meray mazhab! (NM)

by vb on February 24, 2011, 07:00:46 AM
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«Reply #1 on: February 26, 2011, 04:04:28 PM »
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lajawaaaab lajawaaab creation VB sirji.
ye nagma mujhse bach kese gaya tha.
kamaaaaal hai ye poetry.
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ghane kohre dil ki gar chatt nhi sakte--
mashaal dil ki lahoo se,jalane ki izajat day day !!!
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«Reply #2 on: February 26, 2011, 04:28:35 PM »
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Waqt k zakhmon ko seenay ki ijaazat day day
Meray mazhab! mujhay jeenay ki ijaazat day day

Un ko apna loon tujhay gar ye bura lagta hay
To mujhay zeher he peenay ki ijaazat day day

Doob jaaoon na gunaahon k samandar main kahin
Mujh ko chaahat k safeenay ki ijaazat day day

Wo jaa chukay hain junoon ko sawaal pakra kar
Meray junoon ko madeenay ki ijaazat day day

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Bahut khoob vb ji..
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«Reply #3 on: February 26, 2011, 04:59:09 PM »
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Waqt k zakhmon ko seenay ki ijaazat day day
Meray mazhab! mujhay jeenay ki ijaazat day day

Un ko apna loon tujhay gar ye bura lagta hay
To mujhay zeher he peenay ki ijaazat day day

Doob jaaoon na gunaahon k samandar main kahin
Mujh ko chaahat k safeenay ki ijaazat day day

Wo jaa chukay hain junoon ko sawaal pakra kar
Meray junoon ko madeenay ki ijaazat day day

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VP SAHAB AAKRI SHER KA MATLAB CLEAR NAIN HAI. ISE MAZEED BYAAN KARIEN TO MEHARBAANI HO GI
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«Reply #4 on: March 01, 2011, 08:21:43 AM »
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mahutram VB sahab aadab ,,

Apke Ashaar nazar nawaz howe ,, khoob mazamin laye hain app dad o mubarak baad khubool karen,,, apke kalam ne pore aalam ko apne hisaar me le rakha hai ,, na jaane hum jaise kitne hi nau amoz apke mayari kalamo.N se mustafeed ho rahe hain aur inshallah mustaqbil me bhi hote rahenge allah kare ye tassasul kabhi na toote ,,..  Taham Matle ka misra-e- saani samjhne se khaasir hon ,, ye faqat o faqt meri kamm ilmi o muqtasar mutale ke sabab umid hai ap khiyal nahi karenge ,, aur jald az jald is dil soz ghazal ke baaqi ashar bhi parhne ka sharf hasil hoga ...meri koi baat agar nagawar guzre to mazrat khaw hun .. allah apko do jahan ki barkato.N se nawaze ...


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«Reply #5 on: March 01, 2011, 08:30:16 AM »
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bahut khub vbji.... aapki shayari main kamal ki gahrai hai.... umda

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