mehfil ka sach~~~ Saahil

by salil2002 on May 07, 2009, 09:30:32 AM
Pages: [1] 2  All
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 1642 times)
salil2002
Guest
Reply with quote
mehfil ko agar jaroorat hoti meri toh
main viraano main na gardish karta
kissii k haathon se jaam pi raha hota
kissii baahon main basar karta
magar muhje samjha nahin gaya mehfilon k qaabil
kyunki zubaa.n par sach ko liye phirta tha
jinhone bech rakhi ho sharafat apni chand sikko main
oonke beech sachchai ka but kahaan tikta hai
mujhe khushi hai kii mit gaya "saahil" shaan se
yahan kisko zakhm par marham laga sukoon milta hai
Logged
Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
Saahil by Azedmeer in Critics and Review only Forum
Mehfil~~ASHQ `~~~ Saahil by salil2002 in Shayri-E-Dard « 1 2  All »
ek mehfil ~~~ Saahil by salil2002 in Ghazals
Mehfil~~ Kyun diya ~~ SAAHIl by salil2002 in Ghazals
DARD KII MEHFIL ~~~ SAAHIL by salil2002 in Shayri-E-Dard
k.shael
Guest
«Reply #1 on: May 07, 2009, 09:36:13 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: salil2002 on May 07, 2009, 09:30:32 AM
mehfil ko agar jaroorat hoti meri toh
main viraano main na gardish karta
kissii k haathon se jaam pi raha hota
kissii baahon main basar karta
magar muhje samjha nahin gaya mehfilon k qaabil
kyunki zubaa.n par sach ko liye phirta tha
jinhone bech rakhi ho sharafat apni chand sikko main
oonke beech sachchai ka but kahaan tikta hai
mujhe khushi hai kii mit gaya "saahil" shaan se
yahan kisko zakhm par marham laga sukoon milta hai



Bahut Khoob Salil Ji,

Hoti agar chaht sanam ko meri dil se,
To mein u na dar dar uski chah me bhatakta,

Mil jaata agar sab kuch mangne bhar se hi,
To koi khuda ko apni dua me yaad na karta,

Ye to aadat hai apni apni insaan ki Salil,
Koi bata deta hai khushiya bhi apni aur koi gamm
ko bhi jahir nahi karta...

Shally.
Logged
dead heart
Guest
«Reply #2 on: May 07, 2009, 09:40:05 AM »
Reply with quote
Kya baat hai Salil bhaijan aur Shally jee...Bahaut hi acha likha hai ap dono ne hi... Applause
Logged
khamosh_aawaaz
Guest
«Reply #3 on: May 07, 2009, 09:45:10 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: salil2002 on May 07, 2009, 09:30:32 AM
mehfil ko agar jaroorat hoti meri toh
main viraano main na gardish karta
kissii k haathon se jaam pi raha hota
kissii baahon main basar karta
magar muhje samjha nahin gaya mehfilon k qaabil
kyunki zubaa.n par sach ko liye phirta tha
jinhone bech rakhi ho sharafat apni chand sikko main
oonke beech sachchai ka but kahaan tikta hai
mujhe khushi hai kii mit gaya "saahil" shaan se
yahan kisko zakhm par marham laga sukoon milta hai



GUD....S2002
Logged
honeyrose
Guest
«Reply #4 on: May 07, 2009, 12:30:14 PM »
Reply with quote
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohat khoob salil bro..

bohat khoob shally...
Logged
k.shael
Guest
«Reply #5 on: May 07, 2009, 12:38:21 PM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: honeyrose on May 07, 2009, 12:30:14 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohat khoob salil bro..

bohat khoob shally...

Shukriya Honey didi,

Shally.
Logged
Talat
Guest
«Reply #6 on: May 07, 2009, 05:34:06 PM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: salil2002 on May 07, 2009, 09:30:32 AM
mehfil ko agar jaroorat hoti meri toh
main viraano main na gardish karta
kissii k haathon se jaam pi raha hota
kissii baahon main basar karta
magar muhje samjha nahin gaya mehfilon k qaabil
kyunki zubaa.n par sach ko liye phirta tha
jinhone bech rakhi ho sharafat apni chand sikko main
oonke beech sachchai ka but kahaan tikta hai
mujhe khushi hai kii mit gaya "saahil" shaan se
yahan kisko zakhm par marham laga sukoon milta hai



Achcha likha hai Salil
Logged
Rajesh Harish
Guest
«Reply #7 on: May 08, 2009, 12:02:42 AM »
Reply with quote

  bhut %Ub sill jI
AOr xelI jI Aap ka .I jvab nhI       
Logged
Roja
Guest
«Reply #8 on: May 09, 2009, 02:43:32 AM »
Reply with quote
Wah bahut khoob Salil ji and dear Shally  Applause
Logged
salil2002
Guest
«Reply #9 on: May 30, 2009, 11:52:38 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: k.shael on May 07, 2009, 09:36:13 AM
Bahut Khoob Salil Ji,

Hoti agar chaht sanam ko meri dil se,
To mein u na dar dar uski chah me bhatakta,

Mil jaata agar sab kuch mangne bhar se hi,
To koi khuda ko apni dua me yaad na karta,

Ye to aadat hai apni apni insaan ki Salil,
Koi bata deta hai khushiya bhi apni aur koi gamm
ko bhi jahir nahi karta...

Shally.
Quote from: dead heart on May 07, 2009, 09:40:05 AM
Kya baat hai Salil bhaijan aur Shally jee...Bahaut hi acha likha hai ap dono ne hi... Applause
Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on May 07, 2009, 09:45:10 AM
GUD....S2002
Quote from: honeyrose on May 07, 2009, 12:30:14 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohat khoob salil bro..

bohat khoob shally...
Quote from: Celmira on May 07, 2009, 05:34:06 PM
Achcha likha hai Salil
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on May 08, 2009, 12:02:42 AM
  bhut %Ub sill jI
AOr xelI jI Aap ka .I jvab nhI       
Quote from: Roja on May 09, 2009, 02:43:32 AM
Wah bahut khoob Salil ji and dear Shally  Applause
thanks talat di, shally, jaya di, K_A,roza, raheem
Logged
khwahish
WeCare
Khaas Shayar
**

Rau: 166
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
272 days, 6 hours and 11 minutes.

Posts: 11814
Member Since: Sep 2006


View Profile
«Reply #10 on: May 31, 2009, 09:59:18 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: salil2002 on May 07, 2009, 09:30:32 AM
mehfil ko agar jaroorat hoti meri toh
main viraano main na gardish karta
kissii k haathon se jaam pi raha hota
kissii baahon main basar karta
magar muhje samjha nahin gaya mehfilon k qaabil
kyunki zubaa.n par sach ko liye phirta tha
jinhone bech rakhi ho sharafat apni chand sikko main
oonke beech sachchai ka but kahaan tikta hai
mujhe khushi hai kii mit gaya "saahil" shaan se
yahan kisko zakhm par marham laga sukoon milta hai



Nice One Salil.. Clapping Smiley

Quote from: k.shael on May 07, 2009, 09:36:13 AM
Bahut Khoob Salil Ji,

Hoti agar chaht sanam ko meri dil se,
To mein u na dar dar uski chah me bhatakta,

Mil jaata agar sab kuch mangne bhar se hi,
To koi khuda ko apni dua me yaad na karta,

Ye to aadat hai apni apni insaan ki Salil,
Koi bata deta hai khushiya bhi apni aur koi gamm
ko bhi jahir nahi karta...

Shally.

Bahut Khoob Shally!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley[/color][/b]
Logged
salil2002
Guest
«Reply #11 on: May 31, 2009, 01:09:37 PM »
Reply with quote
shukriya khwahish bhai
Logged
marhoom bahayaat
Guest
«Reply #12 on: July 06, 2009, 07:43:33 AM »
Reply with quote

NICE COMPOSITION SAHIL JI Applause Applause Applause
Logged
salil2002
Guest
«Reply #13 on: July 18, 2009, 07:28:16 AM »
Reply with quote
shukriya marhoom bhai
Logged
madhuwesh
Guest
«Reply #14 on: July 18, 2009, 07:41:33 AM »
Reply with quote
Wah Saahil ji,bahut khoob,very nice and beautiful creation, icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:beautiful lines by Shally ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Logged
Pages: [1] 2  All
ReplyPrint
Yoindia ShayariAdab > Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari > Miscellaneous Shayri > Topic: mehfil ka sach~~~ Saahil
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
User
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
December 23, 2024, 02:24:07 AM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
Shayri
by mkv
[December 22, 2024, 05:36:15 PM]
मोहब्बत लिखने की ,,,saah...
by saahill
[December 19, 2024, 08:27:42 AM]
तुम्हारे ख़्वाब ,,,,, sa...
by saahill
[December 17, 2024, 08:39:55 AM]
सुना था मोहब्बत ,,,, saa...
by saahill
[December 15, 2024, 06:04:49 AM]
साजिश नहीं ,,,, saahill
by saahill
[December 13, 2024, 06:54:09 AM]
zikar tumhara ,,,, saahil...
by saahill
[December 10, 2024, 08:23:12 AM]
khamosh ,,,, saahill
by saahill
[December 10, 2024, 08:22:15 AM]
Hyderabadi language
by Arif Uddin
[December 03, 2024, 07:06:48 PM]
parhezz ,,,, saahill
by saahill
[November 26, 2024, 08:47:05 AM]
mulaqaat nhi ho rahi,,,, ...
by saahill
[November 21, 2024, 09:01:29 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.151 seconds with 25 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8508 Real Poets and poetry admirer