Milan (NM)

by vb on July 19, 2010, 12:51:17 PM
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«Reply #1 on: July 19, 2010, 12:53:32 PM »
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Wah wah kya hi khoob nazm likhi hai VB ji. Padhkar bahot achha laga. Dil ehsaas badi khubsurati se aapne bayaan kiye hai. Daad hazir hai.
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«Reply #2 on: July 20, 2010, 02:35:05 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Vb ji...!!!
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«Reply #3 on: July 20, 2010, 05:59:42 AM »
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Quote from: vb on July 19, 2010, 12:51:17 PM

Ye judaai hay chand lamhon ki
Phir hamesha k leyay milna hay

Jub khazaaon main chaman mehken gay
Surkh phoolon pay jub ayay ge bahaar
Jub ufaq paar utar jayay ge
Urtay urtay huvay koonjon ki qataar

Jhilmilaata huva taaron ka ghubaar
Aasmaanon say utar ayay ga
Reshmi baadlon ka narm dhuvan
Teray aariz pay dhalak jayay ga

Bulbulen gul kaday main chaaron taraf
Phar-pharaain gee cheh-chahaain ge
Naariyan panghaton pay jaatay huvay
Geet saawan k gun-gunaain ge

Roshni neem-waa dareechon say
Chhan-chhanati huvee aa jayay ge
Raat k aansoovon say bheegi huve
Aisi subuhu kabhi tu ayay ge

Neend k neel-goon samandar main
Na he kashti na kinaara ho ga
Manzilon ki taraf say, bhatkay huvay
Har musaafir ko ishaara ho ga

Ik janam doosray janam k beech
Chand ghariyaan tu ayay kartee hain
Aamad-e-subuh say thora pehlay
Shama-en bujh bhe jaaya kartee hain

Ik na ik phool muskuraahat ka
Is chaman main kabhi tu khilna hay
Ye judaai hay chand lamhon ki
Phir hamesha k leyay milna hay

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Nazm ke ehsaas bahut khoob lage mujhe....Vb Ji ! dil se daad !
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«Reply #4 on: July 20, 2010, 03:09:44 PM »
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Wah Kya baat hai VB Ji.. Jazzbaaton Ko Lafzon Me Bahut Hi Khubsoorati ke Sath Utaara Hai aapne.. Humesha Ki Tarah Bahut Khooooob Likha Hai... Daad Kubool Karen.. Applause Applause



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«Reply #5 on: July 20, 2010, 03:18:39 PM »
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nice creation..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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