meharbaani---------------MARHOOM BAHAYAAT

thank you,sir

sir,
 you are correct but both carries the same meaning and as qafia i have used niwalaa which is grammatically not incorrect and you are also a poet in order to fabricate ashaar or ghazal a poet or shayar mostly consider the meaning of his sher rather to find your use the appropriate words. just for an example there are measure difference between zulf and gesu and zulf is not correct word to be used in the sher or ghazal as your point of view.

thank you sir for you this kind objection

thank you,sir