Meri Hasratien --- Kumaar

by kumaar on September 09, 2014, 05:53:00 PM
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Main meri hasrato meri khawahisho ko likhta hun kisi kagaz pe,
Naa jaane kaise lafz khud-b-khud ghazal ban jaate hai!!!

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«Reply #1 on: September 09, 2014, 06:53:22 PM »
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waaah waaah....kam alfaazon mein ek shayar k dik ki baat bakhoobi kahi aapne...
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«Reply #2 on: September 09, 2014, 06:55:46 PM »
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Main meri hasrato meri khawahisho ko likhta hun kisi kagaz pe,
Naa jaane kaise lafz khud-b-khud ghazal ban jaate hai!!!

Jai Kumar

wah bahut khoob huzur kaash mujh mein bhi aisi hasrat paida ho aur khud-b-khud ghazal bann jaaye icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #3 on: September 09, 2014, 08:19:35 PM »
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waaah buhut khoob.
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«Reply #4 on: September 10, 2014, 03:47:14 AM »
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Quote from: Nikhaar on September 09, 2014, 06:53:22 PM
waaah waaah....kam alfaazon mein ek shayar k dik ki baat bakhoobi kahi aapne...
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bahut bahut shukriya nikhaar ji
koshish ye hi rahti h kam lafzo mei jyada kahne ki

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«Reply #5 on: September 10, 2014, 03:50:01 AM »
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Quote from: Sheba on September 09, 2014, 06:55:46 PM
wah bahut khoob huzur kaash mujh mein bhi aisi hasrat paida ho aur khud-b-khud ghazal bann jaaye icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!

Ji aapka tah-e-dil se shukriya
bas aapse hi seekha hai sheba ji ye hunar.. aapki bahut si peshkash hamne padi hai... behad umdaa likhte hai aap

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Quote from: surindarn on September 09, 2014, 08:19:35 PM
waaah buhut khoob.
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shukriya surindarn ji

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«Reply #7 on: September 10, 2014, 06:51:50 AM »
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 Applause Applause  waaah kya baat hai jaiji
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«Reply #8 on: September 10, 2014, 01:18:10 PM »
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Bahut Achhe. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: September 10, 2014, 04:52:59 PM »
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Applause Applause  waaah kya baat hai jaiji

bahut shukriya mann ji

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«Reply #11 on: September 10, 2014, 04:54:07 PM »
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Bahut Achhe. Applause Applause Applause

thanks a lot rajigujral ji

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«Reply #12 on: September 10, 2014, 04:56:58 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on September 10, 2014, 01:26:04 PM
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Shukriya suresh ji

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«Reply #13 on: September 11, 2014, 06:04:49 AM »
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खूब कहा....तो इसी बात पे एक ग़ज़ल हो जाये.....
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