mitti dalte rehna..

by SURESH SANGWAN on December 16, 2011, 06:57:29 AM
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Poorani kitaabon se dhool jhadte rehna.
Kagaz pe likhe zazbaat fadte rehna.
Badalte hi rehte hain khayal zamaane ke.
Bura kuchh lage to mitti dalte rehna.

Chalti hai hawa,mehkati hai fiza.
Raat ko mahtaab kaise deta hai saja.
Aaj nahin to kal ho jayenge poore.
Khwaab zindgi mein naye palte rehna.

Jo tang galiyon se GUjarna pade.
Har taraf andheron se ladna pade.
Chiraag dil ka jala,roshan kar khud ko.
Himmat apne chiraag mein dalte rehna........
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«Reply #1 on: December 16, 2011, 07:03:19 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut bahut khoob
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sk saini ji pasand farmane ka bahut bahut shukriya,
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: December 16, 2011, 10:12:23 AM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on December 16, 2011, 06:57:29 AM
Poorani kitaabon se dhool jhadte rehna.
Kagaz pe likhe zazbaat fadte rehna.
Badalte hi rehte hain khayal zamaane ke.
Bura kuchh lage to mitti dalte rehna.

Chalti hai hawa,mehkati hai fiza.
Raat ko mahtaab kaise deta hai saja.
Aaj nahin to kal ho jayenge poore.
Khwaab zindgi mein naye palte rehna.

Jo tang galiyon se GUjarna pade.
Har taraf andheron se ladna pade.
Chiraag dil ka jala,roshan kar khud ko.
Himmat apne chiraag mein dalte rehna........


ati sunder sangwani sahiba ,,aapki yeh nazm confedence ka ek zinda saboot hai ,,,likhte rahein aur muskurate rahein ...rab rakha
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«Reply #4 on: December 16, 2011, 11:12:34 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: December 16, 2011, 02:02:48 PM »
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baht khoob janaab--
iss khoob aur haqeekati kalaam par dil se daad.

!
mere anjaam me hans raha aaj khuda bhi dekho
ab jahanN ki hasrateN Sarfire jehan se apne mitaate rehna
 
jaan paoge tum bhi mere naseeb-o-naam ko Suresh
apni yaadoN ki parteN jara udhaadte rahna!
( isse jada indication nhi de skta mera naam jaanne ka tongue3
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khus rahie
muskurate rahie
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«Reply #6 on: December 16, 2011, 02:12:24 PM »
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bahut achche
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«Reply #7 on: December 16, 2011, 04:45:32 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on December 16, 2011, 06:57:29 AM
Poorani kitaabon se dhool jhadte rehna.
Kagaz pe likhe zazbaat fadte rehna.
Badalte hi rehte hain khayal zamaane ke.
Bura kuchh lage to mitti dalte rehna.

Chalti hai hawa,mehkati hai fiza.
Raat ko mahtaab kaise deta hai saja.
Aaj nahin to kal ho jayenge poore.
Khwaab zindgi mein naye palte rehna.

Jo tang galiyon se GUjarna pade.
Har taraf andheron se ladna pade.
Chiraag dil ka jala,roshan kar khud ko.
Himmat apne chiraag mein dalte rehna........




ache ehsaas ki bayani hai aapke kalaam mein suresh ji
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«Reply #8 on: December 16, 2011, 07:17:35 PM »
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Wah! wah! Bahut khubsoorat
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«Reply #9 on: December 16, 2011, 07:39:09 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on December 16, 2011, 06:57:29 AM
Poorani kitaabon se dhool jhadte rehna.
Kagaz pe likhe zazbaat fadte rehna.
Badalte hi rehte hain khayal zamaane ke.
Bura kuchh lage to mitti dalte rehna.

Chalti hai hawa,mehkati hai fiza.
Raat ko mahtaab kaise deta hai saja.
Aaj nahin to kal ho jayenge poore.
Khwaab zindgi mein naye palte rehna.

Jo tang galiyon se GUjarna pade.
Har taraf andheron se ladna pade.
Chiraag dil ka jala,roshan kar khud ko.
Himmat apne chiraag mein dalte rehna........


HAZARON DAAD APKO...KABOOL KARE..
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«Reply #10 on: December 17, 2011, 06:03:36 AM »
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sarfire ji pehle to aapka bahut bahut shukriya.
pasand farmane ka.daad kubool hai.
aapka naam kuch samajh mein aaya bhi hai aur nahin bhi .
aapka kaam lekin bahut samajh mein aaya.
bahut khoob rhyming ki hai aapne.
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Quote from: sarfira on December 16, 2011, 02:02:48 PM
baht khoob janaab--
iss khoob aur haqeekati kalaam par dil se daad.

!
mere anjaam me hans raha aaj khuda bhi dekho
ab jahanN ki hasrateN Sarfire jehan se apne mitaate rehna
 
jaan paoge tum bhi mere naseeb-o-naam ko Suresh
apni yaadoN ki parteN jara udhaadte rahna!
( isse jada indication nhi de skta mera naam jaanne ka tongue3
)

khus rahie
muskurate rahie
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«Reply #11 on: December 17, 2011, 06:06:26 AM »
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Shihab ji aapki tareef humen bahut azeez hai.
aap ko pasand aaya isase mein bahut khush hoon.
bahut bahut shukriya.
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aap bhi khush rahen.
aur humen bhi khush karte rahen.
Quote from: Shihab on December 17, 2011, 05:56:12 AM
jitni tareef ki jaaye bas kam hai suresh ji
Hauslon se bhara aapka yeh kalaam bahut
Achha ban parha hai ji....good job ji...

Shad o aabad rahiye...

Shihab
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«Reply #12 on: December 17, 2011, 06:08:05 AM »
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aap injured hoker bhi daad dene aaye hain isliye aapka shukriya dilo jaan se kubool hai.
bahut 2 shukriya ji.
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HAZARON DAAD APKO...KABOOL KARE..
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«Reply #13 on: December 17, 2011, 06:10:21 AM »
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sunil ji pehle to aapko bahut bahut badhai ki aap motm bane hain.
aur humari nazam pasand farmane ka bahut2 shukriya,
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Quote from: sunildehgawani on December 16, 2011, 10:12:23 AM
ati sunder sangwani sahiba ,,aapki yeh nazm confedence ka ek zinda saboot hai ,,,likhte rahein aur muskurate rahein ...rab rakha
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Quote from: mann.mann on December 16, 2011, 11:12:34 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause
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shukriya mann ji.
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