meri kavish ...sheba

by Sheba on June 28, 2013, 02:21:12 AM
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«Reply #15 on: June 28, 2013, 09:26:01 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on June 28, 2013, 02:21:12 AM

                 her sher mein main ne kisi na kisi YOINDIA ke shayar ka ek khaqaa
               apni soch se bana ne ki koshish ki hai-- aap kismein fit hain guess karein


                                  janaab   tanqeed  ki  nazar rakhte   hain!
                                  hum   afwaah,  wo   khabar  rakhte   hain!!

                                  unke   bayaa.n   ki   bus   khasiyat  itni.
                                  taariki ka khoobsoorat manzar rakhte hain!

                                  fitrat mein malaahiyat ki chaashni liye hue.
                                  saadgi  mein  bulandi  ka  asar rakhte hain!

                                  guroor se pare ,pairahn mein lipta jism unka.
                                  khuloos-o mohabbat se sajaa ghar rakhte hain!

                                  mehakte  hue  chaman  ke maalik to nahin per.
                                  aangan  mein  jhuka  hua  shajar rakhte hain!

                                  imtehaan  sabr  ki  intehaa  ka  de  kar bhi.
                                  apni shakhsiya mein khasa lachar rakhte hain!

                                  hum pareshaa.n ninaanve(99) ke chakkar mein.
                                  aur   mutthi  mein   wo  sifar  rakhte  hain!

                                  hai   hairaa.n   sheba  unki   mohabaat   pe!
                                  ghazlo.n  mein  jo jaan-o-jigar rakhte hain!!
                                 
                                 

Bahut Umda likha hai sheba ji aapne. Bahut pasand aaya. Dhron daad.
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«Reply #16 on: June 28, 2013, 09:31:14 PM »
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«Reply #17 on: June 29, 2013, 03:03:42 AM »
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Shebaa Sahibaa Aadaab ... !


Bahut khoob jee bahut umdaa, Kafi khoobsurat aur dilfareb kalaam huyi hai ...
Sabhi ashaar gazal ke qayde meiN qabil e daad haiN...

Baqi aapne kis member ko kis sher meiN qaid kiya hai yeH toH aap hi
behtar jaane ... khair

Is umdaa kalaam par humari dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye ...

Likhte rahiye Bazm meiN aate rahiye ...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye ...

Khuda Hafez ...
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«Reply #18 on: June 29, 2013, 03:09:37 AM »
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Sheba jee, please bata dijiye ismeiN maiN kahaaN huN. Waise padhkar bahut maza aaya.
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«Reply #19 on: July 05, 2013, 02:56:55 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on June 28, 2013, 02:59:59 AM
Ye Andaaz Bhi Achcha Hai Ji...
Par Ekad Buraai Wala Bhi Sher Likhte
To Shayad Chun Na Aasan Hota Ji.

Bahut Achcha Likha Hai :shad o Aabaad Rahiye

Shihab

shukria.....!
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«Reply #20 on: July 05, 2013, 02:58:40 AM »
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Sheba Ji I am Still waiting..Plzzzz Bataaye Naa..Isme Kaun-Kaun, Kahaan-Kahaan Fit Hue Hai..Itna Bada Suspense To Vikram bhatt Ki Filmon Mein Bhi Nahi Hota.. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #21 on: July 05, 2013, 03:04:50 AM »
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Quote from: khwahish on July 05, 2013, 02:58:40 AM
Sheba Ji I am Still waiting..Plzzzz Bataaye Naa..Isme Kaun-Kaun, Kahaan-Kahaan Fit Hue Hai..Itna Bada Suspense To Vikram bhatt Ki Filmon Mein Bhi Nahi Hota.. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower


Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard =))jahaan chaaho fit ho jaao tum to kahni bhi fit ho jaate ho jab train mein fit ho gaye to ghazlo.n aur shero.n ke beech bhi jagah banaa lo Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
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«Reply #22 on: July 05, 2013, 03:08:36 AM »
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Quote from: Sheba on July 05, 2013, 03:04:50 AM

Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard =))jahaan chaaho fit ho jaao tum to kahni bhi fit ho jaate ho jab train mein fit ho gaye to ghazlo.n aur shero.n ke beech bhi jagah banaa lo Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard


 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

Mujhe Pata Tha Aisa Hi kuch Jawaab Aayega.... tongue3 tongue3 tongue3 tongue3

Oyyye Train mein To Galti Se Fit Hua Naa..Jaan-Bujhkar Thodi Naa Hua..Woh To Kismat Meharbaan thi Bas.... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Ab Aap Zara Sharafaat Se bataao..Kaun Kahaa Fit Nahi-Nahi...Kaun KahaaN Settle Hai?? icon_geek icon_geek icon_geek icon_geek
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«Reply #23 on: July 05, 2013, 03:13:50 AM »
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Quote from: khwahish on July 05, 2013, 03:08:36 AM

 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

Mujhe Pata Tha Aisa Hi kuch Jawaab Aayega.... tongue3 tongue3 tongue3 tongue3

Oyyye Train mein To Galti Se Fit Hua Naa..Jaan-Bujhkar Thodi Naa Hua..Woh To Kismat Meharbaan thi Bas.... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Ab Aap Zara Sharafaat Se bataao..Kaun Kahaa Fit Nahi-Nahi...Kaun KahaaN Settle Hai?? icon_geek icon_geek icon_geek icon_geek

main agar saraafat dikhaane lagi to shaitaano,n ka kya hoga Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
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«Reply #24 on: July 12, 2013, 06:28:10 PM »
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Quote from: Taish on June 28, 2013, 03:04:56 AM
sheba ji kayi logon ke bare me ek ghzal meN keh paana bahut hi mushkil kaam hai par aapne bakhubi ise anjaam diya hai, bahut uda kaavish pe meri hazaaron dili daad...

waise main to shayad tha hi nahiN isme tongue3 ap aap hi bata dijiye kaun sa sher kiske naam hai, itni dimaagi kasrat humse na ho paayegi... Winking  waise aapka rau pending hai vo kal milegaa... Usual Smile

shukria.....!keep gussing icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #25 on: July 12, 2013, 07:20:58 PM »
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Very very nice and very very good but i am not fit in thease lines anywhere plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzZzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzz close my account and delete my silly shayri because i do not want anybody laugh at me & backbite       
as u & khawish if it is not possible ok anyway i will never post anything ok thank  u.
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«Reply #26 on: July 18, 2013, 11:28:37 AM »
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intehaaN ho gayi intezaar ki..... bhai ab to bataa do... har cheez ki hadd hoti hai aur iski hadd ab guzar chuki hai...!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #27 on: July 19, 2013, 03:56:13 AM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on June 28, 2013, 03:07:41 AM
BehtreeN Peshqash.DheroN Daad.

shukria......!
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«Reply #28 on: July 19, 2013, 04:02:51 AM »
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Quote from: Sheba on July 19, 2013, 03:56:13 AM
shukria......!
Ur Welcome Sheba Jee.
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