::mere kadam kuch yun ladkhadye::

by nidhi_yadein on June 16, 2005, 07:56:37 AM
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«Reply #15 on: June 20, 2005, 07:06:40 PM »
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very  nice ...............nidhi..................naveed..... ..sandhya..............wonderful  written..........ur  welcome nidhi ...sandhaya.......

Jab Tum Hamaray Dil ke Dard ko Na Samajh Sakay
Tumharay Samney Phir Hum Dukh ka Izhar Kiya Kartay

Aankhoon Main Aansoon ki Baraf Se Jamm Gayeh
Phir Aungliyoon Per Hum Apnay Dukh ka Shumaar Kiya Kartay......................nm
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«Reply #16 on: June 20, 2005, 10:11:14 PM »
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bedard zamane ne bohat hum ko sikhaya
aik baar hasaaya to sau bar rulaaya
jo taj mahal hum ne tasavur main banaya
mitti ka ghar bhi na tha jab hosh aaya
nice one naveed,last line is tooo good.

"Jab dekhaa thha maine Taj mahal,
  ek hulchul si dil me hui thhi,
  kya hai pyaar,jaise ehsaas hua ho,
  kuch yun uski chamak thhi,
  kya kya kar jate hain log pyar me,
  kaise jeete hain mar mar ke intezar me."

kisi k intezar mein jeena bhi acha lgta hai
koi begna kabhi kabhi dil ko apan sa lgta hai
woh chahe rahe durr hum s jitna bhi
is dil ko kabhi woh begana nahin lgta hai
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«Reply #17 on: June 27, 2005, 08:06:19 AM »
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wah nidhi wah..kya Gazal hai..bahoot achhay..

always Harash
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«Reply #18 on: July 01, 2005, 09:30:07 AM »
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wah nidhi wah..kya Gazal hai..bahoot achhay..

always Harash
Thank u harsh ji Usual Smile and thanx waheed.

Bohat khoob likha waheed and naveed.
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«Reply #19 on: July 02, 2005, 09:23:47 PM »
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"Wo door se aayi ek lehar aur mujhse takraa gayi,
 dil ki dhadkan ruk gayi ,aur saans dagmagaa gayi,

 ek pal ko aisa lagaa jaise tu hai yahin kahin,
 chaaron taraf dhoonda,par tu thha hi nahin,

 apne haathon ki lakeeron ko yun maine nihaaraa,
 kya kabhi milega bhi mere is dil ko kinaara.....,

 ye zameen,ye aasman,dekh raha thha jahaan saara............,
 mere kadam kuch yun ladkhadaye,ki de na saka koi bhi sahara."


Great nidhi
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«Reply #20 on: July 04, 2005, 07:05:57 AM »
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Good one again Nidhi !!! Usual Smile

Nice ones Sandhaya....Waheed n Fakhar .................!!!!!
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«Reply #21 on: July 04, 2005, 02:33:42 PM »
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good work nidhi and everyone else!!                                                                                                                            ..
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«Reply #22 on: July 18, 2005, 09:39:34 AM »
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"Wo door se aayi ek lehar aur mujhse takraa gayi,
 dil ki dhadkan ruk gayi ,aur saans dagmagaa gayi,

 ek pal ko aisa lagaa jaise tu hai yahin kahin,
 chaaron taraf dhoonda,par tu thha hi nahin,

 apne haathon ki lakeeron ko yun maine nihaaraa,
 kya kabhi milega bhi mere is dil ko kinaara.....,

 ye zameen,ye aasman,dekh raha thha jahaan saara............,
 mere kadam kuch yun ladkhadaye,ki de na saka koi bhi sahara."


Great nidhi


Thanx Rohit,Talat and sanya Usual Smile
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«Reply #23 on: July 21, 2005, 04:51:00 AM »
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"Wo door se aayi ek lehar aur mujhse takraa gayi,
 dil ki dhadkan ruk gayi ,aur saans dagmagaa gayi,

 ek pal ko aisa lagaa jaise tu hai yahin kahin,
 chaaron taraf dhoonda,par tu thha hi nahin,

 apne haathon ki lakeeron ko yun maine nihaaraa,
 kya kabhi milega bhi mere is dil ko kinaara.....,

 ye zameen,ye aasman,dekh raha thha jahaan saara............,
 mere kadam kuch yun ladkhadaye,ki de na saka koi bhi sahara."


Nice Nidhi, well written.
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«Reply #24 on: July 21, 2005, 08:51:38 AM »
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Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
"Wo door se aayi ek lehar aur mujhse takraa gayi,
 dil ki dhadkan ruk gayi ,aur saans dagmagaa gayi,

 ek pal ko aisa lagaa jaise tu hai yahin kahin,
 chaaron taraf dhoonda,par tu thha hi nahin,

 apne haathon ki lakeeron ko yun maine nihaaraa,
 kya kabhi milega bhi mere is dil ko kinaara.....,

 ye zameen,ye aasman,dekh raha thha jahaan saara............,
 mere kadam kuch yun ladkhadaye,ki de na saka koi bhi sahara."


Nice Nidhi, well written.
thanx Amit Usual Smile .
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«Reply #25 on: July 21, 2005, 07:04:10 PM »
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Good one again Nidhi !!! Usual Smile

Nice ones Sandhaya....Waheed n Fakhar .................!!!!!


thanxxxxxxxxx  Alot  Talat,,..............  tongue3
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