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Mere hi naam se ik din tujhe pahchana jayega.
Tera jab naam aayega mera bhi naam aayega.

Tujhe maalum kya hamne tujhe khuch aise chaha hai,
Tere deewanon ke charchon main mera hi naam aayega.

Tujhe ik din sikha denge wafa kaise nibhate hain,
Wafadaaron ke kisson main mera hi naam aayega.

Ke likkhe jayenge jab bhi muhabbat ke fasaanon kuchh,
Tere sare fasaanon main mera hi naam aayega.

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Re: Mere hi naam se ik din.... mann

«Reply #1 on: November 07, 2011, 04:35:30 AM »

Khub
khawish ye nahi ke jamane mei auro ki tarah mujko bhi jana jaaya
khawish to bus itni si hai tere lab pe bus tere mera naam aaye

Quote from: mann.mann on November 07, 2011, 04:05:37 AM


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Re: Mere hi naam se ik din.... mann

«Reply #2 on: November 07, 2011, 04:39:30 AM »

dhanyawad manojji... aapne bhi khub likha hai


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Re: Mere hi naam se ik din.... mann

«Reply #3 on: November 07, 2011, 06:18:43 AM »

Bahut Khoob likha hai mann ji apne.
Likhte rahiye


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Re: Mere hi naam se ik din.... mann

«Reply #4 on: November 07, 2011, 08:39:26 AM »

Mann Jee Aadaab!

Kafi damdaar aur purasar bayaani rahi aapki
is kalaam meiN.. Sabhi ahsaas O khayaal ko
behad khub lafz diye hai aapne..

Humari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye..

par aapka likhane ka andaaz aur likhne ki samjh
ko hum jante hai so is wajaaH se kaheNge ke aapne
is kalaam meiN shayad kuch waqt nahi diya..

Technicaly kalaam behad kamzor rahi.. Par ahsaas
is qadar asardar the ke kalaam ke khamiyaaN kahiN
nazar nahi aayeNgi..

Khair humari daad kabul kijiye..
Likhate rahiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez..

Quote from: mann.mann on November 07, 2011, 04:05:37 AM

Mere hi naam se ik din tujhe pahchana jayega.
Tera jab naam aayega mera bhi naam aayega.

Tujhe maalum kya hamne tujhe khuch aise chaha hai,
Tere deewanon ke charchon main mera hi naam aayega.

Tujhe ik din sikha denge wafa kaise nibhate hain,
Wafadaaron ke kisson main mera hi naam aayega.

Ke likkhe jayenge jab bhi muhabbat ke fasaanon kuchh,
Tere sare fasaanon main mera hi naam aayega.

Ke likha jayeNga jab bhi muhobbat ke fasaanoN ko

mann


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Re: Mere hi naam se ik din.... mann

«Reply #5 on: November 07, 2011, 10:31:06 AM »

bahut dhanyawad mkvji


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Re: Mere hi naam se ik din.... mann

«Reply #6 on: November 07, 2011, 10:38:19 AM »

danyawad parwaazji

wakai bahut achchhe se jante hain aap hame aur hamare likhne ke andaz ko.... sahi kaha aapne.... pahla sher apne aap bana jaisa ki hamare sath hamesha hota hai... aur aage jo likhna chahte the wo nahin likh paye aur jaisa ki aajkal kam hi likhte hain so chhod diya aise hi.....aur ham jo likhna chahte the use lafz nahin de paye....

muafi chahte hain.... dhanyawad aapka ek kamzor rachna ko pasand karne ke lie


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Re: Mere hi naam se ik din.... mann

«Reply #7 on: November 07, 2011, 01:33:17 PM »

bhut khub likha hai mann sahab,,,,rawani bahut nayab rahi hai,,,,dheron daad kabul kijiye

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Re: Mere hi naam se ik din.... mann

«Reply #8 on: November 07, 2011, 01:45:18 PM »

bajhot khoob janaab--
daad kubul karen

muskurate rahen
khus rahen
Usual Smile


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Re: Mere hi naam se ik din.... mann

«Reply #9 on: November 08, 2011, 03:30:07 AM »

bahu bahut dhanyawad sunilji


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Re: Mere hi naam se ik din.... mann

«Reply #10 on: November 08, 2011, 03:32:07 AM »

bahut dhanyawad sarfiraji


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