MERI BEHNA...SOUDAGAR

by soudagar on August 10, 2013, 01:00:11 AM
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kyun tu mujhse itna pyar jatati hai behna
kyun tu hardum mere hee gun gati hai  behna

tera chahkana tera qehkna dil ko achha lagta hai
teri hansi mere dil ko sukun dilati hai behna

tadap uthta hoon main jo teri aankh se aansu chhalke
tere chehre ki udasi mujhe rulati hai  behna

bahut bolti ho tum par tera bolna achha lagta hai
teri batein dil mein ghar kar jati hai  behna

sara ghar tere sang hee khelta nazar aata hai mujhe
jab tu angnaa mein khelti nazar aati hai  behna

ek din tu bhi is angna ko chhod naye ghar jayegi
jaise bhai se dur har behna chali jati hai  behna

suna aangan ko dekh teri yaad humein khub rulayegi
jaise sawan ke mousam mein badli bars jati hai  behna

tab bhi main douda chala aaunga tum bas ek aawaz dena
jaise ab aata hoon jab tu aawaz lagati hai  behna

hamara rishta ek  pyari si resham ki dor se bandha hai
sansein tut jayein  par dor na ye tut pati hai behna
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«Reply #1 on: August 10, 2013, 01:07:26 AM »
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bhaiya..........mere pas shbd nai hain...bahot bolti hoon pr aaj shbd ni mil rahe....jis trh taron s chand ki tulna ni ki jaati or blb s soorj ki usi trh is poem ki tulna kahi ni hai.....out of the world.......aisa koi shbd ni jo iski tareef m kaha jaye...
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«Reply #2 on: August 10, 2013, 01:08:03 AM »
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 Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: August 10, 2013, 01:34:53 AM »
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Quote from: soudagar on August 10, 2013, 01:00:11 AM
kyun tu mujhse itna pyar jatati hai meri behna
kyun tu hardum mere hee gun gati hai meri behna

tera chahkana tera qehkna dil ko achha lagta hai
teri hansi mere dil ko sukun dilati hai meri behna

tadap uthta hoon main jo teri aankh se aansu chhalke
tere chehre ki udasi mujhe rulati hai meri behna

bahut bolti ho tum par tera bolna achha lagta hai
teri batein dil mein ghar kar jati hai meri behna

sara ghar tere sang hee khelta nazar aata hai mujhe
jab tu angnaa mein khelti nazar aati hai meri behna

ek din tu bhi is angna ko chhod naye ghar jayegi
jaise bhai se dur har behna chali jati hai meri behna

suna aangan ko dekh teri yaad humein khub rulayegi
jaise sawan ke mousam mein badli bars jati hai meri behna

tab bhi main douda chala aaunga tum bas ek aawaz dena
jaise ab aata hoon jab tu aawaz lagati hai meri behna

hamara rishta ek  pyari si resham ki dor se bandha hai
sansein tut jayein  par dor na ye tut pati hai meri behna
Applause Applause Applause bhut khub likha hai ap nay
Sach may bhai behan ka reshta kuch esha he hai
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«Reply #4 on: August 10, 2013, 01:43:40 AM »
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wah wah bahut he khoob likha hai apne Soudagar ji... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: August 10, 2013, 02:00:50 AM »
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 Applause maaja aa gaya ... waah waah
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«Reply #6 on: August 10, 2013, 02:51:04 AM »
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 notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy
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mere bhai har bhai ki zubaan likh di aapne to..ekdum jo bhi padhega bas uska to cent percent dil bhar hi ayega..coz bhai behen ka rishta hota hi aisa hai..aab kya kahu iss behatareen kalaam par ek RAU le hi lo karan bhai..happy9
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«Reply #7 on: August 10, 2013, 03:07:45 AM »
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super duper hit poem karan........ mujhe bhi mere bhaiya yaad aagaye....  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
sare feelings itne cute se in k koi achhuta na rahega isse....  happy3 happy3 happy3

par ek baat kahun..... ye bar bar meri behna k bina ise likho to ye aur bhi impressive ho jayegi.... meri behna ka repitation ise atka raha hai warna flow bht mast aata hai.... just try it... if u feel right...... Feared. Feared. Winking
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«Reply #8 on: August 10, 2013, 08:32:42 AM »
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excellent
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«Reply #9 on: August 10, 2013, 08:58:49 AM »
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super............... Thumbs UP

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shukriya saraswat saheb
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«Reply #12 on: August 10, 2013, 10:31:52 AM »
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beautiful expressions !! congrats.
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beautiful..laajavaab
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«Reply #14 on: August 10, 2013, 01:21:14 PM »
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bahut khoob
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