Mere Hisse Gham Kar Jaa.

by Jaanasheen on August 17, 2010, 07:32:53 PM
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Bazaar Mein  Dard-o-Gham Ke Jab Tum Jaana,.
Mere Liye "Aye Dost, Sare Dard Khareed Laana,.

Phool Mere Hisse Mein Kabhi Aaye Nahi "Dost,.
Meri Joli Mein Tum Kaanton Ko Chord Jaana,.

Mile Gham Musalsal Mujhe, Kuch Istarah "Dost,.
Ghamon Ki Sohbat Mein, Bhool Gaya Muskuraana,.

Ab Hawaa Ko Bhi Shikayat Hai Mere Saans Lene Se,.
Meri Hayaat Ke Liye Duaaon Mein Haath Na Uthaana,.

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«Reply #1 on: August 17, 2010, 07:50:26 PM »
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Bhaijan, hum toh sada haath uthaenge aur hamesha dua karenge..Bahaut tariff karna chahta hoon apki iss kavita ki mager shikayat hai mujhe apse kay apne badi chubne wali nazm likhi hai..Ehsaason ko shabdon main bahaut khubsoorati se sajaya hai..Hamesha khush rahein..Aur yaad rakhein, apke liye Rahim hamesha dua karta hai aur inshAllah karta rahega..!

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«Reply #2 on: August 17, 2010, 07:54:51 PM »
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Bhaijan, hum toh sada haath uthaenge aur hamesha dua karenge..Bahaut tariff karna chahta hoon apki iss kavita ki mager shikayat hai mujhe apse kay apne badi chubne wali nazm likhi hai..Ehsaason ko shabdon main bahaut khubsoorati se sajaya hai..Hamesha khush rahein..Aur yaad rakhein, apke liye Rahim hamesha dua karta hai aur inshAllah karta rahega..!

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Shukriya Rahim,.
 Paise Se Sab Kuch Milta Hai Is Jahaan Mein,
 Bas ek Duaa Ke Siwaa,.
Allah Kareem Khair Kare, And Thank For your Comments Brother,.

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«Reply #3 on: August 17, 2010, 08:02:59 PM »
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Azeem Sahaab AadaaB......

Aapki yeh peshkash bhi achchi rahi.... per shayari ke mutalbe se aapka aakhari sher .... Bemisaal raha...
Sirf usi sher per daad...
KyuN ki hum aapse behtar kalaamoN ki hi ummid rakhe Hai..

To daad bhi usi hisaab se milengi ab aapko...

Khush rahiye...
Khuda hafez...
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«Reply #4 on: August 18, 2010, 09:06:53 AM »
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   ghum mein bhi ataa hai jinhen muskurana,
   nahin bantaa hai unke wajood ka fasana,
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«Reply #5 on: August 18, 2010, 09:38:20 AM »
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subhanallah maza agaya kya dard hai to jaldi sea hospital jao dard dur karo......
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«Reply #6 on: August 18, 2010, 09:52:25 AM »
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wah ajeem sahab bahut khoob likha he apne ....daad pesh he kubool farmaiye~
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«Reply #7 on: August 18, 2010, 10:59:05 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Azeem!!!

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Peshkash Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: August 18, 2010, 05:06:00 PM »
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Baehtrin....umda....khoobsurat.....superb peshkash Azeem ji.....
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«Reply #9 on: August 18, 2010, 05:58:43 PM »
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bahot khoob azeem sahaab ,daad qubol kariega ..umda aur purkashish kalaam pe phir se daad .
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«Reply #10 on: August 19, 2010, 04:07:48 PM »
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Bhai Azeem Aadab. Ramzan Mubarak.

Subse Pahele to Takhir ke liye mazrat khaw hon ,Umid hai ap mauf kar denge ..Apki is puracar takhleeq pe dad hazir hai khobol kijiye ...Allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ...Ghar pe subko salam o dua darja ba darja de den..


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«Reply #11 on: August 19, 2010, 05:21:51 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB AZEEM JEE! BAHUT ACHCHI LEKIN EK SHER SE ADHOORI GAZAL KE LIYE DILI DAAD PESH HAI.AB JALD HEE US SHER SE BHI PARDA UTHA DEEJIYE JO GAZAL KA HAQ ADA KARNE WALA HAI.
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«Reply #12 on: August 22, 2010, 04:39:27 PM »
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Quote from: Qadeer.Toopchi on August 19, 2010, 04:07:48 PM
Bhai Azeem Aadab. Ramzan Mubarak.

Subse Pahele to Takhir ke liye mazrat khaw hon ,Umid hai ap mauf kar denge ..Apki is puracar takhleeq pe dad hazir hai khobol kijiye ...Allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ...Ghar pe subko salam o dua darja ba darja de den..


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Shukriya Qadeer Bhai, Aaapki daad Hamesha Mere Haulse Ko Taakhqt Di Hai,.

Allah Aapko Khush Rakhe Aameen,.

Aapka Bhai Azeem,.
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«Reply #13 on: August 24, 2010, 12:48:27 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on August 17, 2010, 08:02:59 PM
Azeem Sahaab AadaaB......

Aapki yeh peshkash bhi achchi rahi.... per shayari ke mutalbe se aapka aakhari sher .... Bemisaal raha...
Sirf usi sher per daad...
KyuN ki hum aapse behtar kalaamoN ki hi ummid rakhe Hai..

To daad bhi usi hisaab se milengi ab aapko...

Khush rahiye...
Khuda hafez...


Shukriya Janaab, Daad Ki saath Duaaon Ki Bhi darkhwast Hai
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«Reply #14 on: August 24, 2010, 12:49:02 AM »
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Quote from: Sheba on August 18, 2010, 09:06:53 AM
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   ghum mein bhi ataa hai jinhen muskurana,
   nahin bantaa hai unke wajood ka fasana,





Nice Lines Sheba, And Thank U
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