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tumhaari baaton se jaane kyun mujhe kuch yaad aa gaya,
likhte likhte kisi wajaah se main aaj ruk sa gaya,

bhulaake bhi shayad ab tak na bhula paaya hoon main tumhe,
kisi apne se baat karte waqt dil me tumhaara khayaal aa gaya,

ek waqt tha jab har baat se , har cheez se tum judi thi,
jaane kahaan ab kho gayi ho tum is duniya ki bheed me,
jaane kyun ab mere liye ye waqt kuch tham sa gaya,

baatein karo doston se to jaise baaton me aaj bhi tum ho,
ho nahi kareeb tum mere par mere dil me aaj bhi tum hi ho,
kyun neend khulne se pehle mera har sapna tut sa gaya,

wo baatein, wo mulaqaatein aaj bhi yaad aa jaati hain,
tumhaari har ek baat aaj jaane kyun mujhe tadpaati hai,
ab to aisa lagta hai is zindagi se main thak sa gaya,

haan main is sukhi veeran zindagi se pak sa gaya hoon,
apne hi tanhaayiyon ke ghere me main fas sa gaya hoon...


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«Reply #1 on: August 16, 2010, 06:50:42 PM »
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bht khub likha hai kapil ji aapne ye zindagi kki kahani.....
kuch kehna hai par hume bhi...

thak kar zindagi se jo tum yun baith jaoge
batao bhala kiss tarah tum manzil ko apni paoge

kho gaya hai ek sathi kahin agar bich safar me
hath to badhao tum har ek kadam pe saathi kai paoge

dard k maare to hain yahan aur bhi bht se dil dost
bas lagate jao unke dil pe marhum tum unke ho jaoge

kuch to hai teri iss kahani me jojalta hai kahin
isi kahani se dekhna ek din roshan jahaan tum kar jaoge...!!!
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«Reply #2 on: August 17, 2010, 06:15:19 AM »
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shukriya Kasak ji... bas kuch yaadein taazi ho gayi aur main likhta chala gaya... aapka jawaab bahut hi pyaara hai aur bahut encouraging hai... yahi hota haui dosti ka matlab... sambhalna aur sambhaalna ek dusre ko... shukriya is khoobsurat jawaab ke liye...

kuch anjaana sa rishta tha mera tumse,
aaj bhi mujhe wo rishta yaad aata hai,
aaine me khudko dekhna chaahun to,
aaj bhi tumhaara chehra nazar aata hai,

waqt paani ki tarha behta chala gaya,
aur us bahaaw me main bhi beh gaya,
chhoot gaya mujhse tumhaara saath o saathi,
bas tumhaare yaadon ka sahaara reh gaya,

baarish me bheegta hoon ye sochke main,
ki dil se tumhaari yaadein dhul jaayengi,
na mit paaya ek bhi daag tumhaari yaadon ka,
shayaad ye umra bhar hi saath reh jaayengi,

kami nahi hai zindagi me mere doston ki,
kami to bas tumhaari hai mere jaana,
doston se badhke tumhe chaaha tha maine,
tumhi ko tha maine apni zindagi maana,

safar me zindagi ke chhod gaye tum mera haath,
jab chaaha tha maine tumse janam janam ka saath,
na sambhal paaya hoon ab tak main us chot se,
bas chaahta hoon tumhaare sang ek aur mulaaqaat...
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«Reply #3 on: August 17, 2010, 07:04:46 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on August 17, 2010, 06:15:19 AM
shukriya Kasak ji... bas kuch yaadein taazi ho gayi aur main likhta chala gaya... aapka jawaab bahut hi pyaara hai aur bahut encouraging hai... yahi hota haui dosti ka matlab... sambhalna aur sambhaalna ek dusre ko... shukriya is khoobsurat jawaab ke liye...

kuch anjaana sa rishta tha mera tumse,
aaj bhi mujhe wo rishta yaad aata hai,
aaine me khudko dekhna chaahun to,
aaj bhi tumhaara chehra nazar aata hai,

waqt paani ki tarha behta chala gaya,
aur us bahaaw me main bhi beh gaya,
chhoot gaya mujhse tumhaara saath o saathi,
bas tumhaare yaadon ka sahaara reh gaya,

baarish me bheegta hoon ye sochke main,
ki dil se tumhaari yaadein dhul jaayengi,
na mit paaya ek bhi daag tumhaari yaadon ka,
shayaad ye umra bhar hi saath reh jaayengi,

kami nahi hai zindagi me mere doston ki,
kami to bas tumhaari hai mere jaana,
doston se badhke tumhe chaaha tha maine,
tumhi ko tha maine apni zindagi maana,

safar me zindagi ke chhod gaye tum mera haath,
jab chaaha tha maine tumse janam janam ka saath,
na sambhal paaya hoon ab tak main us chot se,
bas chaahta hoon tumhaare sang ek aur mulaaqaat...

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bht khubsurat jawab klaskar ji......
aur kanha ji chahenge to aapki ye dua bhi kubul hogi.....
ye poem bhi sahej li maine....its very touching....
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«Reply #4 on: August 17, 2010, 07:24:40 AM »
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Shukriya Kasak ji...

jaane kyun aap mere dard ko apna samajh lete hain,
mere har geet ko aap apne dil se lagaa lete hain,
ye to kuch yaadein hain jo mujhse judi hui hain,
jaane kyun in yaadon ko aap apna maan lete hain,

likhte hain hum taaki apna dard kam kar sake,
aap unko padhke bas bedard ker dete hain,
aapki taarif ke baare me aur hum kya kahen,
har taarif pe aapke hum bas muskura lete hain...
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«Reply #5 on: August 17, 2010, 07:40:23 AM »
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Khoob-surat ehsaas....aap dono k's ke.... Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
ab teesri k kya kahe....koyal tou
Ganaa jaanti hai likhna nahi so....pesh hai ye gana khas-kar.....
Kalakaarji k liye.....jo Kasak-di k reply ki bhaavna wyakt karta hai...

chhod de sari duniya kisi ke liye
yeh munaasib nahin aadmi ke liye
pyaar se bhi zaroori kayi kam hain
pyaar sab kuchh nahin zindagi ke liye
chhod de sari duniya kisi ke liye

tann se tann ka milan ho na paaya to kya
mann se mann ka milan koi kam to nahin (2)
khushboo aati rahe door hi se sahi
saamne ho chaman koi kam to nahin (2)
chand milta nahin sabko sansaar mein
hai diya hi bahut roshni ke liye
chhod de sari duniya kisi ke liye

kitni hasrat se takti hain kaliyan tumhe
kyun bahaaron ko phir se bulaate nahin (2)
ek duniya ujad hi gayi hai to kya
doosra tum jahan kyun basaate nahin
dil ne chaahe bhi to saath sansaar ke
chalna padta hai sab ki khushi ke liye
chhod de sari duniya kisi ke liye
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«Reply #6 on: August 17, 2010, 07:44:56 AM »
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Shukriya Kasak ji...

jaane kyun aap mere dard ko apna samajh lete hain,
mere har geet ko aap apne dil se lagaa lete hain,
ye to kuch yaadein hain jo mujhse judi hui hain,
jaane kyun in yaadon ko aap apna maan lete hain,

likhte hain hum taaki apna dard kam kar sake,
aap unko padhke bas bedard ker dete hain,
aapki taarif ke baare me aur hum kya kahen,
har taarif pe aapke hum bas muskura lete hain...

klaskar ji.....iska jawab aapko hum apni next post me denge.....
waise ye sunke mujhe bht achcha laga k bhale hi ek pal k liye main aapke chehre pe muskan to la pai...

agar main kisiko ek smile de sakun mere liye isse badi baat koi nahin.....

thnx for smiling ji....and keep smiling......
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«Reply #7 on: August 17, 2010, 07:46:19 AM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on August 17, 2010, 07:40:23 AM
Khoob-surat ehsaas....aap dono k's ke.... Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
ab teesri k kya kahe....koyal tou
Ganaa jaanti hai likhna nahi so....pesh hai ye gana khas-kar.....
Kalakaarji k liye.....

chhod de sari duniya kisi ke liye
yeh munaasib nahin aadmi ke liye
pyaar se bhi zaroori kayi kam hain
pyaar sab kuchh nahin zindagi ke liye
chhod de sari duniya kisi ke liye

tann se tann ka milan ho na paaya to kya
mann se mann ka milan koi kam to nahin (2)
khushboo aati rahe door hi se sahi
saamne ho chaman koi kam to nahin (2)
chand milta nahin sabko sansaar mein
hai diya hi bahut roshni ke liye
chhod de sari duniya kisi ke liye

kitni hasrat se takti hain kaliyan tumhe
kyun bahaaron ko phir se bulaate nahin (2)
ek duniya ujad hi gayi hai to kya
doosra tum jahan kyun basaate nahin
dil ne chaahe bhi to saath sansaar ke
chalna padta hai sab ki khushi ke liye
chhod de sari duniya kisi ke liye



gudiiya rani mera song kahan hai...sab kalakaar ko hi dedicate karogi to mera kya hoga ..hmmm?
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«Reply #8 on: August 17, 2010, 07:51:00 AM »
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shukriya koyal ji... main aapka dil se shukriya adaa karta hoon... aur aapke gane ke liye bahut bahut shukriya...

waise ye baat aapki galat hai ki ye Koyal sirf gaana jaanti hai... humein jahaan tak maloom hai hamari Koyal ji gaati bhi bahut achcha hain aur likhti bhi bahut hi khoob hain... aapke posts padhta hoon main aur bahut achcha likhti hain aap... yunhi likhte rahiye... !!!

Quote from: KOYAL46 on August 17, 2010, 07:40:23 AM
Khoob-surat ehsaas....aap dono k's ke.... Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
ab teesri k kya kahe....koyal tou
Ganaa jaanti hai likhna nahi so....pesh hai ye gana khas-kar.....
Kalakaarji k liye.....

chhod de sari duniya kisi ke liye
yeh munaasib nahin aadmi ke liye
pyaar se bhi zaroori kayi kam hain
pyaar sab kuchh nahin zindagi ke liye
chhod de sari duniya kisi ke liye

tann se tann ka milan ho na paaya to kya
mann se mann ka milan koi kam to nahin (2)
khushboo aati rahe door hi se sahi
saamne ho chaman koi kam to nahin (2)
chand milta nahin sabko sansaar mein
hai diya hi bahut roshni ke liye
chhod de sari duniya kisi ke liye

kitni hasrat se takti hain kaliyan tumhe
kyun bahaaron ko phir se bulaate nahin (2)
ek duniya ujad hi gayi hai to kya
doosra tum jahan kyun basaate nahin
dil ne chaahe bhi to saath sansaar ke
chalna padta hai sab ki khushi ke liye
chhod de sari duniya kisi ke liye
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«Reply #9 on: August 17, 2010, 07:53:03 AM »
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aapke agle post ka humein besabri se intezaar rahega Kasak ji... thanks a lot for being a reason for me to smile...!!!

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 17, 2010, 07:44:56 AM
klaskar ji.....iska jawab aapko hum apni next post me denge.....
waise ye sunke mujhe bht achcha laga k bhale hi ek pal k liye main aapke chehre pe muskan to la pai...

agar main kisiko ek smile de sakun mere liye isse badi baat koi nahin.....

thnx for smiling ji....and keep smiling......
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«Reply #10 on: August 17, 2010, 09:58:24 AM »
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 Anamika di...bhaav aapke hi hain....Shabd lyrics writer k me ga rahi hoon...on your behalf.... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 17, 2010, 07:46:19 AM
gudiiya rani mera song kahan hai...sab kalakaar ko hi dedicate karogi to mera kya hoga ..hmmm?
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«Reply #11 on: August 17, 2010, 12:44:20 PM »
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  Very Nice thought Kapil ji. Keep it up. Aur Kasak ji aapne bhi bahut achha saath diya hai. N koyal dear nice song. Aap sab yun hi achha achha likhte rahein.
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«Reply #12 on: August 17, 2010, 01:21:43 PM »
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Thanks a lot Tamanna ji...!!!

Quote from: tamanna.pt on August 17, 2010, 12:44:20 PM
  Very Nice thought Kapil ji. Keep it up. Aur Kasak ji aapne bhi bahut achha saath diya hai. N koyal dear nice song. Aap sab yun hi achha achha likhte rahein.
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Thanks Tamanna-di.....so sweet of you....... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Quote from: tamanna.pt on August 17, 2010, 12:44:20 PM
  Very Nice thought Kapil ji. Keep it up. Aur Kasak ji aapne bhi bahut achha saath diya hai. N koyal dear nice song. Aap sab yun hi achha achha likhte rahein.
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