Mere haal se bekhabar

by soudagar on March 09, 2013, 06:52:16 PM
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Dil mayus zindgi se is qadar rahta hai
manzil ka pta nahi jaari safar rhta hai

neend aakhon mein ek pal bhi thehar nahi pati
tu kaise inme din bhar raat bhar rahta hai

main mehkta hun teri khusbo se vdi der tak
yun teri yad aane ka mujhpe asar rahta hai

mere dil ko teri fikr itni jyada hai kee tu
mujhme rahta hai  mujhse behtar rhta hai

jan jaati hai sari mehfil mujhe dekhte hee
ek bas tu hee mere haal se bekhbr rahta hai

vishesh
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«Reply #1 on: March 09, 2013, 07:23:57 PM »
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So Nice...........
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«Reply #2 on: March 09, 2013, 07:25:02 PM »
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Quote from: soudagar on March 09, 2013, 06:52:16 PM
Dil mayus zindgi se is qadar rahta hai
manzil ka pta nahi jaari safar rhta hai
maayoos hone ki zaroorat nahin . safar jaari rakho. manzil zaroor nmile gi icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
neend aakhon mein ek pal bhi thehar nahi pati
tu kaise inme din bhar raat bhar rahta hai
main to bade aaraam se soti hoon. kaam kar ke itna thhak jaati hoon ki aur kuch sochne ki gunjaaish nahin rahti icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
main mehkta hun teri khusbo se vdi der tak
yun teri yad aane ka mujhpe asar rahta hai
sharaab peene ke baad uski khumaari subah tak rahti hai Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
mere dil ko teri fikr itni jyada hai kee tu
mujhme rahta hai  mujhse behtar rhta hai
kya baat hai.bada damdaar sher hai. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
jan jaati hai sari mehfil mujhe dekhte hee
ek bas tu hee mere haal se bekhbr rahta hai
mujhe fursat hi nahin sarr uthaane ki. muaaf karo.kya karoon main icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent
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bahut umdaa............!
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«Reply #3 on: March 09, 2013, 07:26:13 PM »
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Quote from: soudagar on March 09, 2013, 06:52:16 PM
Dil mayus zindgi se is qadar rahta hai
manzil ka pta nahi jaari safar rhta hai

neend aakhon mein ek pal bhi thehar nahi pati
tu kaise inme din bhar raat bhar rahta hai

main mehkta hun teri khusbo se vdi der tak
yun teri yad aane ka mujhpe asar rahta hai

mere dil ko teri fikr itni jyada hai kee tu
mujhme rahta hai  mujhse behtar rhta hai

jan jaati hai sari mehfil mujhe dekhte hee
ek bas tu hee mere haal se bekhbr rahta hai

vishesh

bahut khoob beta
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«Reply #4 on: March 09, 2013, 08:09:28 PM »
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Quote from: soudagar on March 09, 2013, 06:52:16 PM
Dil mayus zindgi se is qadar rahta hai
manzil ka pta nahi jaari safar rhta hai

neend aakhon mein ek pal bhi thehar nahi pati
tu kaise inme din bhar raat bhar rahta hai

main mehkta hun teri khusbo se vdi der tak
yun teri yad aane ka mujhpe asar rahta hai

mere dil ko teri fikr itni jyada hai kee tu
mujhme rahta hai  mujhse behtar rhta hai

jan jaati hai sari mehfil mujhe dekhte hee
ek bas tu hee mere haal se bekhbr rahta hai

vishesh


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"Mujhme Rehta Hai Mujhse Behtar Rehta Hai" Kya Baaaaaaaaaaaaat Hai...!!!!!

Bahut Ache Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: March 09, 2013, 11:32:39 PM »
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Quote from: soudagar on March 09, 2013, 06:52:16 PM
Dil mayus zindgi se is qadar rahta hai
manzil ka pta nahi jaari safar rhta hai

neend aakhon mein ek pal bhi thehar nahi pati
tu kaise inme din bhar raat bhar rahta hai

main mehkta hun teri khusbo se vdi der tak
yun teri yad aane ka mujhpe asar rahta hai

mere dil ko teri fikr itni jyada hai kee tu
mujhme rahta hai  mujhse behtar rhta hai

jan jaati hai sari mehfil mujhe dekhte hee
ek bas tu hee mere haal se bekhbr rahta hai

vishesh

bahot khoob Applause Applause Applause
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boht khub saudagar ji
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


Aadaab Janab..!


Kia kahne jee waah waah aur bus waaH hi nikal rahi hai .. Usual Smile
Yaqeen janiye waqai hi behad umdaa aur behad khoob kalaam kahi
hai aapne.. behad aalaa darje ke ashaar kahe hai.. gazab ki soNch
O fikr dekhne mili aapki is kalaam meiN.. Usual Smile

humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye .. har ashaar
qabil e daad hai janab.. Usual Smile

Aise hi umdaa kalaam kahte rahiye.. Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Mehfil ko aabaad rakhiye..

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: March 10, 2013, 09:40:14 AM »
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Dil mayus zindgi se is qadar rahta hai

manzil ka pta nahi jaari safar rhta hai

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause kya baat hai wah wah


neend aakhon mein ek pal bhi thehar nahi pati

tu kaise inme din bhar raat bhar rahta hai

wah wah wah wah wah kya baat hai saudagar bhai umda bohut umda jitni tareef karuN is shair ki kam hai,meri nazar meN shayad abtak ka sabse jaandaar shair hai aapka,

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


bohut umda saudagar bhai lajwab ghazal hai dherrron daaaad aur rau qubool karen

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: March 10, 2013, 01:35:47 PM »
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very nice
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«Reply #11 on: March 10, 2013, 07:20:32 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
awesome composition. bahut bahut khoob. dheron daad.
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«Reply #12 on: March 17, 2013, 07:54:53 PM »
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SHUKRIYA
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shukriya ravi ji
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