Mere andhere mkam na hue.......mann

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Ghar main diye jalaye magar, Mere andhere kam na hue.
Raushni ke lage lakh mele magar, Unmain shamil ham na hue.

Khushiyan to sab apni, Kahin dur kho gayen thin,
Khushiyon ki baat chhodiye, apne to gham na hue.

Saari duniyan ko khushiyan di us khuda ne magar,
Kyon ham par hi uske rahm-o-karam na hue.

Ghata banke barasi thi chahat sabhi par,
Mere khwab hi jane kyun shabnam shabnam na hue.

Sunke afasana mera wo bhi hairan the,
na dost hue wo mere aur hamdam na hue.

Mann
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«Reply #1 on: November 19, 2012, 04:10:31 AM »
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bohut khoob maan jee umda peshkash hai daada qubool karen.
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«Reply #2 on: November 19, 2012, 05:36:10 AM »
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bahut khoob, dhero dad
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«Reply #3 on: November 19, 2012, 05:40:03 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
very beautifully said n congrats
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bahut khoob, dhero dad
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Bahut khoob likha aap ne...very nice....
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bahut badhiy mann jee
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Mann Jee Aadaab!


Bahut khoob jee bahut khoob... Bade h gehre aur umdaa khayaal bune
hai aapne... Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe... Usual Smile


Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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bahut bahut shukriya Aarishji
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Maan ji bahut khubsurat rachna pesh ki hai aap ne ...bahut-bahut badhayi aur daad kabool kijiye....
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