--- /// Milan se pehle ki betaabi /// -----

by klaskar on July 30, 2010, 06:20:17 AM
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kuch pal ki mulaqaat ke liye ghanto ka safar kar jaate the,
ek jhalak apni dikhaane ko tum bahut humein tadpaate the,

ghanto ke us lambe safar me ek pal bhi hum na soya karte the,
miloge tum humein to kaisi dikhogi yahi hum socha karte the,

apne pasand ki kuch cheezen hum tumhaare liye le jaaya karte the,
tumhaare pasand ki kuch cheezen bhi tum humse maanga karte the,

kuch ghanto ki wo duri bhi tab humse na guzaare jaate the,
poori raat hum apne dil ko shaant rehne ko samjhaate the,

subah ki pehli kiran ke saath hi hum tumko phone lagaate the,
tumse bahut kam dur hain hum ab tumko bas yahi bataate the,

kya main pehnu, kaise main aaun tum humse ye poochha karte the,
tumhaari un baaton ko sunke o jaana hum bas aahen bharte the...


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«Reply #1 on: July 30, 2010, 11:02:56 AM »
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Ub tho m convinced....
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«Reply #2 on: July 30, 2010, 11:38:44 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
bht hi pyari rachna klaskar ji..
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«Reply #3 on: July 30, 2010, 11:59:58 AM »
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Good poem....good imagination..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Quote from: klaskar on July 30, 2010, 06:20:17 AM


kuch pal ki mulaqaat ke liye ghanto ka safar kar jaate the,
ek jhalak apni dikhaane ko tum bahut humein tadpaate the,

ghanto ke us lambe safar me ek pal bhi hum na soya karte the,
miloge tum humein to kaisi dikhogi yahi hum socha karte the,

apne pasand ki kuch cheezen hum tumhaare liye le jaaya karte the,
tumhaare pasand ki kuch cheezen bhi tum humse maanga karte the,

kuch ghanto ki wo duri bhi tab humse na guzaare jaate the,
poori raat hum apne dil ko shaant rehne ko samjhaate the,

subah ki pehli kiran ke saath hi hum tumko phone lagaate the,
tumse bahut kam dur hain hum ab tumko bas yahi bataate the,

kya main pehnu, kaise main aaun tum humse ye poochha karte the,
tumhaari un baaton ko sunke o jaana hum bas aahen bharte the...


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«Reply #4 on: July 31, 2010, 05:06:20 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on July 30, 2010, 06:20:17 AM


kuch pal ki mulaqaat ke liye ghanto ka safar kar jaate the,
ek jhalak apni dikhaane ko tum bahut humein tadpaate the,

ghanto ke us lambe safar me ek pal bhi hum na soya karte the,
miloge tum humein to kaisi dikhogi yahi hum socha karte the,

apne pasand ki kuch cheezen hum tumhaare liye le jaaya karte the,
tumhaare pasand ki kuch cheezen bhi tum humse maanga karte the,

kuch ghanto ki wo duri bhi tab humse na guzaare jaate the,
poori raat hum apne dil ko shaant rehne ko samjhaate the,

subah ki pehli kiran ke saath hi hum tumko phone lagaate the,
tumse bahut kam dur hain hum ab tumko bas yahi bataate the,

kya main pehnu, kaise main aaun tum humse ye poochha karte the,
tumhaari un baaton ko sunke o jaana hum bas aahen bharte the...


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«Reply #5 on: August 01, 2010, 01:09:16 PM »
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 awesome creation......
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«Reply #6 on: August 04, 2010, 12:48:24 AM »
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About what .... yahi na ki aapko dhokha hua hai... Usual Smile

Quote from: anjaan dharkan on July 30, 2010, 11:02:56 AM
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«Reply #7 on: August 04, 2010, 12:48:54 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Shihab ji...!!!

Quote from: Shihab on July 30, 2010, 11:20:45 AM
Bahut Khub Janaab Klaskar Ji


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bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji...!!!

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 30, 2010, 11:38:44 AM
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Thanx a lot Koyal ji...!!!

Quote from: KOYAL46 on July 30, 2010, 11:59:58 AM
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Thanx a lot Manoj ji...!!!

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Thanx a lot Devangi ji...!!!

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