Mere Sapno ka jahan

by deepika_divya on August 03, 2009, 03:10:53 PM
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Kabhi kabhi life mea aisi situation aa jati hai jahan par aapko khud sahi galat ka fesala karna hota hai... kai baar hum issi uljan mea kho jaate hai saath de agar tho kiska de... Kuch aise hi asmajas mea maine kafi pehle ak kavita likhi thi jo aapke saath share kar rahi hun....


जल जल कर धुआं हो रहा है, देखो मेरे ख्वाबो ,मेरे सपनो का एक जहान
किस्से कहूँ केसे कहूँ दिल की बात कोई भी तो सुनता नही है यहाँ'


एक तरफ़ दोस्ती है दूजी तरफ़ कर्तव्य, राज़ राज़ ही रह गया उजड़ गया जहान
लाख कोशिश की मैंने मिलाने की पर क्या करू, ख़ुद अकेली रह गई यहाँ


रोकना चाहा इस दुंद, उड़ती धुल को, पर धुल के छोटे से कण में डूब गया जहान
रोक लो अभी थोड़ा वक्त है बाकी, सम्भाल लो अभी बी, वरना लाशे मिलेंगी यहां


जल जल कर धुआं हो रहा है देखो , मेरे ख्वाबो ,मेरे सपनो का एक जहान

~~Divya~~
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thegrimreaper
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«Reply #1 on: August 03, 2009, 03:13:48 PM »
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wow, really thoughtful sahyari
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #2 on: August 03, 2009, 11:49:20 PM »
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Wah wah Sophi ji,very nice and wonderful creation,touching, icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:excellent
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Sammual
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«Reply #3 on: August 04, 2009, 08:48:47 AM »
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Wah! Bahut Khoob Sophi Ji.
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #4 on: August 04, 2009, 01:13:28 PM »
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Thank You so so much Grimreaper Ji, Madhu Ji and Sammual.. Thank you guys...
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punam
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«Reply #5 on: August 04, 2009, 01:16:20 PM »
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Bahut khoob divya di...
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salil2002
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«Reply #6 on: August 04, 2009, 01:34:33 PM »
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bahut achche sophi dear khoob dil se likha hai dost kasamkash bakhoobi bayaan hoti hai alfaazon se

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«Reply #7 on: August 04, 2009, 01:49:17 PM »
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Divya Dear.. apne Mann Ki Vyatha ko Lafzon Me Dhaal Kar Bakhoobi Pesh kiya hai aapne.. Aapki Qalam Me Waqai Jadoo Hai..!!  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

Apne Ehasaason Ko, Jazzbaaton Ko Aur Zindgi se Jude Haalaaton Ko Lafzon me Piro Ke Gazal Me Dhaalna aap Bakhoobi Jaanti hain.. Real great Work.. Applause Applause


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #8 on: August 06, 2009, 02:09:49 AM »
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Bahut khoob divya di...

Thank You Punam Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: August 06, 2009, 02:10:20 AM »
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bahut achche sophi dear khoob dil se likha hai dost kasamkash bakhoobi bayaan hoti hai alfaazon se



Thank you Salil for liking it Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: August 06, 2009, 02:11:31 AM »
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Divya Dear.. apne Mann Ki Vyatha ko Lafzon Me Dhaal Kar Bakhoobi Pesh kiya hai aapne.. Aapki Qalam Me Waqai Jadoo Hai..!!  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

Apne Ehasaason Ko, Jazzbaaton Ko Aur Zindgi se Jude Haalaaton Ko Lafzon me Piro Ke Gazal Me Dhaalna aap Bakhoobi Jaanti hain.. Real great Work.. Applause Applause


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


**~** Mann **~**

Awwww .. thank you sssssssssssooooooooooooo Much Vikas Usual Smile
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #11 on: August 06, 2009, 03:54:33 AM »
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Nice one Divya Ji
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #12 on: August 06, 2009, 01:18:47 PM »
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Nice one Divya Ji

Thank You Rajesh Ji
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Rajbir
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«Reply #13 on: August 06, 2009, 01:24:11 PM »
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Dips,

Very very nice !

Brilliant ! very thoughtful Thumbs UP
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«Reply #14 on: August 06, 2009, 01:54:32 PM »
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Dips,

Very very nice !

Brilliant ! very thoughtful Thumbs UP

Thank You So so Much Raj Bro Usual Smile
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