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by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 03, 2010, 02:31:55 PM
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<>*Mod par*<>


Yunhi raahon me chalte hue ek tanha safar me
Mil gaye ho tum hame yahan iss mod par

Ab na jaana kahin bhi tum ee humdum  mere
Mujhe tanha kar ke iss anjane mod par

Nahin jaante hum manzil kahan kahan meri nazar hai
Tum kho na jana mere sath chalkar iss mod par

Akele kahin kho na jayen hum iss kathin safar me
Tum hath thaame rehna mera iss kathin mod par…!!!
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«Reply #1 on: October 03, 2010, 03:19:15 PM »
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Bahaut sunder aur meethi si masoom guzarish ki hai apne iss nazm main..bahaut khoob.. Applause
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«Reply #2 on: October 03, 2010, 07:39:08 PM »
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bahut lambi hai ye safar zindag ki.. kitne saath milte hain kitne bichhad jaate hain... meri ye duwa hai ki jo aapko jeeewan k is mod pe mila hai umra bhar aapke saath rahe... bahut bahut khoobsurti se aapne apne ehsaason ko shabdon ki maala me piroya hai... bahut khoob...

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aaj jis mod pe haath thaama hai maine tumhaara,
thaama hai ye haath maine duniya chhod kar,

bandha huwa tha main samaaj ke bandhano mein,
aaya hoon tumhare paas wo saare bandhan tod kar,

aaj tak kuch maanga nahi tha maine bhagwaan se,
ab maangi hai tumhaari muskaan usse haath jod kar,

kar lo aetbaar tum meri mohabbat pe kuch is tarha,
ki na jaa paayega ye deewaana kahin tumhe chhod kar,

chhut bhi jaaye kahin saath mera is safar me jeewan ke,
naam mera pukaar lena, mil jaunga tumhe agle mod par...
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«Reply #3 on: October 03, 2010, 07:50:11 PM »
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wowwwwwwwwww mastammmmmmmmm masttttttttt reply kapil.......
sach me bht lamba safar hai zindagi kab kaun bichhad jaye aur kaun sath rahe kuch nahinpata hota...jiske sath nahin sochte hum k alag honge usi se hamesha k liye dur ho jate hain aur wo bhi na chahte hue...
bht pyara likha hai tumne ye padhkar dil me kuch umeed jagi hai k kabhi na kabhi sab sahi ho jayega .....

Teri ye mahobbat mujhe khudse chura leti hai
Ye baatein mere dil ko ek sukun ajeeb sa deti hain

Kuch to hai teri saadgi me ee mere sanam
Jo har bar mujhe aur bhi zyada haseen bana deti hai

Yun tera pyaar se kehna k main sath hun tere
Mujhe duniya ki bheed me bhi tujhse gale mila deti hai

Tumhi mera safar tumhi meri manzil ban gaye ho
Har bar meri dil ki dhadkan yehi sadaa deti hai…..!!!
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«Reply #4 on: October 03, 2010, 08:23:00 PM »
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aapne bhi ek dum mast likha hai... khoob sara pyaar aur dher saari ummeedein nazar aa rahi hain isme.. bahut bahut pyaar bhara hai isme... tood good hai ji...

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apne hothon ki muskaan tere hothn pe saja du,
tu kahe to tere liye chaand ki chaandni la du,

sochta hoon kya milega is chand ko us chaandni se,
main to teri chaandi se apna ghar ka chirag jala du,

ek hi tamanna hai is dil me ki tu khush rahe hamesha,
teri khushi ke khaatir tu kahe to khud ko hi mita du,

baag ke har gulaab ko teri muskaan ka intzaar rehta hai,
tu kahe to unhe main aaj teri raahon pe bichha du,

teri ek nazar ke khaatir main aasmaan ko zameen se mila du,
tu jo mil jaaye mujhe main teri khaatir saari duniya bhula du...
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«Reply #5 on: October 03, 2010, 08:36:35 PM »
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Kapil Dost aur Anamika di..Sunder mehfil saja di ap dono ne..!
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«Reply #6 on: October 03, 2010, 09:01:49 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rahim bhai...!!!
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«Reply #7 on: October 04, 2010, 09:18:24 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI      KASAK... DIL KI JI...

BAHUT TANHA THEY SHUKRIYA AAP KA AAPNE SAATH DIYA MUJHKO IS "MOD PAR"
EK WADA DE PHIRSE LAAKE CHOD NA DENA KABHI MUJHKO IS "MOD PAR"......
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«Reply #8 on: October 04, 2010, 10:25:33 AM »
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wah ji wahhh anu ji to mast he hi..sath me kapil jiii or cara ji aap dono ne bhi badhiya reply diya~
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«Reply #9 on: October 04, 2010, 04:10:19 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Sirji...!!!

wah ji wahhh anu ji to mast he hi..sath me kapil jiii or cara ji aap dono ne bhi badhiya reply diya~
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