meray geeton k mazaar (NM)

by vb on November 08, 2010, 06:13:05 PM
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«Reply #1 on: November 08, 2010, 06:58:55 PM »
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bht hi pyara likha hai VB ji aapne..
as always..
maine bhi likh diya aapka likha padhke iska jawab.......
hope apko pasand aayega.......
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«Reply #2 on: November 08, 2010, 08:13:51 PM »
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bahut khoob!

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«Reply #3 on: November 09, 2010, 04:12:33 AM »
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sahir ji ki lines behadd sunder hai ji..... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower


Yu yaad me meri tum nagme banaaye jaate ho......
Mere sheron ki mazaar pe ashqon k diye jalaaye jaate ho....

Ye jaan mein tou ban teri jaan tujh me he jiye ja raha hu
Kyu tu mujhe apne se durr alag maane jaa rahi hai......

Meri har saans teri he saans ke saath judi huyee hai
Tere bina ek pal bhi meri rooh kab sakun se reh payee hai...

Laut aaunga jaldee mein he teri julfon ki chhaav mai
Mere sanam naa ho udaas,deewali mana k aaunga mai....

Mitt jaayengi sab galat fehmiyen,na seh tu ab unka dard
Tujhe kasam meri,ashqon se na nawaaz mere sheron ko tu....

Inhe mai tou basti hai jaan meri,jaanti he tu o-meri-jaan
Jazbaaton ki aandhiyon mai naa beh,bas ab hai thoda intezaar......

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Quote from: vb on November 08, 2010, 06:13:05 PM

“khud apnay qadmon ki aahat say jheemptay dartay”
raat k saath wo, chupkay say chalay aatay hain
meray geeton k mazaaron pay haazri denay
roze aatay hain wo, chupkay say chalay jaatay hain
khusk phoolon ki qaba, phir say mehek jaati hay
kya huva gar, koi shamaa nahi jlaatay hain
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«Reply #4 on: November 09, 2010, 08:40:57 AM »
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bahut khoob vb jii~
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«Reply #5 on: November 09, 2010, 04:36:55 PM »
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ohhhoo ...kya nazaakat se dard bayaan kiya. bahaut khoob vb ji !
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«Reply #6 on: November 10, 2010, 01:32:14 AM »
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Bahot khoob likha ji VB ji. Andaz e takhayyul bahot haseen hai. Dheron daad.
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«Reply #7 on: November 10, 2010, 05:13:17 AM »
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wah chand lines me dheron ehsaas
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