meharbaani---------------MARHOOM BAHAYAAT

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                             apne   tajurbe   ka   hawaala   na   do!
                             mere  zaayqe  ko  apna  masaala  na  do!

                             wasi   karne  ke  liye  maloomaat  meri!
                             deko,   koi  nayaa   risaala   na    do!

                             hai  qabooliyat dil  se to  wahi  kaafi!
                             dikhaawe   ke   liye  jai maala  na  do!

                             mayaar  taalim  ki  karo oonchi  janaab!
                             daulat  pe  sarakti  paathshala  na  do!

                             hai  maadri  zubaan  urdu  apni  MARHOOM!
                             meri ghazlo.n ko lafzo.n ka niwalaa na do!


                            
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«Reply #1 on: October 01, 2013, 02:06:59 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: October 01, 2013, 12:34:16 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: October 01, 2013, 02:27:49 PM »
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Waaaaaaaaaaaaah MB ji.. behtareeen peshkash... bahut achchi ghazal se nawaaza hai aapne.. sabhi ashaar bahut khoob hai.. aapko is peshkash par hazaron hazaron dili daaaaaaaaaaad...

  hai  qabooliyat dil  se to  wahi  kaafi!
  dikhaawe   ke   liye  jai maala  na  do!

  mayaar  taalim  ki  karo oonchi  janaab!
  daulat  pe  sarakti  paathshala  na  do!
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«Reply #4 on: October 01, 2013, 02:35:13 PM »
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                             apne   tajurbe   ka   hawaala   na   do!
                             mere  zaayqe  ko  apna  masaala  na  do!

                             wasi   karne  ke  liye  maloomaat  meri!
                             deko,   koi  nayaa   risaala   na    do!

                             hai  qabooliyat dil  se to  wahi  kaafi!
                             dikhaawe   ke   liye  jai maala  na  do!

                             mayaar  taalim  ki  karo oonchi  janaab!
                             daulat  pe  sarakti  paathshala  na  do!

                             hai  maadri  zubaan  urdu  apni  MARHOOM!
                             meri ghazlo.n ko lafzo.n ka niwalaa na do!


                             

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«Reply #5 on: October 01, 2013, 02:43:05 PM »
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bahut khoob MB ji.
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«Reply #6 on: October 01, 2013, 04:10:06 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: October 01, 2013, 05:38:49 PM »
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meri ghazlo.n ko lafzo.n ka niwalaa na do!

please have a look the difference between 'niwalaa' and 'luqhma' - baat cheet ke dauran niwalaa nahi luqhma diya jaata hai Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: October 01, 2013, 07:57:14 PM »
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apne   tajurbe   ka   hawaala   na   do!
mere  zaayqe  ko  apna  masaala  na  do!

wasi   karne  ke  liye  maloomaat  meri
deko,   koi  nayaa   risaala   na    do!

hai  qabooliyat dil  se to  wahi  kaafi!
dikhaawe   ke   liye  jai maala  na  do!

mayaar  taalim  ki  karo oonchi  janaab!
daulat  pe  sarakti  paathshala  na  do!

hai  maadri  zubaan  urdu  apni  MARHOOM!
meri ghazlo.n ko lafzo.n ka niwalaa na do!

Bahut badhiya MB saheb
Matla khaas raha..dili daad aur mubarakbaad
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«Reply #9 on: October 02, 2013, 09:31:45 PM »
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M B Jee Aadaab...!


WaaH janab waaH kia kahne ... puri kalaam umdaa rahi par matle ka jawaab hi nahi janab .. behad gazab ka aur umdaa matla kaha hai aapne...

Is umdaa kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...
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«Reply #10 on: October 03, 2013, 02:26:27 AM »
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Bahut khoob MB jee.
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«Reply #11 on: October 04, 2013, 03:09:21 AM »
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Aafreen Aafree .Wah Wah Kya Kehne MB Ji Jawaab Nahi Aapka
Kya Hi Khoobsurat Peshkash Ki Hai Bas Maza Aa Gaya Parhkar
Shuru Se Akhir Tak Sabhi Ashaar Behad Hi Pasand Aaye Mujhey
Is Khoobsurat Peshkash Par Dil Ki Gehraaiyon Se Ba Aawaz E Buland Daad Qabul Farmaaye Janaab

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Shad o Aabaad Rahiye


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«Reply #12 on: October 05, 2013, 12:42:40 AM »
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thank you,sir
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«Reply #13 on: October 21, 2013, 01:08:23 AM »
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thank you ,sir
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«Reply #14 on: October 21, 2013, 01:09:27 AM »
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Waaaaaaaaaaaaah MB ji.. behtareeen peshkash... bahut achchi ghazal se nawaaza hai aapne.. sabhi ashaar bahut khoob hai.. aapko is peshkash par hazaron hazaron dili daaaaaaaaaaad...

  hai  qabooliyat dil  se to  wahi  kaafi!
  dikhaawe   ke   liye  jai maala  na  do!

  mayaar  taalim  ki  karo oonchi  janaab!
  daulat  pe  sarakti  paathshala  na  do!
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thank you,ma'am
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