Mittee hoon kumhaar kee

by medha_jain3 on January 11, 2009, 06:28:12 AM
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Ek kumhar ke dard ko mittee ki juba.n se kahane ki ek chhoti si koshish umiid ki aap logo ko pasand aayegi......


Mittee hoon kumhaar kee,
Roundi gayee,chak par dalee gayi,
Ek naya roop le main, tapane chali,
Bade pyaar se ghada usane mujhe,
Dard to hua tha use bhi,
Jab main surkh hui zara si,
Bade pyaar se sahlaya mujhe
Or kai dafa apne hatho.n ko jhulasaya usne,
Ye kaisa dulaar tha usaka ?
Ki jala khud or banaya mujhe !

Medha jain
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«Reply #1 on: January 11, 2009, 07:11:09 AM »
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Medha accha laga padkar... keep up...  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: January 11, 2009, 07:21:46 AM »
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bahoot khoob wah wah
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«Reply #3 on: January 11, 2009, 08:24:10 AM »
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kya baat hai medhaji.....

kal tak thi mein ik mamuli mittee,utha legaya jo mujhe kumhaar,
naya roop ek diya mujhko,dekar apne haathon ka dulaar.
mein toh pahunchi kisi mahal mein,legaya jo mujhe koi rajkumaar,
mujhko naya jeevan denewala,usi haal mein rahegaya kumhaar.
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«Reply #4 on: January 11, 2009, 10:11:44 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Medha Ji
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«Reply #5 on: January 11, 2009, 12:02:37 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on January 11, 2009, 07:11:09 AM
Bahut khoob  Applause Applause
Medha accha laga padkar... keep up...  Thumbs UP

Shukriya roja ji aapko pasand aayi meri rachana,yun hi sath dete rahiyega...Usual Smile

Medha jain
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«Reply #6 on: January 11, 2009, 12:03:53 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on January 11, 2009, 07:21:46 AM
bahoot khoob wah wah

Shukriya bekarar ji Usual Smile

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«Reply #7 on: January 11, 2009, 12:04:29 PM »
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wah wah medha bohat sunder likha hai... Thumbs UP
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«Reply #8 on: January 11, 2009, 12:06:15 PM »
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Quote from: cara on January 11, 2009, 08:24:10 AM
kya baat hai medhaji.....

kal tak thi mein ik mamuli mittee,utha legaya jo mujhe kumhaar,
naya roop ek diya mujhko,dekar apne haathon ka dulaar.
mein toh pahunchi kisi mahal mein,legaya jo mujhe koi rajkumaar,
mujhko naya jeevan denewala,usi haal mein rahegaya kumhaar.

shukriya cara ji,yun hi sath dete rahiyega Usual Smile

Medha jain
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«Reply #9 on: January 11, 2009, 12:07:41 PM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on January 11, 2009, 10:11:44 AM
Bahut Khoob Medha Ji


Bahut khoob ke liye shukriya Usual Smile

Medha jain
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«Reply #10 on: January 11, 2009, 12:09:33 PM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on January 11, 2009, 12:04:29 PM
wah wah medha bohat sunder likha hai... Thumbs UP

Thumbs UP ke liye shukriya Usual Smile

Medha jain
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«Reply #11 on: January 12, 2009, 10:31:03 AM »
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Quote from: medha_jain3 on January 11, 2009, 06:28:12 AM
Ek kumhar ke dard ko mittee ki juba.n se kahane ki ek chhoti si koshish umiid ki aap logo ko pasand aayegi......


Mittee hoon kumhaar kee,
Roundi gayee,chak par dalee gayi,
Ek naya roop le main, tapane chali,
Bade pyaar se ghada usane mujhe,
Dard to hua tha use bhi,
Jab main surkh hui zara si,
Bade pyaar se sahlaya mujhe
Or kai dafa apne hatho.n ko jhulasaya usne,
Ye kaisa dulaar tha usaka ?
Ki jala khud or banaya mujhe !

Medha jain


Bahut bahut aur bahut hi pyaara kalaam..
Kam shabd lekin bahut badi baat.. aur bahut alag sa andaaz bhi..
Bahut achha likha hai aapne.. Medha Ji.. 
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«Reply #12 on: January 13, 2009, 10:21:08 AM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on January 12, 2009, 10:31:03 AM

Bahut bahut aur bahut hi pyaara kalaam..
Kam shabd lekin bahut badi baat.. aur bahut alag sa andaaz bhi..
Bahut achha likha hai aapne.. Medha Ji.. 

Shukriya mahiya ji,aapko meri koshish pasand aayi.

Medha jain
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«Reply #13 on: January 13, 2009, 05:25:50 PM »
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bahoot khoob Medha ji

Nice lines cara ji
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