::mere kadam kuch yun ladkhadye::

by nidhi_yadein on June 16, 2005, 07:56:37 AM
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"Wo door se aayi ek lehar aur mujhse takraa gayi,
 dil ki dhadkan ruk gayi ,aur saans dagmagaa gayi,

 ek pal ko aisa lagaa jaise tu hai yahin kahin,
 chaaron taraf dhoonda,par tu thha hi nahin,

 apne haathon ki lakeeron ko yun maine nihaaraa,
 kya kabhi milega bhi mere is dil ko kinaara.....,

 ye zameen,ye aasman,dekh raha thha jahaan saara............,
 mere kadam kuch yun ladkhadaye,ki de na saka koi bhi sahara."
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«Reply #1 on: June 16, 2005, 07:58:41 AM »
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Nidhi bohot achcha hai....bohot hi achcha.....very touching......just like my own feelings :-(
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«Reply #2 on: June 16, 2005, 08:00:15 AM »
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Nidhi bohot achcha hai....bohot hi achcha.....very touching......just like my own feelings :-(
Thanx Talat Usual Smile ,aapse hi inspired hoke likha hai this one.
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«Reply #3 on: June 16, 2005, 08:06:21 AM »
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Thanx Talat Usual Smile ,aapse hi inspired hoke likha hai this one.


Sach main !! its beautiful yaar......
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«Reply #4 on: June 16, 2005, 08:48:50 AM »
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wah nidhi, bohot acha likha!

"ye zameen,ye aasman,dekh raha thha jahaan saara............,
mere kadam kuch yun ladkhadaye,ki de na saka koi bhi sahara." "

yeh lines to bohot hi achi hai!

tere sahare ki aas me umar guzar di intezaar me,
dekh lo aa kar, abhi bhi doob rahon hoon gumon ke mazdar me!!
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«Reply #5 on: June 16, 2005, 01:17:12 PM »
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wah nidhi, bohot acha likha!

"ye zameen,ye aasman,dekh raha thha jahaan saara............,
mere kadam kuch yun ladkhadaye,ki de na saka koi bhi sahara." "

yeh lines to bohot hi achi hai!

tere sahare ki aas me umar guzar di intezaar me,
dekh lo aa kar, abhi bhi doob rahon hoon gumon ke mazdar me!!
Thank u sooooo much Talat and Thanx a lot meena sis for lilking and appreciating.U 2 very well written. Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: June 16, 2005, 06:26:37 PM »
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"Wo door se aayi ek lehar aur mujhse takraa gayi,
 dil ki dhadkan ruk gayi ,aur saans dagmagaa gayi,

 ek pal ko aisa lagaa jaise tu hai yahin kahin,
 chaaron taraf dhoonda,par tu thha hi nahin,

 apne haathon ki lakeeron ko yun maine nihaaraa,
 kya kabhi milega bhi mere is dil ko kinaara.....,

 ye zameen,ye aasman,dekh raha thha jahaan saara............,
 mere kadam kuch yun ladkhadaye,ki de na saka koi bhi sahara."


wow  nidhi ...........kya  jabardast  likhi  ho.............superb......  nice  wordings...........lafz  nahi  mere  paas.........too good reply  meena,,,,,....

ek  shaks   aaj  dard  mein  doobta nazara aaya
main  ab  kaise  bataon  mujhe  kaisa  nazar  aaya
apni  kismat  ka  maara  hua  nazar  aaya
aaj  samunder bhi mujhe pyasa  nazar  aaya....................................
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«Reply #7 on: June 17, 2005, 09:28:49 AM »
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"Wo door se aayi ek lehar aur mujhse takraa gayi,
 dil ki dhadkan ruk gayi ,aur saans dagmagaa gayi,

 ek pal ko aisa lagaa jaise tu hai yahin kahin,
 chaaron taraf dhoonda,par tu thha hi nahin,

 apne haathon ki lakeeron ko yun maine nihaaraa,
 kya kabhi milega bhi mere is dil ko kinaara.....,

 ye zameen,ye aasman,dekh raha thha jahaan saara............,
 mere kadam kuch yun ladkhadaye,ki de na saka koi bhi sahara."


wow  nidhi ...........kya  jabardast  likhi  ho.............superb......  nice  wordings...........lafz  nahi  mere  paas.........too good reply  meena,,,,,....

ek  shaks   aaj  dard  mein  doobta nazara aaya
main  ab  kaise  bataon  mujhe  kaisa  nazar  aaya
apni  kismat  ka  maara  hua  nazar  aaya
aaj  samunder bhi mujhe pyasa  nazar  aaya....................................


Thank u waheed,tumne bhi bohat accha likha hai,last line is very nice :D

"Samandar bhi aaj pyaasa nazar aaya hai,
  is kadar kisi ne mere dil ko tadpaaya hai,
  main gayi thhi saahil pe dhoondne kinaara,
  wahan bhi askhon ka samadar paaya hai,
  jahan se dekhti hoon,main hoon akeli...,
  meri kismat ne bohat mujhe rulaaya hai,
  jab bhoolna chahti hun,nayi shuruat karti hun,
  dekhti hun,mere darwaze ek naya gam aaya hai."
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«Reply #8 on: June 17, 2005, 11:17:04 AM »
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Nidhi kya kahun....bas its simply superb !! :-(

Waheed ne bhi bohot achcha likha hai !!
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«Reply #9 on: June 17, 2005, 02:20:50 PM »
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"Wo door se aayi ek lehar aur mujhse takraa gayi,
 dil ki dhadkan ruk gayi ,aur saans dagmagaa gayi,

 ek pal ko aisa lagaa jaise tu hai yahin kahin,
 chaaron taraf dhoonda,par tu thha hi nahin,

 apne haathon ki lakeeron ko yun maine nihaaraa,
 kya kabhi milega bhi mere is dil ko kinaara.....,

 ye zameen,ye aasman,dekh raha thha jahaan saara............,
 mere kadam kuch yun ladkhadaye,ki de na saka koi bhi sahara."


good work nidhi and all  Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: June 17, 2005, 05:00:32 PM »
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"Wo door se aayi ek lehar aur mujhse takraa gayi,
 dil ki dhadkan ruk gayi ,aur saans dagmagaa gayi,

 ek pal ko aisa lagaa jaise tu hai yahin kahin,
 chaaron taraf dhoonda,par tu thha hi nahin,

 apne haathon ki lakeeron ko yun maine nihaaraa,
 kya kabhi milega bhi mere is dil ko kinaara.....,

 ye zameen,ye aasman,dekh raha thha jahaan saara............,
 mere kadam kuch yun ladkhadaye,ki de na saka koi bhi sahara."


good work nidhi and all  Usual Smile
thank u Talat and thanx nishi Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: June 17, 2005, 11:11:29 PM »
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bedard zamane ne bohat hum ko sikhaya
aik baar hasaaya to sau bar rulaaya
jo taj mahal hum ne tasavur main banaya
mitti ka ghar bhi na tha jab hosh aaya
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«Reply #12 on: June 20, 2005, 10:23:25 AM »
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bedard zamane ne bohat hum ko sikhaya
aik baar hasaaya to sau bar rulaaya
jo taj mahal hum ne tasavur main banaya
mitti ka ghar bhi na tha jab hosh aaya
nice one naveed,last line is tooo good.

"Jab dekhaa thha maine Taj mahal,
  ek hulchul si dil me hui thhi,
  kya hai pyaar,jaise ehsaas hua ho,
  kuch yun uski chamak thhi,
  kya kya kar jate hain log pyar me,
  kaise jeete hain mar mar ke intezar me."
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«Reply #13 on: June 20, 2005, 10:44:49 AM »
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good work evry body ....good nidhi , Waheed ji and all friends

gum gum  tuh zinagi ki ek zinda sachai hai
inhe paar karke hi sabne apni manjil pai hai
kyun ho udass tum samunder ko pyass dekh ka
pyaas se hi hai jo badati hai bechani verna
ko hai jisne bina pyass ke manjil pai hai
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«Reply #14 on: June 20, 2005, 10:49:41 AM »
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good work evry body ....good nidhi , Waheed ji and all friends

gum gum  tuh zinagi ki ek zinda sachai hai
inhe paar karke hi sabne apni manjil pai hai
kyun ho udass tum samunder ko pyass dekh ka
pyaas se hi hai jo badati hai bechani verna
ko hai jisne bina pyass ke manjil pai hai
thanx sandhaya.

wah sandhaya,kya likha hai,fantastic,koi jawaab nahi iska mere paas Usual Smile .
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