Marna na ayya

by Pooja on July 07, 2008, 04:34:44 PM
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Mere dard ko mujhe sahlana na ayya
pyar kar ke, bhool jaana na ayya
badi nafrat se wo dhikarta he raha
sab sun kar bhi, kuch khna na ayya

zindagi yahi hai, yahi kah kar jeeti rahi
toot toot kar bikharti rahi, magar jhukna na ayya
hai andhera ajj aor rasta najar atta nahi
tham bacho ka hath, koi aor hath pakdna na ayya

kabhi vishwas, kabhi kho gai himmat sari
waqat ki baar-baar maar se bachna na ayya
ghanto akeli baith sochu zindagi ke pal
pal-pal mar ke bhi Pooja ko marna na ayya

Mere dard ko mujhe sahlana na ayya
pyar kar ke, bhool jaana na ayya...........
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«Reply #1 on: July 07, 2008, 05:13:41 PM »
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kabhi vishwas, kabhi kho gai himmat sari
waqat ki baar-baar maar se bachna na ayya
ghanto akeli baith sochu zindagi ke pal
pal-pal mar ke bhi Pooja ko marna na ayya

Kaafi alag sa likha hai aur thoda pessimistic bhi hai...
Pooja to aasha ka naam hai...
Aasha se prarthana banti hai...
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«Reply #2 on: July 07, 2008, 06:39:30 PM »
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Mere dard ko mujhe sahlana na ayya
pyar kar ke, bhool jaana na ayya
badi nafrat se wo dhikarta he raha
sab sun kar bhi, kuch khna na ayya

zindagi yahi hai, yahi kah kar jeeti rahi
toot toot kar bikharti rahi, magar jhukna na ayya
hai andhera ajj aor rasta najar atta nahi
tham bacho ka hath, koi aor hath pakdna na ayya

kabhi vishwas, kabhi kho gai himmat sari
waqat ki baar-baar maar se bachna na ayya
ghanto akeli baith sochu zindagi ke pal
pal-pal mar ke bhi Pooja ko marna na ayya

Mere dard ko mujhe sahlana na ayya
pyar kar ke, bhool jaana na ayya...........

har shabd me dard hi to hai... tearyeyed
nice creation pooja ji

dard ka pahla kadam mai magar anjaan tha,
pahli chuan thi dard ki, har tees se hairan tha,
har dil me ek samndar dekha dard aur tees ka,
mai bewazah is chote se talab se pareshan tha

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«Reply #3 on: July 07, 2008, 07:07:54 PM »
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Kaafi alag sa likha hai aur thoda pessimistic bhi hai...
Pooja to aasha ka naam hai...
Aasha se prarthana banti hai...


Asha bhi kabhi nirasha main badal jaati hai
Pooja apni se kabhi kabhi bhatak jaati hai
zindagi dikhati hai roop itne itne zalim
apni app se kabhi kabhi yakin uth jaati hai
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«Reply #4 on: July 07, 2008, 07:10:19 PM »
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har shabd me dard hi to hai... tearyeyed
nice creation pooja ji

dard ka pahla kadam mai magar anjaan tha,
pahli chuan thi dard ki, har tees se hairan tha,
har dil me ek samndar dekha dard aur tees ka,
mai bewazah is chote se talab se pareshan tha



bahoot kuch kah gaye app in char lines mai Sanjeev jee!! bahoot khoob!!

dil-e-samunder main kabhi kabhi utar jaate hai
apne he dukho se kabhi kabhi, dar jaate hai
chalte chlate samjh nahi atta jaaye to jaaye kaha
apni zara se hansi per, n ajaane kyun roye jaate hai
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«Reply #5 on: July 07, 2008, 07:35:15 PM »
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hanskar bhi gum ko chupaya jaye,
har aah par thahaka lagaya jaye,
hans dete hai lab, nain chalke jaate hain
aaankh barsen to sach kaise chupaya jaaye

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«Reply #6 on: July 07, 2008, 07:43:35 PM »
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hansi main her baar gum chupaya nahi jaate
aa jaaye wo samne to dard ko samjhaya nahi jaata
zakham ubhar jaate hai, aor waqat jaata hai wahin thum
apne "kyun" ka koi jawab kahin paaya nahi jaata
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«Reply #7 on: July 07, 2008, 08:21:52 PM »
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kya khoob likha hai
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«Reply #8 on: July 07, 2008, 08:51:48 PM »
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Shukaria Unlock Ali jee!!
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«Reply #9 on: July 08, 2008, 01:41:05 AM »
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Mere dard ko mujhe sahlana na ayya
pyar kar ke, bhool jaana na ayya
badi nafrat se wo dhikarta he raha
sab sun kar bhi, kuch khna na ayya

zindagi yahi hai, yahi kah kar jeeti rahi
toot toot kar bikharti rahi, magar jhukna na ayya
hai andhera ajj aor rasta najar atta nahi
tham bacho ka hath, koi aor hath pakdna na ayya

kabhi vishwas, kabhi kho gai himmat sari
waqat ki baar-baar maar se bachna na ayya
ghanto akeli baith sochu zindagi ke pal
pal-pal mar ke bhi Pooja ko marna na ayya

Mere dard ko mujhe sahlana na ayya
pyar kar ke, bhool jaana na ayya...........

It na dard??  sad5 Mera dard ko mujhe sehlana na aaya.. wah wah bahut hi khoobsurat se bani hai yeh line... Accha likha hai aapne didi.
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«Reply #10 on: July 08, 2008, 01:44:22 AM »
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har shabd me dard hi to hai... tearyeyed
nice creation pooja ji

dard ka pahla kadam mai magar anjaan tha,
pahli chuan thi dard ki, har tees se hairan tha,
har dil me ek samndar dekha dard aur tees ka,
mai bewazah is chote se talab se pareshan tha

Bhaiya bahut accha reply main dard bayan kiya hai aapne. Good line jee
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«Reply #11 on: July 08, 2008, 01:51:42 AM »
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 Applause  Applause
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«Reply #12 on: July 08, 2008, 01:59:18 AM »
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hanskar bhi gum ko chupaya jaye,
har aah par thahaka lagaya jaye,
hans dete hai lab, nain chalke jaate hain
aaankh barsen to sach kaise chupaya jaaye



Jo gum ko chupaye wo hansi nahi hoti
aise thahako ki goonj bhi hai roti
Bhool kar he insaan bhool sakta hai sab
yaadon kebharose kabhi hansi kareeb nahi hoti
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«Reply #13 on: July 08, 2008, 02:01:00 AM »
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Armanon ki dunia main hai betabiyan chayee  sad7
Honton pe siskiyan aankhon mein viraniyan chayee

Tujhse bichadkar jeena jaise gunah hua hai
Gam ki ghataye hai her taraf udasiyan chayee  sad7
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«Reply #14 on: July 08, 2008, 02:03:31 AM »
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Jo gum ko chupaye wo hansi nahi hoti
aise thahako ki goonj bhi hai roti
Bhool kar he insaan bhool sakta hai sab
yaadon kebharose kabhi hansi kareeb nahi hoti

Nice reply sarthika
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