Mata pita ka aangan chhodkar- Shikha

by Shikha sanghvi on March 16, 2016, 12:40:18 PM

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«Reply #15 on: March 30, 2016, 01:18:46 PM »

Quote from: Maaya on March 16, 2016, 07:31:41 PM

Very impressive thoughts really its a nice poem about feelings of a girl

Thanks maayaji


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Shikha sanghvi

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Re: Mata pita ka aangan chhodkar- Shikha

«Reply #16 on: March 30, 2016, 01:20:22 PM »

Quote from: aarzoo-e-arjun on March 17, 2016, 05:05:16 AM

Bahut khoob shikha g... Mai bhi aapko yahi kahne wala hun ke kafiye ko aor line ki length ko zahan me jaroor rakhe.. Varna poetry ki beauty kam ho jati hai...

Otherwise you have portrayed personifickly....

Thanks a lot surindarji...aage se is baat ka hum khayal rakhenge...