mere aks ki pehchaan

by thegrimreaper on July 22, 2009, 02:47:53 PM
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dhundta hoon apne aks ko aaine ki gehraiyon mein
ek parchaai dikhti hai dhundli se tanhaiyon mein

dekhti hai mujhe us nazar se,maangti hai mujhse kuch jawaab
khade hain khamosh main aur mera zameer bin jawaab behisaab

The Grim Reaper


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«Reply #1 on: July 22, 2009, 07:46:53 PM »
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nice
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thegrimreaper
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«Reply #2 on: July 22, 2009, 09:03:17 PM »
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thankyou chitralsony angel11
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sanya310
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«Reply #3 on: July 22, 2009, 09:20:05 PM »
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good one grimreaper! keep writing
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thegrimreaper
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«Reply #4 on: July 22, 2009, 09:24:35 PM »
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thanks sanya(aka nobia)  hello
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Pooja
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«Reply #5 on: July 22, 2009, 09:37:29 PM »
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Nice lines TGR ji!!
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Talat
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«Reply #6 on: July 22, 2009, 09:46:02 PM »
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dhundta hoon apne aks ko aaine ki gehraiyon mein
ek parchaai dikhti hai dhundli se tanhaiyon mein

dekhti hai mujhe us nazar se,maangti hai mujhse kuch jawaab
khade hain khamosh main aur mera zameer bin jawaab behisaab

The Grim Reaper


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Aap ke asha'ar pe mujhe apna ek sher yaad aa gaya, jo maine kal ek thread main likha tha:


Dhoond Rahe Hain Aaino Main, Shayad Ek Aks Hi Mile,
Jaane Kahan Chorh Aaye Khud Ko, Hum Ko Bhi Khabar Nahi
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«Reply #7 on: July 22, 2009, 09:57:29 PM »
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Applause Applause Bohot Khoob Reaper Ji


Aap ke asha'ar pe mujhe apna ek sher yaad aa gaya, jo maine kal ek thread main likha tha:


Dhoond Rahe Hain Aaino Main, Shayad Ek Aks Hi Mile,
Jaane Kahan Chorh Aaye Khud Ko, Hum Ko Bhi Khabar Nahi

thankyou and really a wonderful composition angel8
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«Reply #8 on: July 22, 2009, 09:58:35 PM »
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Nice lines TGR ji!!

thanks pooja ji hello
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«Reply #9 on: July 23, 2009, 12:35:59 AM »
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Wah Grim ji very beautiful creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: July 23, 2009, 01:14:54 PM »
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Wah Grim ji very beautiful creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause

thankyou madhuwesh ji
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