Meri jaan tu nahin toh 'Rahim' nahinby Rahim

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«Reply #15 on: March 24, 2010, 08:32:50 PM »

Shukriya Geet jee...


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Re: **Meri jaan tu nahin toh 'Rahim' nahin**by Rahim

«Reply #16 on: March 24, 2010, 08:37:09 PM »

Bilkul Rahim ji....duwa hum bhi karenge , aap bhi kijiye...Zindagi yunhi kat jaayegi...!!!

Dhanyawaad...!!!

Quote from: -Rahim- on March 24, 2010, 07:41:26 PM

Hmm bahaut bahaut bahaut shukriya jee..Hmm na woh hume chorr gaya na kabhi saath tha...woh toh woh khwab tha jisse haqeeqat samaj baithe te...Aj bhi har lamha woh saath hokar saath nahin...khair, dard bahaut hai haan...khair dua karein...Hum apke liye, ap humare liye...Zindagi yunhi kat jaegi..

Bahaut khoob likha hai apne bhi... Applause


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Re: **Meri jaan tu nahin toh 'Rahim' nahin**by Rahim

«Reply #17 on: March 24, 2010, 08:42:38 PM »


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Re: **Meri jaan tu nahin toh 'Rahim' nahin**by Rahim

«Reply #18 on: January 16, 2011, 08:09:39 AM »

Rahim ji kya baat likhi aapne.
poora dil bhar gaya .
wese mai kabhi nhi roya lekin feel to hota hi hai ansu nikle na nikle kya mtlab.
kuch lines likhne ka mann hua aaj apke lekhni me
bura lage to maafi dijiyega--
""
ghutt ghutt jeene se marna bhala
achha yaaron alvida mai to chala
""
thanx
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Re: **Meri jaan tu nahin toh 'Rahim' nahin**by Rahim

«Reply #19 on: January 16, 2011, 11:00:31 AM »

Quote from: nirala on January 16, 2011, 08:09:39 AM

Nirala jee,
Apka dil bhar aya iss nadan ki nazm se,
toh yeh bahaut badi baat hai..
Apka teh dil se shukriya mere dost..
Bahaut khoob 2 lines main keh gaye ap..
Khush rahiye..!