~Meri nazmon main shabd tamam uske the 2~ by Rahim:Miscellaneous Shayri

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Yeh pehle part ka link hai:
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/miscellaneous-shayri/meri-nazmon-main-shabd-tamam-uske-the-by-rahim-t58155.0.html;msg1069057;topicseen#new

Ek continuation ek khaas Dost (Khwaish) ki request par..

Sabki nazron main beimaan main tha,
Mager woh kaam tamam uske the..

Aisa rishta tha humara kay tadapta main tha,
Jabke ghum tamam uske the..

Woh chalti thi khud kisi aur kay kehne par,
Jabke jahan main tamam log ghulam uske the..

Mera dil zakhmon se saja hua hai,
Meri mohobat kay liye,
Diye gaye yeh inaam tamam uske the..

Mehfilon main tanha rehna gawara na tha mujhe,
Mager mere liye diye gaye yeh tamam farman uske the..

Log wah wahi karte hai parr kar mujhe,
Lekin aj kehna chahta hai ‘Khamosh’,
Meri nazmon main shabd tamam uske the..

~Rahim~


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Re: ~Meri nazmon main shabd tamam uske the 2~ by Rahim

«Reply #1 on: September 03, 2010, 10:40:12 AM »

too good rahim ji. dil ko chhu gai....

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Quote from: -Rahim- on September 03, 2010, 03:34:46 AM

Mera dil zakhmon se saja hua hai,
Meri mohobat kay liye,
Diye gaye yeh inaam tamam uske the..

~Rahim~

ye lines bahot hi achhi he....


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Re: ~Meri nazmon main shabd tamam uske the 2~ by Rahim

«Reply #2 on: September 03, 2010, 11:08:27 AM »

mastam mast poem rahim....dil chhu gai ye poem tumhari...
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Re: ~Meri nazmon main shabd tamam uske the 2~ by Rahim

«Reply #3 on: September 03, 2010, 06:50:15 PM »

Shukriya Devangi jee aur Anamika di..! Teh dil se shukriya!


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Re: ~Meri nazmon main shabd tamam uske the 2~ by Rahim

«Reply #4 on: September 03, 2010, 06:52:51 PM »

Quote from: -Rahim- on September 03, 2010, 03:34:46 AM

~Rahim~

Bahut bahut Khoob bhai rahim!!!!

Bhaut Hi Khoobsurat Continuation..

Bahuttttttt Ache


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Re: ~Meri nazmon main shabd tamam uske the 2~ by Rahim

«Reply #5 on: September 03, 2010, 06:53:36 PM »

Shukriya Dost..Teh dil se shukriya apka har baar saath dene kay liye..!


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Re: ~Meri nazmon main shabd tamam uske the 2~ by Rahim

«Reply #6 on: September 07, 2010, 12:14:41 PM »

Rahim ji aapki post k 1st n 2nd dono parts aaj maine padhe,bahut achhe lage,dono hi part bahut khoobsurti se likhe hain aapne,dhero daad aapko. hello2


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Re: ~Meri nazmon main shabd tamam uske the 2~ by Rahim

«Reply #7 on: September 07, 2010, 06:52:44 PM »

Shukriya Tamanna jee..!


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Re: ~Meri nazmon main shabd tamam uske the 2~ by Rahim

«Reply #8 on: October 07, 2010, 07:45:12 PM »

der se nazar mein aayi aapki ye baat.. par shukra hai nazar to aayi...

bahut khoob likha hai aapne !

Intezar


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Re: ~Meri nazmon main shabd tamam uske the 2~ by Rahim

«Reply #9 on: October 07, 2010, 07:49:46 PM »

Shukriya Intezar jee..! Teh dil se shukriya..!


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