Meri Pehchaan..Mere Papa

by Shalu RV on June 19, 2011, 09:13:34 AM
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Meri Pehchaan aapse hai papa,
Kya kahun mere liye aap kya ho,
Rehne ko hai pairo ke neeche ye zameen,
Par mere liye toh mera aasman aap ho..

Main kehti aayi bachpan se har choti cheez dila do,
Nahi khaungi khana, mujhe bas aakhri baar dila do,
Mujhe rote dekh papa aap pbhi pigal jaate they,
Agle din ka vaada karke, agle din jarror le aate they,

Yaad aati hai bachpan ki woh yaadein,
Jab aap jate they bahar aur hum apko yaad kia karte they,
Mummy se har thodi der mein "Kab aayenge Papa" poocha karte they,
Kyunki rehta tha us dulaar ka intezaar jisme din ke lamhe they kul chaar..

Aaj bhi yaad aatey hai bachpan ke woh din,
Jab ungli meri pakad kar apne chalna sikhaya,
Is tarah zindagi mein chalna sikhaya,
Ki aindagi ki har kasauti par apko apne kareeb paya,

Papa ek din kya apke Naam kar du,
Keh do ek baar, apni Jaan apke naam kar du,
Apne hi toh in saanson ko zindagi di hai,
Aur apke hone se hi "Shalu" ki pehchaan bani hai..

Ab bhi jab yaad aa jata hai meri "Bidaai" ka woh din,
Dil bhar aata hai, aansu aa jate hai, Tanha ho jati hu,
Sochti Thi- akeli rahungi ek naye shehar mein kaise apke bin,
Soch kar hi pareshaan ho Jaati hu...

Par aap toh ho hamesha mere dil mein, yeh shehar kya dooriyan baant sakega,
"Shalu" ko Dil mein ek baar yaad kar lena, koi aur jyada "Shalu ke siwa" kareeb nahi dikhega..
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«Reply #1 on: June 19, 2011, 09:26:58 AM »
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Bahuttttttttttttttt bahutttttttttttttttt Khoooob!!!!!

Shalu Ji, Mere paas Lafz Nahi Hai iss Kavita Ki Tareef mein Kuch kehne Ke Liye, Haan Itna Keh Sakta Hoon Har Lafz Dil Ko Chuukar Nikla..Bahut Waqt baad Aaj Aisi kavita padhi Jo Mann Ko nihaal Kar Sake..Bahut Ache... icon_flower Waheguru kare Yeh Rishta, yeh Pyaar Yuhi Mehakta Rahe..Shukriya
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«Reply #2 on: June 19, 2011, 10:00:31 AM »
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Meri Pehchaan aapse hai papa,
Kya kahun mere liye aap kya ho,
Rehne ko hai pairo ke neeche ye zameen,
Par mere liye toh mera aasman aap ho..

Main kehti aayi bachpan se har choti cheez dila do,
Nahi khaungi khana, mujhe bas aakhri baar dila do,
Mujhe rote dekh papa aap pbhi pigal jaate they,
Agle din ka vaada karke, agle din jarror le aate they,

Yaad aati hai bachpan ki woh yaadein,
Jab aap jate they bahar aur hum apko yaad kia karte they,
Mummy se har thodi der mein "Kab aayenge Papa" poocha karte they,
Kyunki rehta tha us dulaar ka intezaar jisme din ke lamhe they kul chaar..

Aaj bhi yaad aatey hai bachpan ke woh din,
Jab ungli meri pakad kar apne chalna sikhaya,
Is tarah zindagi mein chalna sikhaya,
Ki aindagi ki har kasauti par apko apne kareeb paya,

Papa ek din kya apke Naam kar du,
Keh do ek baar, apni Jaan apke naam kar du,
Apne hi toh in saanson ko zindagi di hai,
Aur apke hone se hi "Shalu" ki pehchaan bani hai..

Ab bhi jab yaad aa jata hai meri "Bidaai" ka woh din,
Dil bhar aata hai, aansu aa jate hai, Tanha ho jati hu,
Sochti Thi- akeli rahungi ek naye shehar mein kaise apke bin,
Soch kar hi pareshaan ho Jaati hu...

Par aap toh ho hamesha mere dil mein, yeh shehar kya dooriyan baant sakega,
"Shalu" ko Dil mein ek baar yaad kar lena, koi aur jyada "Shalu ke siwa" kareeb nahi dikhega..



VERI VERI VERI TOUCHING VERI NAAAAAICE ,SHALU


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«Reply #3 on: June 19, 2011, 10:29:03 AM »
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Nice,Superb,Shalu.Hats off.

 Hats off to you!
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«Reply #4 on: June 19, 2011, 12:18:12 PM »
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Waah Shalu Ji bahut khoob
Achchha laga. Sahee waqt par
post kiya hai ise.

All the best.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
 
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«Reply #5 on: June 19, 2011, 12:24:18 PM »
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excellent feelings shalu ji...
hats off to u...
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«Reply #6 on: June 20, 2011, 10:28:44 AM »
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Dil ki baat bakhubi chitrit ki hai aapne Shalu-ji... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: June 20, 2011, 10:40:53 AM »
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@ khwaishji, Khamosh Aawaz ji, F.H.Siddiqui, Satish Shuklaji, manjil e Ishq ji aur Anaam ji...

aap sabhi ki tareef ka tahe dil se Shukriya, aap sabhi ke lafz Shalu ke liye Himmat hai, Aise hi saath dete rahiyega...

Shalu RV...
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«Reply #8 on: June 20, 2011, 10:59:17 AM »
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bahut khoob shalu mere daddy to nahin hain main unki kami feel karti hoon aur father's day mein aur bhi
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«Reply #9 on: June 20, 2011, 11:01:45 AM »
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I know sheba... Kaisi feeling hoti hai.. Bhagwan apko zindagi ki har khushi de.. Usual Smile God Bless..!!
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«Reply #10 on: June 20, 2011, 11:05:20 AM »
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bahut khoob shalu mere dadi to nahin hain main unki kami feel karti hoon aur father's day mein aur bhi
 

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«Reply #11 on: October 10, 2012, 01:47:26 PM »
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Superrrr yaaa..
fab liness..
u opened ur heartt fo ur dad..
best wishess nd may ur dad lve long nd blessdd...Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: October 10, 2012, 02:04:43 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Shalu ji... !!!
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«Reply #13 on: October 10, 2012, 02:10:38 PM »
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waah Shalu bahut khoob.... dil ko chhu jaane waali peshkash hai aapki.......
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«Reply #14 on: December 10, 2012, 03:41:09 AM »
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maa bap dunia ki sab se badi daulat hai..
wohi hume zindagi ka mol sikhate hai or jina sikhate hai........
un maa bap ko bade hkar ya paisa biwi dost pakar kabhi dukhi mat karna kyonki ek din hamare pas sab kuch hota hai lekin wo maa bap sath nahi hote or unki kami har ek pal mahesus raheti hai........... or hum dunia me bechare ban jate hai
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