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«Reply #15 on: October 21, 2013, 01:10:27 AM »

Quote from: qalb on October 01, 2013, 02:35:13 PM

thank you,sir


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Re: meharbaani---------------MARHOOM BAHAYAAT

«Reply #16 on: October 21, 2013, 01:11:21 AM »

Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on October 01, 2013, 02:43:05 PM

bahut khoob MB ji.

thank you,sir


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«Reply #17 on: October 21, 2013, 01:12:08 AM »

Quote from: nandbahu on October 01, 2013, 04:10:06 PM

bahut khoob

thank you,sir


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«Reply #18 on: October 21, 2013, 01:17:38 AM »

Quote from: Iqtedar on October 01, 2013, 05:38:49 PM

meri ghazlo.n ko lafzo.n ka niwalaa na do!

please have a look the difference between 'niwalaa' and 'luqhma' - baat cheet ke dauran niwalaa nahi luqhma diya jaata hai Usual Smile

sir,
you are correct but both carries the same meaning and as qafia i have used niwalaa which is grammatically not incorrect and you are also a poet in order to fabricate ashaar or ghazal a poet or shayar mostly consider the meaning of his sher rather to find your use the appropriate words. just for an example there are measure difference between zulf and gesu and zulf is not correct word to be used in the sher or ghazal as your point of view.

thank you sir for you this kind objection


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Re: meharbaani---------------MARHOOM BAHAYAAT

«Reply #19 on: October 21, 2013, 01:18:30 AM »

Quote from: mkv on October 01, 2013, 07:57:14 PM

apne tajurbe ka hawaala na do!
mere zaayqe ko apna masaala na do!

wasi karne ke liye maloomaat meri
deko, koi nayaa risaala na do!

hai qabooliyat dil se to wahi kaafi!
dikhaawe ke liye jai maala na do!

mayaar taalim ki karo oonchi janaab!
daulat pe sarakti paathshala na do!

hai maadri zubaan urdu apni MARHOOM!
meri ghazlo.n ko lafzo.n ka niwalaa na do!

Bahut badhiya MB saheb
Matla khaas raha..dili daad aur mubarakbaad

thank you,sir


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Re: meharbaani---------------MARHOOM BAHAYAAT

«Reply #20 on: November 05, 2013, 02:04:09 AM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on October 02, 2013, 09:31:45 PM

M B Jee Aadaab...!

WaaH janab waaH kia kahne ... puri kalaam umdaa rahi par matle ka jawaab hi nahi janab .. behad gazab ka aur umdaa matla kaha hai aapne...

Is umdaa kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...

thank you,sir


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«Reply #21 on: July 15, 2014, 11:07:31 PM »

Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on October 03, 2013, 02:26:27 AM

Bahut khoob MB jee.

thank you,sir


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