Mager sach yehi hai kay qatil chehre bhi dil pe marham laga na sake..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: January 16, 2011, 03:22:47 PM »
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aapne mashaallah kya beautiful ehsaas dia hai Rahim ji
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khubsurti chehre ki kaafi thi unki
   gam e fursat dilane kuch pal ke liye
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«Reply #2 on: January 16, 2011, 06:13:56 PM »
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Shukriya Nirala jee..
Bahaut achi lines..
Applause Applause
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #3 on: January 16, 2011, 06:24:55 PM »
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Bahut khoob rahiim ek baat kehna chahti hu..

Ab kya batayen yaaron kay kitna ghayel karne wala chehra tha uska,
Uski khubsoorati ko hum lavzon main uttar na sake..

iss ashaar mein agar utaar ki jagah saja naa sake likhte tou rhyming thik rehti...waise har alfaz apne aap main bahut acha hai...
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«Reply #4 on: January 16, 2011, 06:34:29 PM »
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wah kya andaaz hai Dost--
khubsurati ko kalambaddh kiya badi khubsurti ke saath.
man ko THANDAK mili bahut Usual SmileWinkingUsual Smile
achhaaaaa lagaaaaaaaa bhai
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«Reply #5 on: January 16, 2011, 08:21:41 PM »
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Geet di,
Apka teh dil se shukriya..
Aur suggestion kay liye aur bhi shukriya..
Issi tarha seekhne milta hai..
Thank you..!
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #6 on: January 16, 2011, 08:23:17 PM »
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Shukriya shukriya Killbill jee..
Hamesha saath dene kay liye, apka
teh dil se shukriya yaar..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #7 on: January 16, 2011, 08:38:47 PM »
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Rahim bhai... bahut khoob
last stanza sabse achha laga...

Intezar !
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«Reply #8 on: January 16, 2011, 08:47:50 PM »
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Teh dil se shukriya Intezar jee..
Akhri wala kafi dil se nikla tha..
Ehsaason ko samajne kay liye, apka
teh dil se shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #9 on: January 17, 2011, 04:21:27 AM »
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hey Rahim ...bht mast mast likha hai tumne.....padhkar pehli bar smile aai subah se face pe.......

mastam re...
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«Reply #10 on: January 17, 2011, 04:26:56 AM »
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bahoot khoob likha bhai rahim..........bahoot khoobsurat
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«Reply #11 on: January 17, 2011, 09:59:32 AM »
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bht khoobsurat kalam hia rahim....
i lyk last one alot....
bht bht khoob...
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«Reply #12 on: January 17, 2011, 10:28:11 AM »
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mast likha hai Rahim bhai..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: January 17, 2011, 10:50:14 AM »
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kya baat kyaa baaat...


akhir koi dikhi to sahi yahan to sookha chal raha he ...

kitne din bete ankhon ab bhi sookhi hain,
koi haseen kabhi to nazar-e-inayat kare hampar~
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«Reply #14 on: January 17, 2011, 01:00:02 PM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on January 17, 2011, 04:21:27 AM
hey Rahim ...bht mast mast likha hai tumne.....padhkar pehli bar smile aai subah se face pe.......

mastam re...
Ohh apke chehre pe smile ayi meri nazm parrkar,
toh yeh bahaut barri baat hai..
Shukriya di..
Khush rahiye!
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