mera sath nibhata hai mehkhana.......soudagar

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jis shaam main tumse milta hoon to maikhana nirash hota hai
jab maikhane mein guzarati hai shaam to tera dil udas hota hai

mujhe tujhse bhi hia mohabat, mujhe maiqada ki bhi hai jarurat
dono ke sath beeta hr lamha mere liye khas hota hai

tere dur chale jane par maikhana mera sath nibhata hai
saqi dost ban sunta hai dil ki , jab bh dil udas hota hai

kabhi kehti ho tere sang jeena marna, kabhi nahi ho sakta milan hamara
maiqada nahi karta dogli batein,tumse jyada to ab maikhane par vishwas hota hai

pehle judai ka zakhm deti ho, marhmi peeta hoon to kehti ho peena chhod doon
suno jaana "soudagar" pee-ta tabhi hai jab dil teri judai mein bahut hras hota hai..
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«Reply #1 on: June 25, 2012, 05:09:20 PM »
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Vaah...bahut khoob saudagar jee
kahee ham nashe me na aa jaayen..
vaise ham peete nahee..choote tak nahee..par padhkar bhee nasha ho sakta hai na.
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«Reply #2 on: June 25, 2012, 05:16:15 PM »
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bahut  bahut shukriya mkv ji...
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«Reply #3 on: June 25, 2012, 05:27:22 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
 JISE NASHA HO KUCHH LIKHNE KA USE PEENE KI ZAROORAT NAHIN HOTI
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«Reply #4 on: June 25, 2012, 05:29:47 PM »
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waah waah waah waah
bohot khoob likha hai jnab bilkul sahi kaha aapne !!

or 4 sher mai to mere dil ki baat keh gaye aap

bohot khoob sir g bohot khoob   Clapping Smiley  hello  icon_salut icon_salut notworthy
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«Reply #5 on: June 25, 2012, 08:13:22 PM »
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Bahut khoobsurat sa kalam hai.
Kuch roj pahle aapne hame cadbury dee thee aaj ham aapko cadbury de rahe hai kabool karni hogee.
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«Reply #8 on: June 26, 2012, 01:49:58 PM »
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Soudagar ji .. bahut khoobsurat ehsaaso ko aapne jod ke ek massstt waali poem tayyar ki hai... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne... ek dum massstt raapchik.....!!!!
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«Reply #9 on: June 26, 2012, 01:56:59 PM »
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""mujhko yaaro maaf karna main bhi nashe mein hoon""
saudagar ji, yeh kya kiya aapne bin peeye hi nashe mein sarabore kar diya aise karenge to kai maikhane band na ho jayen", anyway khubsurat kalam ke liye bahut bahut badhai
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«Reply #10 on: June 26, 2012, 03:53:12 PM »
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Quote from: soudagar on June 25, 2012, 04:57:10 PM
jis shaam main tumse milta hoon to mehkhana nirash hota hai
jab mehkhane mein guzarati hai shaam to tera dil udas hota hai

mujhe tujhse bhi hia mohabat, mujhe maiqada ki bhi hai jarurat
dono ke sath beeta hr lamha mere liye khas hota hai

tere dur chale jane par mehkhana mera sath nibhata hai
saqi dost ban sunta hai dil ki , jab bh dil udas hota hai

kabhi kehti ho tere sang jeena marna, kabhi nahi ho sakta milan hamara
maiqada nahi karta dogli batein,tumse jyada to ab mehkhane par vishwas hota hai

pehle judai ka zakhm deti ho, marhmi peeta hoon to kehti ho peena chhod doon
suno jaana "soudagar" pee-ta tabhi hai jab dil teri judai mein bahut hras hota hai..


Waah Waah Waah Saudagar Ji..

bahut Hi Khoobsurat Aur Nasheeli peshkash..

bahut Ache, Sirf Ek Spelling Theek Kijiye..It Is "Maikhana"

Baaki Bahut Hi khoob  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: June 26, 2012, 04:05:33 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya roy sahbh
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bahut bahut shukriya masoom sehzada ji
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bahut bahut dhanywad saini sir.......
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bahut bahut shukria hriday ji
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