MERII TALAASH.... ( revised ) "MohanN"

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 MERII TALAASH

Bahut talaash thee, ke koi aisaa saathii mujhe milye,
Waqt aanye pe, mujhe khuda ke ghar tak ley chalye,
Bas iss umar bhar kee khoj mein mashgool hogayaa,
Wo naa milaa kahin bhi bas main hee peer hogayaa!

Abb jo peer hoon, abb bhi larhkhraataa khojtaa hoon,
Yeh kaisee sadah hai kyaa woh hai jisse khojtaa hoon,
Idhar to aao dost, main teree hee taalaash mein thee,
Peerii hoon ‘MohanN’, kyaa terii yeh naa talaash thee!

Surindar.N                            "MohanN"


MERII TALAASH.... (second version)  

Bahut talaash thee mujhe ke koi aisaa saathi miley,
Waqt aanye pe mujhe khada ke ghar tak ley chaley,
Taa umr isee talaash mein, larkhraataa rahaa hoon,
Bahut main bhataktaa waqt ganwaataa rahaa hoon!

Aaj milaa hai koi kehtaa hai saath chalun gaa terey,
Saayaa to nahin teraa saath saath chalun gaa terey,
Nahin chorhun gaa tujhe, pal bhar ke liye bhi kabhi,
Khuda ke ghar tak bhi haathon haath dun gaa terey!

Jab poochhaa dost, tujhe kyaa keh pukaaraa karun,
Bolaa saayaa saa hoon saayaa keh pukaaraa karun,
MohanN peer ne kuchh sochh usse peerii keh diyaa,
Tabhi se dosto ussey isee naam se pukaaraa karun!!

Surindar. N                      "MohanN"
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Wah  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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bahut khoob
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Applause Applause Applause
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Wah  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bohat khubbbb waaaahhhhhhhh daaaadddddddd
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bahut khub surindarnji....
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बहुत खूब.....


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