----- /// Mehfil veeraan milte hain /// ----

by klaskar on May 02, 2010, 09:28:39 PM
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«Reply #15 on: May 03, 2010, 01:39:05 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Riyaz ji...!!!

Quote from: riyaz106 on May 03, 2010, 10:52:13 AM
Wah wah Kapil bahot achhi nazm likhi hai. Milne milaane ke mutalliq khoob tafseel mein bataya hai. Nice creation.
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«Reply #16 on: May 03, 2010, 10:13:15 PM »
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HUM SE BHI KOI MILE JINSE HUMARE AHSAAS MILTE HAIN

KYA KHOOB KAHA HAI AAPNE KAPILJI!!!
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«Reply #17 on: May 03, 2010, 10:53:42 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Mamta ji...!!!

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HUM SE BHI KOI MILE JINSE HUMARE AHSAAS MILTE HAIN

KYA KHOOB KAHA HAI AAPNE KAPILJI!!!
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«Reply #18 on: May 04, 2010, 11:44:54 AM »
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wah wah  Applause Applause  notworthy

bahut khoob...

mehfil saja ney key liye shayer hi chahyey
aashiq ko samajney ke liye shayer ki shayri chahye
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«Reply #19 on: May 04, 2010, 12:02:41 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Badal ji...

hum to mehfil me bas shayari karte hain,
koi mere sher ko sher samjhe to kya baat ho,
dard pe mere log waah waah bhi karte hain,
koi mere dard ko dard samjhe to kya baat ho...

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wah wah  Applause Applause  notworthy

bahut khoob...

mehfil saja ney key liye shayer hi chahyey
aashiq ko samajney ke liye shayer ki shayri chahye
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«Reply #20 on: May 04, 2010, 12:24:57 PM »
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tahe dil se shukriya Riyaz ji, icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Quote from: riyaz106 on May 03, 2010, 10:55:33 AM
Aapne to kamaal ki baat kahi hai Suresh ji. Zaheen jo ho.
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«Reply #21 on: May 04, 2010, 12:27:33 PM »
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thanks kapilji.
aappne bahut theek farmaaya hai.
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Quote from: klaskar on May 03, 2010, 01:20:08 PM
Shukriya Suresh ji....aur aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...

Yoindia ka nasha kuch is qadar fail raha hai,
lag raha hai jaise ki koi virus fail raha hai,
hamare saare waqt aur saare feelings ka access leke,
ye buri tarah hamare dil-o-dimaag me fail raha hai....
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«Reply #22 on: May 06, 2010, 09:49:44 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on May 02, 2010, 09:28:39 PM
kahin sher milte hain, kahin shaayar milte hain,
par shayari ki mehfil me bas aashiq milte hain,
koi mohabbat pe likhte hain to koi dard pe likhte hain,
par kahin na kahin jaroor unke khayalat milte hain,

unme se kuch hain jo humein roz milte hain,
unme se kuch hain jinse hamare soch milte hain,
samajh lete hain wo hamare lekh me likhe dard ko,
shayad kuch hadd tak unse hamare dard milte hain,

saahil se aake jaane roz kitne kashti milte hain,
samundar se aake jaane roz kitne nadi milte hain,
dekh k unhe hamari soch bhi kehti hai humse aksar,
humse bhi koi mile jinse hamare ehsaas milte hain,

akele hain hum yahaan jahaan bahut log milte hain,
mehfilon me doston k hum aksar tanha milte hain,
shayad kuch kami reh gayi hogi hamari hasti me,
tabhi hamare saare mehfil yun veeraan milte hain...

Bahut khoob Kapil Ji
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«Reply #23 on: May 06, 2010, 10:41:46 PM »
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shukriya Rajesh ji.... waise do din YO pe nahi aaye to bhool gaye ki kiske naam k aage "Ji" nahi lagana hai Huh??

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on May 06, 2010, 09:49:44 PM
Bahut khoob Kapil Ji
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«Reply #24 on: May 06, 2010, 10:53:28 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on May 06, 2010, 10:41:46 PM
shukriya Rajesh ji.... waise do din YO pe nahi aaye to bhool gaye ki kiske naam k aage "Ji" nahi lagana hai Huh??


I was attending Teacher's Conference about 200 Km away from home, from 3rd to 6th May
Waise hum bhoole nahi par aadat se lachaar hai
Aage se dhyaan rakkhenge
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«Reply #25 on: May 06, 2010, 11:09:59 PM »
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Shukriya Rajesh ji...!!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on May 06, 2010, 10:53:28 PM

I was attending Teacher's Conference about 200 Km away from home, from 3rd to 6th May
Waise hum bhoole nahi par aadat se lachaar hai
Aage se dhyaan rakkhenge
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«Reply #26 on: May 09, 2010, 01:17:38 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on May 02, 2010, 09:28:39 PM
kahin sher milte hain, kahin shaayar milte hain,
par shayari ki mehfil me bas aashiq milte hain,
koi mohabbat pe likhte hain to koi dard pe likhte hain,
par kahin na kahin jaroor unke khayalat milte hain,

unme se kuch hain jo humein roz milte hain,
unme se kuch hain jinse hamare soch milte hain,
samajh lete hain wo hamare lekh me likhe dard ko,
shayad kuch hadd tak unse hamare dard milte hain,

saahil se aake jaane roz kitne kashti milte hain,
samundar se aake jaane roz kitne nadi milte hain,
dekh k unhe hamari soch bhi kehti hai humse aksar,
humse bhi koi mile jinse hamare ehsaas milte hain,

akele hain hum yahaan jahaan bahut log milte hain,
mehfilon me doston k hum aksar tanha milte hain,
shayad kuch kami reh gayi hogi hamari hasti me,
tabhi hamare saare mehfil yun veeraan milte hain...
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achhi  poem hai
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virano me log aksar tanha paye jate hai
tanha se  koi mahfil sajaye nahi jate jai
baat ek karo
tanhai se bhichudo ya virano se pyaar karo
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«Reply #27 on: May 09, 2010, 07:44:02 PM »
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shukriya Veena ji...!!!

aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...!!!

hum bichhadna nahi chahte apni tanhaayion se,
par hume veerano se bhi bepanah mohabbat hai,
ye dono kuch waqt tak hi saath ho to achcha hai,
warna aisi chahat to hoti jaanlewa chahat hai...

Quote from: veenavarsha on May 09, 2010, 01:17:38 PM
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achhi  poem hai
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virano me log aksar tanha paye jate hai
tanha se  koi mahfil sajaye nahi jate jai
baat ek karo
tanhai se bhichudo ya virano se pyaar karo
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