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marne ka kanoon nahi

by samnoj on December 07, 2007, 12:55:20 PM

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ek shareer apahij andha, charo aor dishaye hai
itna khud me simat raha hu, jitni tez hawaye hai

aas-nirash ki shital dhara gum hai meri mitti me
dhari dharti, amber amber, beaawaz sadaye hai

sookhe mousam ne pi dali, bachpan ki her kilkari
khud apni chaati se lipti diwani mamtaye hai

ab bhin un aaknho me zinda kirche toote sapno ki
aaj bhi un khaali hatho me kuch bijism duwaye hai

pagdandi pagdandi chal ker, aaya hu main apne gher
sadko sadko er perwat banker khadi hui chintaye hai

khara nahi hota aankho se, jhoote sapno ka rishta
jitne lamho ka jivan hai, utni abhilashaye hai

dosh kisi ko kaise dijiye, kisse kya kahege hum
marne ka kanoon nahi ye jine ki dharaye hai


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Re: marne ka kanoon nahi

«Reply #1 on: December 07, 2007, 01:10:54 PM »

Well... I must admit, Yeh aaisi kuch ginni-chunni shayariyo mein se hai, jiska har ek sher padh kar maine "Waah Waah" kiya hai...

Amazing... Very very deep feelings and very well compiled...

Too Good.. Samnoj... Bahut hi achha likha hai aapne... Usual Smile


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Re: marne ka kanoon nahi

«Reply #2 on: December 10, 2007, 11:20:17 AM »

thanku Shikha


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Re: marne ka kanoon nahi

«Reply #3 on: December 17, 2007, 12:17:44 PM »

yes as per Shikha di said.. its realy tarefe kabeel Poetry by u.. realy well experesed.


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Re: marne ka kanoon nahi

«Reply #4 on: December 18, 2007, 12:36:00 PM »

thanku dipika .... aap log ne pasand kiya bahut acha laga


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Re: marne ka kanoon nahi

«Reply #5 on: December 20, 2007, 10:03:57 AM »

Bohot achche Sam...itna achcha bhi likh lete ho !! just kidding..really very nice Usual Smile


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Re: marne ka kanoon nahi

«Reply #6 on: December 20, 2007, 10:13:05 AM »

Sam bro,

Bahut khoob !

Sab santron ka asar lagta hai santra kha ke Usual Smile


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Re: marne ka kanoon nahi

«Reply #7 on: December 27, 2007, 11:03:18 AM »

nice one samnoj

prem chawla


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Re: marne ka kanoon nahi

«Reply #8 on: January 02, 2008, 11:16:07 AM »

Quote from: Talat on December 20, 2007, 10:03:57 AM

Bohot achche Sam...itna achcha bhi likh lete ho !! just kidding..really very nice Usual Smile

aap ki sohbat ka aser hai....warna hum kya hai... thanks


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Re: marne ka kanoon nahi

«Reply #9 on: January 02, 2008, 11:17:42 AM »

Quote from: Rajbir on December 20, 2007, 10:13:05 AM

Sam bro,

Bahut khoob !

Sab santron ka asar lagta hai santra kha ke Usual Smile

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Quote from: Rajbir on December 20, 2007, 10:13:05 AM

Sam bro,

Bahut khoob !

Sab santron ka asar lagta hai santra kha ke Usual Smile

aap ko kisne bataya ki main ye sab santra kha k likha hai

thanku Rajbir ji

thanks prem chawla


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Re: marne ka kanoon nahi

«Reply #10 on: January 04, 2008, 06:43:54 PM »

bohat acha likha ap ny.


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Re: marne ka kanoon nahi

«Reply #11 on: January 29, 2008, 12:16:23 PM »

thanx aankhein


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Re: marne ka kanoon nahi

«Reply #12 on: June 02, 2008, 10:23:15 AM »

sabse pahle mai mahiya ji ka shukriya ada karna chahta hun jinhone is poetry ke liye recommend kiya....
Sach me samnoj ji ye padne ke baad laga ki mai ise kaise nahi pad paya......
der aaye durust aaye really very nice.....


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Re: marne ka kanoon nahi

«Reply #13 on: June 02, 2008, 10:33:50 AM »

samnoj ji,

hridaysparshi kavita.kayi baar pudhne pur he koi kavita ke kareeb pahuch payega.aap gehri soch rakhte he aur umda likhte he..meri bhee dil se badhai he aapko.

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Re: marne ka kanoon nahi

«Reply #14 on: June 02, 2008, 10:37:03 AM »

Quote from: bekarar on June 02, 2008, 10:23:15 AM

bekarar ji,
aapka peecha karte karte hum bhee pahuch paaye yahaan tuk.Mahiya's Recommendations naam ka koi thread nazar nahi aaya!!lagta hein aapki ungli pakad kar he chalna padega-thokar mut lagne deejiyega.

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