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Bhagte Hue Ghar Mea
Cham Cham Karti Uski Payal Ho
Chaha Jaaye labo pe Muskarahat
Jaise Hi Uski halki si Aahat Ho
Kare Meeti Meeti Baate sabse
Harkate Uski Hasane Waali ho
Kude Naache Gaaye Har Waqt
Itni Natkat Uski Kahaani ho
Khele Jab Woh Mere Saath
Gaalo pe sirf Uske Lali HO
Kare Ghar Pariwaar Uski rakhsa
Jaise Pariwaar uska maali Ho
Bar Kar Mujhko Baho mea
Maa Kehkar Pukaare woh
Mile sukoon mere Man ko
Aisi Pyaari Meri Bitiyaan Ho
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«Reply #1 on: May 15, 2009, 08:23:16 AM » |
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Aaye Haye.!!  Kya Baat hai Sophi..!! Bahut Hi PYaare aur Maasoom Ehasaas Likhe Hain... choti si Pyaari si Bacchi ki Shraarat ko, Pyaar Ko Behad Khubsoorati se Lafzon ki zubaan di hai aapne..!!  Bahut Bahut Khooooooooooooob... Is Rachna ko Padh kar Meri bhi aankhon me Pyaari si Bacchi ki Tasveer si aa gai hai. Jaise wo mere saamne hi Khel rahi hai..!! **~** Mann **~** |
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«Reply #2 on: May 15, 2009, 09:02:09 AM » |
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bohut khoob sophi ji behad khoobsurat feelings hain
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«Reply #3 on: May 15, 2009, 09:55:09 AM » |
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bahut hee shaandar ahasaas...wah kya bat hai...
Netra....
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«Reply #4 on: May 15, 2009, 10:13:04 AM » |
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«Reply #5 on: May 15, 2009, 11:48:50 AM » |
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Bhagte Hue Ghar Mea
Cham Cham Karti Uski Payal Ho
Chaha Jaaye labo pe Muskarahat
Jaise Hi Uski halki si Aahat Ho
Kare Meeti Meeti Baate sabse
Harkate Uski Hasane Waali ho
Kude Naache Gaaye Har Waqt
Itni Natkat Uski Kahaani ho
Khele Jab Woh Mere Saath
Gaalo pe sirf Uske Lali HO
Kare Ghar Pariwaar Uski rakhsa
Jaise Pariwaar uska maali Ho
Bar Kar Mujhko Baho mea
Maa Kehkar Pukaare woh
Mile sukoon mere Man ko
Aisi Pyaari Meri Bitiyaan Ho
Kya baat hai Sophi..bada pyara imagination aur khoobsurat lafz... Bohot khoob dear |
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«Reply #6 on: May 15, 2009, 07:07:25 PM » |
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Bohat khoob Sophi...
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«Reply #7 on: May 15, 2009, 09:33:32 PM » |
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very beautiful sophi ji,
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«Reply #8 on: May 15, 2009, 11:53:18 PM » |
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Bahut Khoob Sophi Ji
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«Reply #9 on: May 16, 2009, 04:01:58 AM » |
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Aaye Haye.!! Kya Baat hai Sophi..!! Bahut Hi PYaare aur Maasoom Ehasaas Likhe Hain... choti si Pyaari si Bacchi ki Shraarat ko, Pyaar Ko Behad Khubsoorati se Lafzon ki zubaan di hai aapne..!! Bahut Bahut Khooooooooooooob... Is Rachna ko Padh kar Meri bhi aankhon me Pyaari si Bacchi ki Tasveer si aa gai hai. Jaise wo mere saamne hi Khel rahi hai..!! **~** Mann **~**Thank you so so Much for your Lovely Comemnts....Haan I want a baby GIrl only.. Isliye Uska imagination karke yea poetry likh di |
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«Reply #10 on: May 16, 2009, 04:03:08 AM » |
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bohut khoob sophi ji behad khoobsurat feelings hain
Bahoot bahoot Sukhriyaa Bhawna |
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«Reply #11 on: May 16, 2009, 04:03:38 AM » |
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bahut hee shaandar ahasaas...wah kya bat hai...
Netra....
Bahoot bahoot Sukhriyaa Netrapal JI |
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«Reply #12 on: May 16, 2009, 04:04:07 AM » |
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Bahot hi acha likha hai aapne Sophi ji..very nice Thanks a Lot Kaash Ji |
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«Reply #13 on: May 16, 2009, 04:08:45 AM » |
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«Reply #14 on: May 16, 2009, 04:11:39 AM » |
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Kya baat hai Sophi..bada pyara imagination aur khoobsurat lafz... Bohot khoob dear Thankj Thank u so so Much Talat DI. |
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