----- /// Mehfil veeraan milte hain /// ----

by klaskar on May 02, 2010, 09:28:39 PM
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kahin sher milte hain, kahin shaayar milte hain,
par shayari ki mehfil me bas aashiq milte hain,
koi mohabbat pe likhte hain to koi dard pe likhte hain,
par kahin na kahin jaroor unke khayalat milte hain,

unme se kuch hain jo humein roz milte hain,
unme se kuch hain jinse hamare soch milte hain,
samajh lete hain wo hamare lekh me likhe dard ko,
shayad kuch hadd tak unse hamare dard milte hain,

saahil se aake jaane roz kitne kashti milte hain,
samundar se aake jaane roz kitne nadi milte hain,
dekh k unhe hamari soch bhi kehti hai humse aksar,
humse bhi koi mile jinse hamare ehsaas milte hain,

akele hain hum yahaan jahaan bahut log milte hain,
mehfilon me doston k hum aksar tanha milte hain,
shayad kuch kami reh gayi hogi hamari hasti me,
tabhi hamare saare mehfil yun veeraan milte hain...
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«Reply #1 on: May 02, 2010, 11:06:20 PM »
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Kya baat keh di .........

Bhut bhut Khoob ...............

KApil Gud work keep writng!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #2 on: May 02, 2010, 11:32:39 PM »
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Wow bahut khoob Kapil ji.very touchig,lovely and mindblowig creation.excellent.bahut pasand aayi aapke poem. Hats off to you! Both Thumbs Up Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: May 03, 2010, 04:23:59 AM »
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Waah bahoot Khoob Kapil ji.. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #4 on: May 03, 2010, 08:15:45 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Klaskar Ji..

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Soch!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: May 03, 2010, 08:20:23 AM »
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Awesome creation.......
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«Reply #6 on: May 03, 2010, 08:24:33 AM »
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wah wah bahut khoob klaskar ji chha gaye.
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kuchh na kuchh to milta hai sabka aapas mein.
lekin kuchh ka bahut kuchh milta hai aapas mein.

bahut kuchh mein bhi kuchh khaas milta hai aapas mein.
kuch khaas hote hain jo yoindia par milte hain aapas mein.



samajh lijiye
Quote from: klaskar on May 02, 2010, 09:28:39 PM
kahin sher milte hain, kahin shaayar milte hain,
par shayari ki mehfil me bas aashiq milte hain,
koi mohabbat pe likhte hain to koi dard pe likhte hain,
par kahin na kahin jaroor unke khayalat milte hain,

unme se kuch hain jo humein roz milte hain,
unme se kuch hain jinse hamare soch milte hain,
samajh lete hain wo hamare lekh me likhe dard ko,
shayad kuch hadd tak unse hamare dard milte hain,

saahil se aake jaane roz kitne kashti milte hain,
samundar se aake jaane roz kitne nadi milte hain,
dekh k unhe hamari soch bhi kehti hai humse aksar,
humse bhi koi mile jinse hamare ehsaas milte hain,

akele hain hum yahaan jahaan bahut log milte hain,
mehfilon me doston k hum aksar tanha milte hain,
shayad kuch kami reh gayi hogi hamari hasti me,
tabhi hamare saare mehfil yun veeraan milte hain...
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«Reply #7 on: May 03, 2010, 10:52:13 AM »
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Wah wah Kapil bahot achhi nazm likhi hai. Milne milaane ke mutalliq khoob tafseel mein bataya hai. Nice creation.
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«Reply #8 on: May 03, 2010, 10:55:33 AM »
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Aapne to kamaal ki baat kahi hai Suresh ji. Zaheen jo ho.
Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on May 03, 2010, 08:24:33 AM
wah wah bahut khoob klaskar ji chha gaye.
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kuchh na kuchh to milta hai sabka aapas mein.
lekin kuchh ka bahut kuchh milta hai aapas mein.

bahut kuchh mein bhi kuchh khaas milta hai aapas mein.
kuch khaas hote hain jo yoindia par milte hain aapas mein.

samajh lijiye
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«Reply #9 on: May 03, 2010, 01:04:23 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Neel ji... . thanx a lot...!!!

Quote from: neelgold on May 02, 2010, 11:06:20 PM
Kya baat keh di .........

Bhut bhut Khoob ...............

KApil Gud work keep writng!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #10 on: May 03, 2010, 01:06:10 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji... aur ye aapke madat ke bina shayad hi poori ho paati... shukriya Madhu ji...!!!

Quote from: madhuwesh on May 02, 2010, 11:32:39 PM
Wow bahut khoob Kapil ji.very touchig,lovely and mindblowig creation.excellent.bahut pasand aayi aapke poem. Hats off to you! Both Thumbs Up Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: May 03, 2010, 01:10:06 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Divya ji...!!!

Quote from: Sophi on May 03, 2010, 04:23:59 AM
Waah bahoot Khoob Kapil ji.. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob!
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bahut bahut shukriya Khwaish ji...!!!

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Bahut Bahut Khoob Klaskar Ji..

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Soch!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: May 03, 2010, 01:13:23 PM »
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Thank u so much...!!!

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«Reply #14 on: May 03, 2010, 01:20:08 PM »
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Shukriya Suresh ji....aur aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...

Yoindia ka nasha kuch is qadar fail raha hai,
lag raha hai jaise ki koi virus fail raha hai,
hamare saare waqt aur saare feelings ka access leke,
ye buri tarah hamare dil-o-dimaag me fail raha hai....


Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on May 03, 2010, 08:24:33 AM
wah wah bahut khoob klaskar ji chha gaye.
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kuchh na kuchh to milta hai sabka aapas mein.
lekin kuchh ka bahut kuchh milta hai aapas mein.

bahut kuchh mein bhi kuchh khaas milta hai aapas mein.
kuch khaas hote hain jo yoindia par milte hain aapas mein.



samajh lijiye
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