**Meri jaan tu nahin toh 'Rahim' nahin**by Rahim

by dead heart on March 17, 2010, 09:29:08 PM
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Kayi dino se kuch likhna tha...Aj lavzon ne saath diya hai...Maine yeh kalam likh ke jitni baar bhi isse dobara parra, ashk behgaye...Bade ehsaas jutae hai isme maine...Parrte waqt, aise parrein jaise ap yeh nazm ka har lavz apne mehboob ko keh rahe ho...Umeed hai pasand ayegi...

Aj fizaon main mahek wohi hai mager mujhe lubhati nahin,
Aj bhi labon pe muskaan wohi hai mager dil main khushi nahin,
Main kaise bayan karoun meri tanhai ko tujse Zalim,
Bas itna kehna chahta hoon ke,
Meri jaan tu nahin toh ‘Rahim’ bhi nahin…

Main yeh nahin kehta ke tune mujse bewaffai ki,
Haqeeqat toh yeh hai ke maine toh tujhe kabhi paya hi nahin tha,
Main kaise bataun tujhe ke kitna adhura hoon tujh bin Zalim,
Bas itna kehna chahta hoon ke,
Meri jaan tu nahin toh ‘Rahim’ bhi nahin…

Aj bhi yaad hai mujhe woh dinn jab hum tum saath the,
Mere liye toh jaise meri zindagi saath thi,
Main kaise bayan karoun tujse mera dard Zalim,
Bas itna kehna chahta hoon ke,
Meri jaan tu nahin toh ‘Rahim’ bhi nahin…

Teri baahon main jab tune mujhe liya tha,
Jaise main khud ko kho baitha tujh main,
Yakeen maan main tere liye hi toh jeeta tha Zalim,
Bas itna kehna chahta hoon ke,
Meri jaan tu nahin toh ‘Rahim’ bhi nahin…

Aj yeh nazm likte hue ankhein ashkon main doob rahi hai,
Har beeta lamha yaad aa kar mujhe khoob rulata hai,
Har guzri yaad teri aa kar mujhe khoob satati hai,
Main janta hoon shayad tujhe kabhi bhi paa nahin paunga,
Mager Rabb se yeh dua zaroor mangta hoon,
Ho sake toh usse mera bana de,
Usse khush rakh chahe main ta-umr roun,
Tera yeh mehboob bas itna kehna chahta hai tujse Zalim,
‘Rahim’ ne bahaut mohobat ki hai tujse,
Hamesha yeh baat rakhna,
Ke meri jaan tu nahin toh ‘Rahim’ bhi nahin…


~Rahim~
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«Reply #1 on: March 18, 2010, 04:18:05 AM »
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Rahim Sahab bahut khoob...behtareen peshkash...achahh ehsaas, achchhey alfaaz....meri taraf se bhi ek sher aapki mohabbat ke naam...

Mohabbat ye 'Adab' ki hai jo bas pahloo badalti hai,
Kabhi baahon mein rahti hai, kabhi aahon mein rahti hai...
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«Reply #2 on: March 18, 2010, 08:21:31 AM »
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Har Woh lafz Jo Dil Se Nikle Ho,To Woh yakeenan Auro ke Dil ko Bhi Chuu Jaati hai..

Bahut Bahut Khoob Rahim,Bahut Jaazbaati Aur Dil Ko Chuune Wali nazm Likhi hai Rahim Aapne..Aur Khaas Kar Iss Nazm ke Akhri sher To bahut gehraai Mein Doobe Hue hai..

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«Reply #3 on: March 18, 2010, 08:26:49 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Rahim Bhai.

ALLAH Pak Aapko Har Ranj o Gham Se Mahfooz Rakhe..Ameen
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«Reply #4 on: March 18, 2010, 10:28:01 AM »
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Shukriya Humdum jee, Khwahish jee aur DrPandey jee..

DrPandey jee...Bahaut acha shaer hai...
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«Reply #5 on: March 18, 2010, 11:02:15 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on March 18, 2010, 10:28:01 AM
Shukriya Humdum jee, Khwahish jee aur Dr Pandey jee..

Dr Pandey jee...Bahaut acha shaer hai...
Rahim Sahab sher pasand farmaya aapne, aapka bahut bahut shukriya, aapne nazm bhi bahut shandaar likhi hai...
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«Reply #6 on: March 18, 2010, 12:12:27 PM »
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Shukriya jee!
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«Reply #7 on: March 20, 2010, 10:30:08 AM »
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mindblowing rahim ji....
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«Reply #8 on: March 20, 2010, 11:47:50 AM »
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Shukriya Thinkhattk jee
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«Reply #9 on: March 21, 2010, 08:12:54 AM »
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Bahut hi khoob Rahim bhai dil bhar aayi aapke kavita padke,bahut hi dard aur khoobsurti se likha aapne.excellent,Pandey ji aapne bhi kamaal ke lines likha. Hats off to you! Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: March 21, 2010, 10:47:42 AM »
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BAHUT UMDA RAHIMJI. ACHHI PESHKASH.LAGTA HAI DIL KI GEHRAIYON SE AAI HAI. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: March 22, 2010, 07:35:28 PM »
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Hmm shukriya Madhu di..

Sarvesh jee shukriya...Haan jee bahaut gehrayion se ayi hai...
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«Reply #12 on: March 24, 2010, 03:58:44 PM »
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Rahim bhai....

Samajh nahi paa raha hoon ki taarif karun ya koshish karun aapke dard ko kam karne ki. Kavita to bahut bahut pyaari hai. Dil ko cheer dene waala dard hai. Ek ek shabd aapke dard ko bayaan kar raha hai. Mohabbat cheez hi aisi hoti hai... jab tak saath hoti hai to saanse hoti hain aur jab chhod jaati hai to saanse band...

Bahut khoobsurat aur pyaari kavita hai. Bahut achcha likhte hain aap. Likhte rahiye.  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

Humein bhi kisi se pyaar hua tha kabhi... Chhod gayi humein wo...

ittefaq se meri zindagi me aayi thi wo,
ittefaq se pyaar hua tha usse mujhe,
jis din se chhod gayi hai saath mera wo,
ittefaq se dar lagne laga hai mujhe...
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«Reply #13 on: March 24, 2010, 07:41:26 PM »
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Hmm bahaut bahaut bahaut shukriya jee..Hmm na woh hume chorr gaya na kabhi saath tha...woh toh woh khwab tha jisse haqeeqat samaj baithe te...Aj bhi har lamha woh saath hokar saath nahin...khair, dard bahaut hai haan...khair dua karein...Hum apke liye, ap humare liye...Zindagi yunhi kat jaegi..

Bahaut khoob likha hai apne bhi... Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: March 24, 2010, 07:58:24 PM »
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wah ji waah rahim ji bahut hi khoob likha hai...amazing...
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